[Two male protagonists, the original book is attacked by changes, Su Yuan x Ji Liang]
[The author Gaga likes to dig holes]
Ji Liang loses his memory and travels into the book, becoming the third senior brother of the main character Shou in the original book.
The ending of the original book is that he died picking thousand-year-old snow lotus for his master.
But when he was about to die, he was bound to the system that had been waiting for him for a long time.
He must keep Su Yuan away from the plot of the original book
Only then can he go home
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After Su Yu'an entered the seat of Master Fuyun,
Memories from the previous life appeared
Unexpectedly discovered that the senior brother who was originally dead is still alive and well in the world
(Note: All the people in the original book are sick and have incorrect outlook on life. Su Yuan is also sick.)
Cultivation stage
Refining Qi, Building Foundation, Golden Pill, Nascent Soul, Transforming God, Mahayana
Reader comments
Maybe it's my destiny to fall in love with serials. After staying up late to finish them, no matter how the author writes the plot later, I don't think I will be surprised. It's really a twist, a twist, and a twist. With this setting and a bunch of buffs on my body, I can't imagine how cool it would be. It's so beautiful😌 Author, you must not run away! Nice update! But from the beginning, he felt that the man was his father, but he guessed it right. It feels like there is more to the identity of the protagonist, because it feels like his system is not very simple. Maybe he was also the protagonist originally. So pretty! Please give the author 10 more words to scare us to death [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]
I think it looks great, but some people may be more concerned about the subtle points in it. First of all, there is no possibility of whitewashing the three original attackers. I can't accept the fast running of three people.
Su Yu'an (1) and Ji Liang (0) are both double cleansers, really
There are many reversals, it's really surprising, it's my favorite taste
It's been a long time since I've seen this kind of plot that is layered one after another, with twists and turns. I was stunned one after another when I watched it. I thought it was a story about rebirth and redemption. () The character creation is very interesting and unique. The villain is not made into a face. I look forward to the follow-up [Sending Hearts]
How to say it? It's very good-looking, and very organized. It's different from many fairy tales. The subject matter is also very novel. It has a feeling of Mission: Impossible. It reverses and reverses and reverses again, and it gives me an understanding of the current world again and again. After reading a lot of mindless articles, I found it very awesome [Adoration] [Adoration] But because it may have just been released, its rating is not high. In fact, I think the ending is a bit half-B. E, because in his previous era, everyone was not perfect, but after the protagonist fell asleep, everyone reincarnated from life to life, and finally came together and restored their memories. In fact, this is also a good ending, because in their original world, I felt that they would not be able to get together. In fact, I was still very worried at the time, but seeing this ending, I was actually very relieved. The character design is also very attractive. Anyway, it made me happy. Each character is actually very delicate. Each character has his own story experience to create his character. There are constant foreshadowings and filling in holes to make the plot very solid and unbroken. [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] Anyway, I enjoy watching it. Many couples in CP have both men and women.
And he seems to have reflected many of the current social problems.
These are all personal, if you don't like it don't comment
2026 No. 2 No. 18 23:07
Emmmm, actually it's okay overall. The twists and turns of the plot are really eye-catching. I just don't know why, but I have a very sloppy feeling. I feel like their story shouldn't end so quickly.
They were all tragic, and I felt so distressed. I actually hated them when I didn't know the truth, but after reading it, I realized that it was not easy for everyone. So what if I looked at it from a God's perspective? I couldn't really understand their situation at that time. Now that I think about it, some of the words are right. Unless you walk in their shoes, don't judge easily. You don't know if you would be like him if it were you.
They are all good babies, very beautiful. If you are interested, I recommend you to check them out.
By the count, this is the 7th book I have read. This book has many twists and turns, and the rhythm is very suitable, which made me feel that it was just right when I read it. Regardless of whether it is the first life or several lives, the protagonists will fall in love, but the final ending is very tragic. Especially when you see that Ji Liang is the only one left in the world of cultivation in the finale, it is really empathetic.
But it seems that the story of Lu Xingye and Xie Yungui is not included in the book. Or is it that I didn't see it?
