Task Target, Please Don't Come Over. I'm a Straight Man.

First of all, let's make sure that the plot is rich and attractive. The first aspect is understandably very good, and it is relatively novel among period novels. The long-lasting emotions are handled very well. Key comments, the second side, I don't want to dislike it. First of all, I have watched a lot of fast-paced movies. 1V1 and slices are very common. Usually, it is the first world. It is the first time you fall in love and the only attack you meet him is this kind of person who is looking for a lover. Basically, there will be some special signs like birthmarks, taste, roses, and other flowers, you understand? Or kiss something that feels like an electric thing, and then feel the heartbeat again, and then fall in love again. It can be said that the theme of Miao teenagers is very novel. , I personally think that the scene before Wu Yao fell in love with Shou and almost fell in love with him is the most interesting, and the subsequent plot is also not satisfactory. The first drawback is that Shou lured the Gu worm out at that time, but did not directly kill the villain. There were worries about the future, and he was forced to pull for a while, which disgusted me (the result of Shou Wei Gong) In fact, that section can be regarded as a highlight and a perfect ending. If you engage in a little more daily life, Tiantian will be OK), but when Gongshou came to the outside world, the real society, he was kidnapped by the villain, and the blackening value was added abruptly. It can barely be regarded as torture for the sake of the plot. Add a few more chapters, and then what? After finally getting rid of all these miscellaneous people, it turns out that Shou is a very affectionate and pure person, which is good. In order to describe Shou's struggle in the whirlpool and the love that penetrates his bones, the author does not hesitate to hypnotize Shou to deceive himself and others, which is acceptable, but what is the shortcoming? It's just that Shou knew that Gong was his lover in the past life, and he changed his face quickly and accepted it well. Gong must still be worried and worried about gains and losses. Anyway, he didn't handle this point well, and about 1/3 of the plot was a bit confusing, and the writing style dropped a bit, but at least the ending was sweet, and maybe to make up for the previous pull between them, it was faster to confirm that Gong was the past life with his finger. Alas, I didn't feel that all the hardships were over, I just felt that it was the end of the world. It's a bit hard for me to stay up late at night and read novels. The first world was originally very enjoyable for me, but then the second world's plot was interesting and not bad, and the interactions were intriguing. It really stepped on my XP, and then they created a group of inexplicable things for me. No one is perfect, it's human nature, I hope the article will be better [Sending my heart] I don't recommend that you watch it too much. If you are a fast traveler, this is a high-level and medium-level game. Alas, you basically don't need to watch the next few worlds. The setting is interesting. Okay, I will withdraw first. Brothers [grievance]

It's very interesting to watch. The protagonist Chen Mingchuan is handsome and has a good personality. He takes his tasks seriously and treats the person he's tasked with sincerely. In the first world, Gong expressed his love very boldly after realizing his feelings (direct praise!), ["You are very good, Chen Mingchuan, you are very good. If others get to know you, they will definitely like you," Zhuang Ze said: "Just like me."] The plot from Gong's confession to Shou's gradual acceptance of emotions, the transition is natural, reasonable, and the daily life of the two people after they get together is very sweet. At the same time, there are also some foreshadowings related to the system, which are well received. I look forward to the follow-up plot ~

It's nice to read, and it's well written. I just have a suggestion, don't write about abuse for the sake of abuse. I know that you want to express the sense of redemption and the deep love between the protagonists, but don't write the abuse in a deliberate way. For example, the ending of The Strange Neighbor is the above-mentioned kind of abuse for the sake of abuse. It's too deliberate, and the latest one is the ruthless one. The writing of Dao Small World is okay but too cliché. It has a weird feeling, but it is much better than the previous writing style of Da Da Da. However, it is still too deliberate (although it makes me cry). So I hope Da Da Da Da will no longer be so sadistic when expressing redemption. After all, this can easily make an originally good world become bad, such as strange neighbors and other characters. In terms of shaping, what do you say about the protagonists Shou and Gong? I feel that the shaping is good and bad, and it is easy to lose the favor. Please pay attention to the Shou's younger brother in the Republic of China. I don't quite understand what you want to express at the end. It is a bit redundant. To be honest, it is very bad, so please pay attention to the shaping of the character and not to waste the readers' favor. Finally What I want to say the most is Dada [I'm about to cry] I like watching Tiantian's love, please stop abusing it, okay? Isn't Tiantian bad? [I'm about to cry] (The above only represents my personal opinion, if there is any offense, please point out that it will be deleted, thank you for your understanding) Also, thank you for your hard work [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Laugh] Please give me more thank you, it's not enough [Please give me more] [Please give me more] [Please give me more]

