Reborn as a Mouse, I Charge into the Cultivation World

Tomato has another bull and horse. Generally speaking, there are no poisonous points, and the writing is smooth, but the cool points are somewhat lacking. The author can build more conflicts and emotional pull on the current basis, increase the sense of expectation, and create more cool points, but be sure to remember not to create cool points bluntly, and do not try to reduce your wits. Look forward to the follow-up plot, come on! 🤔

Very well written!!

Chapter 34 Too Holy Mother, one star Virgin Mary, Chapter 47

Demons are demons and they have to get mixed up with people. If the writing is not pure, it seems difficult for people to accept it.

They are all very good. Come on, the author, I wrote them in the early stage. Don't look at mice as small. If the realm is high, when the tribulation comes in groups, they have to turn around and run away, just like insects.

A lot of poison, but overall it's okay