That's at the end! I wish Su Yuan and Ji Liang 99! [Shy]
Thank you to the author for your comments and clearing up my doubts. Now my only regret about this book is over! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
At the end of this comment, I wish all deputy CP99s, and once again wish the main CP, and thank the author for giving them fresh life. I wish them to start a new life in their world! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
This novel is so great. At first, you might not be able to read it because of the typos and the treatment of the protagonist. But as you read on, you will find that the author is very good at writing grand narratives. You can already see the clues from the character creation at the beginning. The whole narrative is very stable. All the foreshadowing in the front is filled in. Basically, there is no strange point that is a logical error. The truth is all revealed later. It is really refreshing to see the end. I would have thought it was too fast after reading Chapter 11, right? But after truly understanding the whole story, I just feel that this kind of life is hard-won for the protagonist. The author's writing is very profound. I highly recommend it.
Finished reading~
Xiao Ji and Xiao Su are both very good, and they both have good feelings for each other. Well, maybe because I am not the kind of person who can control and attack, so I think their attitude towards each other at the beginning is very reasonable (Xiao Ji has a high impression of Xiao Su from the beginning, which is also a foreshadowing), and Xiao Su didn't do anything too extreme (his part The memory is really terrible, so I don't trust people). Some people commented that Xiao Su is unworthy. I don't think he is unworthy. No matter how dark his thoughts are, he will eventually help him (and many of the enemies they encounter are directed at Xiao Ji himself, not because of Xiao Su). Is this considered a strong attack and a weak attack? Xiao Su's force value has never been very high (although the plot is not about fighting), in short, don't scold Xiao Su, they are both really miserable [face covering] Shouldn't you scold those who beat Xiao Ji and Xiao Su (but don't scold some for now, there are quite a lot of twists and turns)
Because of my background in cultivating immortals at the beginning, I prefer cultivators who can live together for a long time. Although the ending is a happy life, it is a bit difficult for me personally.
It's beautiful. It's the first time I've read this kind of article. There are so many pitfalls in it and it's so novel! Duan Yuan was really a bit nervous when he died later, even though he was the same person as Yu An! The ones about Demon Sect and Demon Realm are really too cute. I'll read the author's second book next week. I'm looking forward to it!
Ouch! Why is there only one book? The author is asking for a new article! Love to watch!
This novel is super beautiful, the characters are well created, there is no OOC, and the emotional line is smooth and flowing. After all, there are memories of past lives. It is a bit sadistic. The writing is also very good. The plot is also very popular. The deputy CP is Lily, and I really like this pair.
Finished the chase in one day. The repair is very good and complete. In group portraits, every supporting character is an essential and important partner. The reversal and plot are very interesting, and the emotional line and the main plot development coexist. Don't abandon the article because of the frustrating experience at the beginning. After reading it, I feel a bit empty and uncomfortable. The ending may be a bit rushed, but it's still acceptable.
The character design of the protagonist really impressed me, but unfortunately there are too few pictures. Big cheers for the author (˵¯͒¯͒˵)
It's good-looking, quite good-looking, very good-looking. Although it's a pity that everyone dies in the ending, but fortunately everyone reunites in another world in the extra chapter. It's really good. Every character is well portrayed. Whether it's good or bad, they all have their own obsessions, and they really fight for their obsessions to the end. With this kind of perseverance, everyone will succeed in whatever they do!
I announce that Sister Nan Xinyue won the MVP, the only one who achieved what she wanted in the ending, and I really didn't guess that she was not a character in the book, it's so awesome [Like]
It's so beautiful that words can't describe it.
Suddenly I realized that I didn't write a book review for the teacher! To make up for the teacher, the teacher's writing is so beautiful! I'm really looking forward to the follow-up story. I'm curious about Ji Liang's identity. Although some of it has been revealed, wow, Yu An can't leave Ji Liang far away (pointing)
I probably read more than 40 chapters⌯'ᵕ'⌯The plot is very good and novel, and the story line is smooth.
The protagonist's identity should be a demon clan or something, right?
But the character design is a bit confusing to me, so I can't stand it anymore. I'm in control and despair Σ(*゚д゚ノ)ノ
I feel a little conflicted in some parts, but it's still OK.
Awesome, unexpected ending, worth watching. I personally like that little girl a lot, and I plan to try to draw a fanfic for her.
Super beautiful, highly recommended
My feeling is that it feels good, but the back part is not OC, it is a bit sadistic, and the writing style is also quite good [shy]
Unexpected and reasonable. After reading it, I felt disappointed~~~
Good looking, like, like, like, like
I still really want to know Ji Liang's height [crying] I always think of him as a shota, he's so cute
Such a beautiful article, others should read it to me
It's good to watch, the plot is not cliché and novel, and there are many twists and turns
It's very, very interesting. The plot is not a cliche plot with an assembly line. The previous life of the two people is also very interesting.