Although I just started reading it, the writing is really good. The characters are very independent, flesh and blood, and the characters are not superficial. I can stand out among many old-fashioned fast-traveling articles^^

It's really good to read. I'm very picky about reading books. I basically give up after reading them. Even if it's not good enough, I'll skip reading. But I didn't skip a chapter to finish this book. The characters are well created, the plot is not ridiculous, and it is very close to reality. It really made me understand the sentence "Most novels are fictional, but there are shadows of life". Highly recommended!

I really like Chen Mingchuan's character, he is very normal and not so fancy. After reading several Little Worlds, I discovered that this one is written by the same author as "Straight Man..." And the plot is still very good. I am determined to follow this author's novel.

This is simply the most serious fast-traveling article I've ever read. The plot is not straightforward, the emotions are not instantaneous, and the appearance does not need to be piled up with fancy words. Don't be fooled by the cover, Chen Mingchuan has never been a weak and delicate person. In the first world, Chen Mingchuan is really straight. It is not an ordinary romance novel at all. You can really feel that Chen Mingchuan is indeed a man. Maybe it's because of the first impression. When I look at Chen Mingchuan now, I still think of him as a slightly muscular person with 186cm wide shoulders, narrow waist and slightly white skin. This is the best. Of course, in fact, in addition to the 186 and wide shoulders and narrow waist, Chen Mingchuan's fair skin, clear blood vessels, etc. Described in the article all change with the physical condition of the small world. The first world requires doing heavy work and taking care of others, and of course he cannot be too weak. This is a true two-way redemption story, and he is very favored. It can be said that he is in a leading position in this relationship, and no matter how possessive his partner is, he must obey him. The plot develops on both sides of the story, and the writing is very exciting. I don't agree with the hot reviews that the emotional line is not well written. The emotions are slowly progressing along with the plot. If you want to see a story about the protagonist's incredible appearance, everyone falls in love at first sight without any brains, then don't come to Huo Huo's serious story writing to maliciously give low marks. Other people's evaluations are other people's, and you will know the depth of it only after you experience it yourself. There is no doubt that this is a real double-powerful novel. Except for the fact that the protagonist in the supernatural plane is an ordinary person who cannot cause harm to ghosts and seems useless, in other modern and ancient planes, normal us Chen Mingchuan will never hide behind and let others protect him as long as he has identity and force. What I mean by "double strength" refers to force on the one hand and psychology on the other. Chen Mingchuan is very strong, tough and gentle mentally. The protagonist, Gong, seems to have a high status with force but is actually as fragile as a child. It can be said that he is completely blank in terms of emotions. He gradually became stronger through the guidance of Chen Mingchuan step by step. This strength is only possible because of Chen Mingchuan's survival. Once Chen Mingchuan dies, he will naturally not be able to survive. This article is really the best one I have read in the past 25 years. It is a love between a few normal people. There is no deception, no blood, and no nonsensical plot. You must always be happy. I successfully finished reading it in three days... I didn't read any other novels in the middle of reading this, which is quite rare. Why is it so good! The first five worlds and the last world are the most beautiful. The worlds after the Wuqingdao feel a bit downhill... The writing is not very heart-warming, and the amount of plot is not large. I feel a little bored watching it... But luckily I persevered. Also, the author really likes the suspense genre. The few modern worlds are basically all supernatural and horror. I feel a little tired of aesthetics. The best supernatural writing is the third world and the last world. Personally, I quite like the author's writing style, and I just love this kind of plain and flowing emotion.

