The Journey of Redemption Begins with a Slave Girl

It's the first time I've seen Butter's second creation, and I'm a little excited [laughs evilly]

Finally, there are no particularly tacky novels. The method of putting on shoes is very new, but there are no fancy words to rape my brain. Some books can really press the reader's brain to the ground and rub it. You can see that the author really chooses carefully. I hope it will not become as tacky as popular novels.

Come on, brother who wrote about the emperor's uncle, this is my last praise, please accept it now

It is precisely because life has limits that people fear death and suffer, resulting in sadness and miss. In order to prevent new sadness and miss from happening, just spend all your time in happiness. This is the eternal life that will never be extinguished. Even if sadness and miss occur, as long as you can overcome it and leave a better future to the next generation. This is the eternal life that will never be extinguished.

It is not without reason that the work is rated 7.1. Although the author tried his best to describe the redemption of his character who traveled into the butter world, he used too much force and introduced a new villain "Wingless Bird" in the second world, which detonated the biggest poisonous point since the time travel. The storyline of the protagonist fighting the villain while saving the female character cannot even be described as cliché. In addition, the protagonist cannot correctly understand his own emotions. The point of "a gentleman's deeds are not his heart" actually runs through the main line. All in all, the theme of the work is excellent, the writing is excellent, and the story plot is quick to pass.

Human nature is just the opposite, but it is not the case. I don't think so. It is expected. I would like to hear the details. It is true. It is true. It is true that soldiers are valuable and quick. The opposite is not true. It is reasonable and reasonable. It does not have to be like this. I disagree. Why do you say this? This is the fact. This is true. How to say it, think twice before acting, listen attentively, never tire of listening, hear something you have never heard before, full of interesting things, that's great, then let me ask you, let me tell you, listen to it, the secret of heaven is not revealed, how can it be so, the law of heaven is difficult to tolerate, people and gods are angry, this statement is wrong, it is a big reversal, it should be like this

The writing style may not be particularly good, but your jokes just make up for this shortcoming, and there are no particularly obvious poisonous points. It's not satisfactory, but that's it.

Provincial flow: dungeon flow, player flow, love line and story line parallel, (going home) currently does not have much to do with plot advancement. Okay, it doesn't feel as abrupt as reading some novels. Although the author feels that the first volume has some flaws, I think the first volume is the most life-like part. But there are other players and being able to enter the protagonist's copy is a bit awkward. Unexpected, but cliche, usually you can see what will happen later in the plot written like this.

The viewing experience is good, and I, a guy who likes the new but hates the old, enjoyed watching it. The character creation is also good. Although the plot is cliché, it also has unexpected turning points and its own characteristics. The subject matter is also a plus! Strength!

The real art is never about answers, but about asking questions. This work is like a finely crafted purple clay pot. The body of the pot is carved with various aspects of the world, but the spout always maintains a silent arc. What it allows us to see is not the director's preset answer, but the swaying, yet-to-be-formed fire in everyone's heart (don't ask, I'm just talking nonsense)

This is the first time I've seen Xiao hope's fan fiction. I'd like to support it with five stars.

"Did you know? There is a continent called Fenn in this world. There is the Kingdom of Fenn on the continent. There is a royal family of Fenn in the kingdom, and a group of Fenn people in the royal family."

Oops, not bad (≧∇≦*), the plot is big, the rich plot and the monologue technique make the players resonate with the game characters. It looks like a knife but not a knife, and there is no sense of abruptness. It feels good [smile]~

That's good, but have you considered writing about it? Happy room for two. Sister Nan

Four stars, there is still a lot of room for improvement, the subject matter is good, but the traveler from other worlds in Chapter 25 of Wingless Bird is really a bit abrupt.

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I'll keep it simple, I hope you can explain it to me, what do you think? You should be happy. (Drink black tea)

I haven't read much, maybe forty or fifty chapters, but the descriptions of the heroines are really good. The author can actually post a fan group with Chinese capital letters at the end of each chapter to give the author comments or communicate with everyone. @Pick up pieces of leaves

It's awesome, the plot has ups and downs, the characters are very full, there's a rare time travel, and there's butter But the author's updates are too slow, and it's not enough to read. Can the author suddenly update Chapter 300 and scare me to death?

It's very interesting. Would you consider writing about Monica?

"Come, author, read aloud with me: "I hereby promise all readers that from today on, I will not travel, get sick, or become addicted to literature. I will strictly exercise self-discipline, work hard, and enjoy writing novels. I will become steel after being tempered a hundred times. I will be worthy of my readers, my youth, and my future." I will turn into a pencil in the night, a guard on the giant city of novels, and I will voluntarily dedicate my life to this, every night... [Adoration] [Adoration] [Sending Hearts]"

Personally, I feel pretty good seeing Xiaomi Tower here. Although the first time was a little unfamiliar, it successfully turned on the player's emotional switch. Sylvie had a cruel ending and missed you. The second time was pure regret. You abandoned a person who truly loved you, but the emotional line is still okay. I hope this third time will not disappoint the readers. Author.

You know, you can't give five stars to prevent the author from not updating [laughter]

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good

At present, the author's subjective emotions outside of the plot of the game world account for a large part, and some of them are more theatrical and fun-loving. The emotional portrayal of the heroine is better and the logic is reasonable. The system in the front is disgusting, but the problems with the system in the later period are also handled quite reasonably. Overall, it is worth reading carefully and can also broaden readers' knowledge. Doge

Author! ! ! Can you write Miss Saya for help? This is the most unforgettable game for me so far [cry][cry][cry]

Not bad, but I don't know if I will go back to the previous world.

@ Pick up pieces of leaves is very good, but will the female protagonists be able to appear and come back in the future? Or can it only be said that it can only appear as a memory (sad)

It's quite interesting. I just discovered this treasure now. Great support to the author.

The author refused to give it five stars, so I gave it five stars [laughing evilly] It's not easy to come across such a peerless book, I must give it a high score [Like]