It's really beautiful! ! ! I don't know why the rating is so low [Thoughts]
I think it's quite nice. Why are there so few people?
They are all little bitter gourds... The ending is unsettling
It's great to watch [Adoration]. The plot is novel and I like the character of Shou. The author must update 10,000 words a day~~~~~
WC is so awesome, there are so many foreshadowings, go check it out!
Maybe it's my destiny to fall in love with serials. After staying up late to finish them, no matter how the author writes the plot later, I don't think I will be surprised. It's really a twist, a twist, and a twist. With this setting and a bunch of buffs on my body, I can't imagine how cool it would be. It's so beautiful😌 Author, you must not run away! Nice update! But from the beginning, he felt that the man was his father, but he guessed it right. It feels like there is more to the identity of the protagonist, because it feels like his system is not very simple. Maybe he was also the protagonist originally. So pretty! Please give the author 10 more words to scare us to death [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]
I think it looks great, but some people may be more concerned about the subtle points in it. First of all, there is no possibility of whitewashing the three original attackers. I can't accept the fast running of three people. Su Yu'an (1) and Ji Liang (0) are both double cleansers, really There are many reversals, it's really surprising, it's my favorite taste
It's been a long time since I've seen this kind of plot that is layered one after another, with twists and turns. I was stunned one after another when I watched it. I thought it was a story about rebirth and redemption. () The character creation is very interesting and unique. The villain is not made into a face. I look forward to the follow-up [Sending Hearts]
How to say it? It's very good-looking, and very organized. It's different from many fairy tales. The subject matter is also very novel. It has a feeling of Mission: Impossible. It reverses and reverses and reverses again, and it gives me an understanding of the current world again and again. After reading a lot of mindless articles, I found it very awesome [Adoration] [Adoration] But because it may have just been released, its rating is not high. In fact, I think the ending is a bit half-B. E, because in his previous era, everyone was not perfect, but after the protagonist fell asleep, everyone reincarnated from life to life, and finally came together and restored their memories. In fact, this is also a good ending, because in their original world, I felt that they would not be able to get together. In fact, I was still very worried at the time, but seeing this ending, I was actually very relieved. The character design is also very attractive. Anyway, it made me happy. Each character is actually very delicate. Each character has his own story experience to create his character. There are constant foreshadowings and filling in holes to make the plot very solid and unbroken. [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] Anyway, I enjoy watching it. Many couples in CP have both men and women. And he seems to have reflected many of the current social problems. These are all personal, if you don't like it don't comment 2026 No. 2 No. 18 23:07
Emmmm, actually it's okay overall. The twists and turns of the plot are really eye-catching. I just don't know why, but I have a very sloppy feeling. I feel like their story shouldn't end so quickly. They were all tragic, and I felt so distressed. I actually hated them when I didn't know the truth, but after reading it, I realized that it was not easy for everyone. So what if I looked at it from a God's perspective? I couldn't really understand their situation at that time. Now that I think about it, some of the words are right. Unless you walk in their shoes, don't judge easily. You don't know if you would be like him if it were you. They are all good babies, very beautiful. If you are interested, I recommend you to check them out.
By the count, this is the 7th book I have read. This book has many twists and turns, and the rhythm is very suitable, which made me feel that it was just right when I read it. Regardless of whether it is the first life or several lives, the protagonists will fall in love, but the final ending is very tragic. Especially when you see that Ji Liang is the only one left in the world of cultivation in the finale, it is really empathetic. But it seems that the story of Lu Xingye and Xie Yungui is not included in the book. Or is it that I didn't see it? That's at the end! I wish Su Yuan and Ji Liang 99! [Shy] Thank you to the author for your comments and clearing up my doubts. Now my only regret about this book is over! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] At the end of this comment, I wish all deputy CP99s, and once again wish the main CP, and thank the author for giving them fresh life. I wish them to start a new life in their world! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
This novel is so great. At first, you might not be able to read it because of the typos and the treatment of the protagonist. But as you read on, you will find that the author is very good at writing grand narratives. You can already see the clues from the character creation at the beginning. The whole narrative is very stable. All the foreshadowing in the front is filled in. Basically, there is no strange point that is a logical error. The truth is all revealed later. It is really refreshing to see the end. I would have thought it was too fast after reading Chapter 11, right? But after truly understanding the whole story, I just feel that this kind of life is hard-won for the protagonist. The author's writing is very profound. I highly recommend it.