The emotions are very delicate and the characters are well created. I like Shuangxue and Tianhei Don't Go Out the most! Mainly because of long-term love (and love from the depths of the soul in multiple worlds), the plot is very fast, not bad, and it cured my book shortage! ! Xql has always been happy! ! Of course, not everyone will like it, but I quite like it anyway (after all, I am not a super professional novelist, so there will always be flaws). The writing is also very good! Looking forward to the next plot! ! (Has read half of it) Finally finished reading it! ! I feel that the later world is more focused on plot description. The sweet daily life of xql is relatively less, but it is still very interesting. I really like the world of the Republic of China. It is very interesting! It's a pity that there is no extra story Recommended! ! [Love][love] Follow-up review: I've watched it many times, it's really good... Wow Why is it so beautiful? I really like Xiao Ming. Then I really like Tongshuangxue. I really like Nianxia (I have watched this world five times). Then I don't go out until dark. I also like this kind of feeling. Every time I see the world of cultivating immortals, it hurts. Ahhhhh, I am going crazy because of my book shortage.

I just finished reading the first world. It is really well written, with straightforward language and delicate emotions. There are no gorgeous words, but the story written is very touching. Super sweet! Love to watch [admire] I feel like the second world is so bad. It's so much worse than the first world. I've only read Chapter 22 of the second world. I can't stand the plot. I feel like I'm getting high blood pressure [Start][Start][Start] The first world is really good. I have been listening to the second world in full, and it is not very attractive. I'll take another look. If things get better by then, I'll change the score.

Many world settings and stories are very novel, the writing is smooth, and the writing style is also good. This writing style is indeed rare in Tomato and kept attracting me to read. Unfortunately, the pace is getting faster and faster. I really like the first world❗️ This kind of delicate emotional changes makes the protagonist's image more three-dimensional. But as the world grows, it feels like the emotional lines between the protagonists are like doing tasks. Although the length of the world is about the same, in the later worlds, it feels like it is self-defeating and destroys the sense of delicacy. In the fast travel novel, there are too many plot events in one world. If you want to maintain the same length, it will encroach on the space of other content, causing the impression to be inferior to the beginning. But actually I really really like this article. I hope the author can balance the proportion of plot and emotional lines. Oh my god, I finished watching A World again and found that the progress is even faster. Relying on the plot alone to promote the emotional line feels dry. A lot of content is skipped over and over again, just like the part where Neil died for the first time in "He is a Dragon". The pace is too fast. It gives people the feeling of a history book recorded by an official. I can't give up but I have no desire to continue reading.

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This novel is very interesting. It is different from other fast-travel novels. After all the events in this novel are over, some plots of their ordinary life together will be described. From those words, I could feel that they lived a happy life, which made me feel warm in my heart throughout the whole process. After those things ended, I said a sentence, they lived a happy life together, and it was good. This sentence summarized their future life, which made me feel that their happiness was too fake. So many vigorous and vigorous life, happy life, but I did not see it, so I felt very disappointed. I wanted to see them, those sweet interactions in ordinary days, this novel is very good, the score is 9.4, I feel that it is low. I suggest the author to go through 1,000 photos of this article without ending it

The writing is great, baby. The two protagonists are very individual, and the characterization is very three-dimensional and complete. The themes of each small world really touched me, and the storyline is also explained step by step. I like it (the teacher is really awesome if he can persist in being more perseverant every day. I love you so much) Maybe the teacher wants to try to open a readership group?

I look forward to it every day. I like Chen Mingchuan [like] and I think the author must be a man who has a very upright outlook on life and is very principled and sticks to himself. I feel that I have learned a lot from Chen Mingchuan in the book! Thanks to the author [love] [love] grateful to meet [salute] [KISS]

The first world can be said to be the world with the most complete characters of the two male protagonists, and the logic of doing things is also the most reasonable. The performance of the protagonist Shou in the subsequent small world is not so outstanding, especially since Shou has been a policeman and a general, and the memories of each life are completely retained. However, sometimes he behaves like a rookie, without that sense of maturity and stability at all, especially sometimes he will ask some naive questions. He does not look like a person who has lived several lifetimes, and there is a huge sense of gap. The protagonist Gong is quite charming, and his character design is different in each world. Because he is a slice, he falls in love faster and deeper as he goes to the later small worlds. The author's plot settings for each small world are very novel and will not make people feel boring. However, when reading the whole book, I feel that the author is very partial to horror elements, and more than half of them are supernatural elements. Finally, the author's writing style is relatively stable. There are no major flaws in the whole book except for the occasional personality problem with the protagonist. The setting is quite novel and you can read it.

How can I put it? Da Da's writing style is really good, sweet, but not too arrogant. There is just a little bit of sourness in the knife part. Da Da writes the feeling of peace and quiet in the years. The first aspect is really loveable, so loving, not so vigorous. It is often the kind that is closer to real life that touches people's hearts. After reading the first aspect, I feel really warm [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

It's very good to watch. Although the plot is a bit simple and the transition is a bit stiff, it's still good to read as a short story before going to bed. The relationship between the two is very sweet. I like the non-feminine Shou (hate the long text describing the beauty of the Shou). The plot is novel [laughing]

It's super good-looking, and there's no bloody plot, everything happens naturally. The protagonist will not have some inexplicable misunderstandings, where he will be sad alone, close the door in his heart, cover his ears, and ignore the other party's explanation

Now that I have finished reading Three Worlds, I can't help but rate it. The author's writing is really wonderful, the writing is smooth, the content is rich, and the character of the protagonist is also very good, not silly at all. Overall, I like it very much and will definitely follow the author [Blow Kiss][Flow Kiss]

The protagonist Ogawa has a gentle and strong character, which is well portrayed. He is not weak and dependent on her husband, but often fights side by side with her husband. I think it is a type that everyone can easily like, mainly because I personally like this kind of character haha, like a clear spring flowing slowly, gradually getting into people's hearts, and like the moonlight, bright and beautiful, gentle and powerful. There are not a lot of inexplicable misunderstandings and there are no mouths. It is very comfortable to watch, and the relationship development is also very smooth. They are together if they like each other, which is very good!! Also, many of the worlds written by the author are Ogawa Bi Gong's age, and they are a bit developed. If you like this type, read it carefully!! It seems that there is only one world that is BE. I personally like BE, so it is quite enjoyable to watch haha. Anyway, I don't like the kind of hard HE. If the story development is suitable for BE, BE is also very delicious! Xiaobao Yiqing!

1. The novel is generally very good... Compared to some of the fast-traveling novels I have read before, the subject matter is very novel. 2. Moreover, Chen Mingchuan is a very distinct character. The overall feeling given to me is that he seems to be a real person in real life. At the beginning, maybe Chen Mingchuan approached the protagonist just for the task. But after the two of them confirmed their relationship, their relationship gradually deepened and changed, and their bond with each other also deepened. Gradually, Chen Mingchuan no longer approached the protagonist Gong for the mission, but truly loved and considered the protagonist Gong. The protagonist Gong was also very reluctant to let Chen Mingchuan get hurt, and loved Chen Mingchuan very much. To sum up, the two of them just rushed to each other... I like it very much. Especially the Miao teenagers and the strange neighbors touched me very much, Third, after the two of them get together, their ordinary life is also very attractive, although there is no too close interaction. But it can also be seen from some of their actions that they are very much in love... Let me talk about my expectations. I hope the author can work harder in the future. I really want to see their love continue. I can add ups and downs of the plot in the future. I wish the author's novels will become popular [shy][shy]

It's super good-looking. The characters of both characters are very likable and not offensive at all. The content is just right and you won't get bored reading it. It's also quite novel. Unlike many fast-traveling stories that are all the same, you can just change the names of the characters. Great support The first few worlds are really good, but the later ones are almost worn out.

I have been following this novel when it was serialized. There are 12 unit stories in total. Each story is well written and the characters are three-dimensional. When reading it, readers can feel that this is a flesh-and-blood person, not just a paper person. To be honest, peeking into their lives from the perspective of the protagonist, it suddenly ended, and I felt empty in my heart. But I know that it is just us who see your life end, not you. I believe you will live happily in one dimension and be happy forever. Goodbye!