Finished reading~ Xiao Ji and Xiao Su are both very good, and they both have good feelings for each other. Well, maybe because I am not the kind of person who can control and attack, so I think their attitude towards each other at the beginning is very reasonable (Xiao Ji has a high impression of Xiao Su from the beginning, which is also a foreshadowing), and Xiao Su didn't do anything too extreme (his part The memory is really terrible, so I don't trust people). Some people commented that Xiao Su is unworthy. I don't think he is unworthy. No matter how dark his thoughts are, he will eventually help him (and many of the enemies they encounter are directed at Xiao Ji himself, not because of Xiao Su). Is this considered a strong attack and a weak attack? Xiao Su's force value has never been very high (although the plot is not about fighting), in short, don't scold Xiao Su, they are both really miserable [face covering] Shouldn't you scold those who beat Xiao Ji and Xiao Su (but don't scold some for now, there are quite a lot of twists and turns) Because of my background in cultivating immortals at the beginning, I prefer cultivators who can live together for a long time. Although the ending is a happy life, it is a bit difficult for me personally.
It's beautiful. It's the first time I've read this kind of article. There are so many pitfalls in it and it's so novel! Duan Yuan was really a bit nervous when he died later, even though he was the same person as Yu An! The ones about Demon Sect and Demon Realm are really too cute. I'll read the author's second book next week. I'm looking forward to it! Ouch! Why is there only one book? The author is asking for a new article! Love to watch!
This novel is super beautiful, the characters are well created, there is no OOC, and the emotional line is smooth and flowing. After all, there are memories of past lives. It is a bit sadistic. The writing is also very good. The plot is also very popular. The deputy CP is Lily, and I really like this pair.
Finished the chase in one day. The repair is very good and complete. In group portraits, every supporting character is an essential and important partner. The reversal and plot are very interesting, and the emotional line and the main plot development coexist. Don't abandon the article because of the frustrating experience at the beginning. After reading it, I feel a bit empty and uncomfortable. The ending may be a bit rushed, but it's still acceptable.
The character design of the protagonist really impressed me, but unfortunately there are too few pictures. Big cheers for the author (˵¯͒¯͒˵)
It's good-looking, quite good-looking, very good-looking. Although it's a pity that everyone dies in the ending, but fortunately everyone reunites in another world in the extra chapter. It's really good. Every character is well portrayed. Whether it's good or bad, they all have their own obsessions, and they really fight for their obsessions to the end. With this kind of perseverance, everyone will succeed in whatever they do! I announce that Sister Nan Xinyue won the MVP, the only one who achieved what she wanted in the ending, and I really didn't guess that she was not a character in the book, it's so awesome [Like]
It's so beautiful that words can't describe it.
Suddenly I realized that I didn't write a book review for the teacher! To make up for the teacher, the teacher's writing is so beautiful! I'm really looking forward to the follow-up story. I'm curious about Ji Liang's identity. Although some of it has been revealed, wow, Yu An can't leave Ji Liang far away (pointing)
I probably read more than 40 chapters⌯'ᵕ'⌯The plot is very good and novel, and the story line is smooth. The protagonist's identity should be a demon clan or something, right? But the character design is a bit confusing to me, so I can't stand it anymore. I'm in control and despair Σ(*゚д゚ノ)ノ
I feel a little conflicted in some parts, but it's still OK.
Awesome, unexpected ending, worth watching. I personally like that little girl a lot, and I plan to try to draw a fanfic for her.
Super beautiful, highly recommended
My feeling is that it feels good, but the back part is not OC, it is a bit sadistic, and the writing style is also quite good [shy]
Unexpected and reasonable. After reading it, I felt disappointed~~~ Good looking, like, like, like, like
I still really want to know Ji Liang's height [crying] I always think of him as a shota, he's so cute
Such a beautiful article, others should read it to me
It's good to watch, the plot is not cliché and novel, and there are many twists and turns
It's very, very interesting. The plot is not a cliche plot with an assembly line. The previous life of the two people is also very interesting.
It's really beautiful! ! ! I don't know why the rating is so low [Thoughts]
I think it's quite nice. Why are there so few people?
They are all little bitter gourds... The ending is unsettling
It's great to watch [Adoration]. The plot is novel and I like the character of Shou. The author must update 10,000 words a day~~~~~
WC is so awesome, there are so many foreshadowings, go check it out!