Overall, there aren't many striking points in the writing. What about the world view? I feel that the identity of the "main god" who explained the system and attack at the end was a bit hasty and a bit stiff. Also, starting from the third volume, I feel that the author is a little unable to write. Maybe there is not as much inspiration as before. I feel that the content is not as rich and full as the first two volumes. I can say no (beat). Some settings are relatively similar, but it does not rule out that the author likes these settings. Personally, I prefer the first three worlds and the first ancient text "Tongshuangxue". My favorite is still the white moonlight level in the first world. Zhuang Ze is so cute at the beginning (being beaten). I like this contrast better. Kawah 1 is also 1, okay hehe. The kind that have both strong shou and attack calculations. The shou has real strength and does not inherit all the power of the original body. It should be the beautiful gong and handsome shou. And the attack will be self-defeating after the attack, so the emotional line is not abusive. Except for the ruthless path, which is B (spoiler below). I didn't read this one because it felt a bit awkward. It has to be ruthless and meaningless, but there is a relationship between the two of them, which is disconnected (? I'm not using the right word) and it's not very comfortable (personal feeling) Everything else is fine. It's more popular with both human and foreign elements, hehe. I also like this book about a real person. It fits my fantasies about Gong Shou's voice. It's just that in some small worlds, the voice changes when I go up. It feels weird. The general summary is that it can be seen that there are not many flaws and surprises. None 🕳️ Shuangqiang Shuangjie can be a shareholder if you don't have too many requirements for writing.

This is the first time I read a book that has just been released and the ratings haven't risen very high yet. It's really very good-looking, there's no love at first sight, and the relationship between the protagonists is really super sweet (//∇//). This book can definitely reach over 9 points. The plot is neither short nor long, just right. It's very interesting.

Woohoo, I read this book from Chen Ye's book to the end now. The author's writing style has been very stable. The protagonist has never had a bad character, and there is no overly feminine description. It makes people feel that Chen Mingchuan has always been Chen Mingchuan. He has his own ideas and concerns, and will not blindly give up on tasks because of love. He is emotionally stable, reliable, and the relationship he meets is also stable and happy. My overall feeling about this book It's just happy, bland, the plot doesn't drag out, the villain goes offline when he should, and there's no particularly bloody plot. Finally, the author can't write more about the sweet relationship between the young couple, because I feel that the next few worlds are a bit too plot-oriented. ! ! !

It looks so good. The first small world is so well written that I couldn't get out of it even after being kicked into a hole. It feels like the protagonist has a more mature tone at the beginning. Then, I was pampered more and more after that? It has plot and sweetness, but it is very interesting to watch. I would like to secretly recommend it. I think World 3 is particularly beautiful, not inferior to the first world [shy]

The writing is very good, and the plot is novel. This is a big book, so I recommend reading it to everyone who wants to read it. I have finished reading it, and it has a five-star rating in my heart. Except for the overall length, it is perfect. I just couldn't read enough and felt it was too short, so I read all the author's fast-traveling stories. One word! I hope that the overall length can be longer in the future.

I have watched several worlds. Overall, they are very attractive and novel. The story is very good. The relatively bland narrative style and occasionally slightly abrupt plots are acceptable... I really think the above problems are not big. I think it is the protagonist's charming personality. Finally, he is not weak, weak and beautiful. I can't stand it anymore! ! ! Because I like the protagonist of this book type, I can get it, and the first story is particularly exciting. I didn't like this kind of background, and I was kicked in the door. The writing style is remarkable, and the emotions are more delicate. As you look at it, surprising sentences will suddenly appear. It is quite good, and it is difficult for everyone to agree. However, I am really happy to discuss the barrage with some book friends who understand me. I am excited about the emotional development and teasing the male protagonist's thoughts!

It's really good to read. The content of each story is very eye-catching. I support the author greatly. Anyway, it's indescribably good-looking. It gives me a different feeling from other fast-traveling novels. Anyway, it's very good-looking, and the rice is very fragrant and sweet, which makes my dopamine start to spin.