Black Monkey at the Beginning: My Beast Control Wants to Improve Too Much

I have been reading this book for a while and also read everyone's comments. Here I will make the following analysis: Protagonist: From the performance of the protagonist in the current article, we can see some of the protagonist's past experiences. ①Character: From the protagonist's vigilance and extreme distrust of people other than himself and his persistence in improving his own strength, it can be seen that the protagonist must have suffered bullying and isolation. ②Identity: From the system's name for the protagonist and some other details, we know that the protagonist's identity is the Exterminator (I remember it seems to be), a person who protects his own civilization from being destroyed. ③General environment: From the explanation and details of the background, we can see that the decay of human civilization is in contrast to the identity of the protagonist. (To be continued another day)

The birth of Black Wukong has succeeded in gaining popularity, but it is indeed well written. The people of the lower class resist the upper-class rule, and the benefits are good. And this system is relatively new, so I suggest that Black Wukong's company communicate with this second creation, otherwise the book will become popular and may lead to lawsuits.

The writing is quite good, at least in my opinion there is not much of a problem, but the foreshadowing of the female characters who have precognitive dreams must be filled in, otherwise it will definitely be unfinished. I also hope that the characters who have premonitions and dreams interact more with the protagonist. I read a lot of other book reviews and said that the villain is poorly written, and that the protagonist is too stupid for not listening to the system. Bad villain writing is a common problem in most good novels. Just slowly correct it and learn from the experience of other excellent novels. As for the protagonist who is arrogant and thinks that his personal power is greater than his ability to control beasts and refuses to listen to the system, I think there is nothing wrong with the writing. No one is perfect. Everyone has shortcomings. Everyone has shortcomings. Individuals will develop different personalities based on their own growth environment and growth experience. Why do they have such big opinions? I think it is a contradiction in your writing. The protagonist's hope that force will be used to support himself is obviously an act of insecurity. Then not listening to the system is an act of arrogance. A person who is clearly insecure but very arrogant gives people a particularly contradictory feeling. Finally, I want to say that there are thousands of people, and everyone has different opinions. If you care too much about other people's opinions, it will disrupt your own rhythm. Just write in the direction you think is most correct. Come on! Don't cut it in half

Well, it is much better than those Sabi authors. The descriptions of suppressing emotional outbursts are very timely. If there is oppression, there will be resistance. If you can take action, just fight, if you can't, then let go. The plot is also very good, although it seems a bit vague now, and the protagonist's positioning is also wandering between good and evil. It is not clear what the protagonist wants to do, but the world view has been somewhat expanded. Plot speculation (154) If the protagonist gets more information from more past life memories, then there may be two lines to follow: One is the dictator, who rules the ruling class through absolute power, showing the protagonist and the layman versus the aristocratic family; The second is the leader, who cultivates followers and then confronts them; First, you can just write about the protagonist himself, and secondly, you have to write more. Anyway, so far, I prefer the protagonist to be the purifier and directly purge. There are big differences between people, right? If you directly reduce the number, then the difference will decrease, the group consciousness will decrease, the possibility of unity and cooperation will be higher, and the class conflicts between people will be reduced [Thoughts]

The book is good and very interesting [smile] I recommend everyone to read it. 6.0 Is too low, completely unworthy of this book [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

It seems that the world-destroying text will not destroy all the aristocratic families in the rear. It makes people fear that they are a group of laggards. Drive out of the abyss again

It's more everyday, just like our lives, regardless of other things, and it doesn't describe much about other people and things. But the idea is fine, it will open up your imagination

His meow rated it 6.5, Knock it. Personally, I think it's pretty good. I've been following it to the latest chapter. It doesn't have too many bad points, so I won't rate it this way. Don't wait until the author feels uncomfortable if he doesn't update [crazy]

So it's the Monkey King and Big Big Wolf template?

So far it's pretty good, but it's a little bit poisonous to refuse to change to a beast master.

I feel sorry for a person who used to like me very much, so when I meet people who treat me badly after that, I think it is retribution.

I haven't watched it for a while. Why is the rating so low? I think it's still worth watching.

Objectively speaking, it is a good book. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

The author still has his own ideas, and he didn't poison me all at once. I can see many novel elements.

It's okay, just slightly toxic, not bad

I feel like the rating is a bit low

The content is still good

The book is good, but not many people read it

Getting more and more interesting

I think it's okay, but why is the rating so low?

This book is pretty good so far

It's pretty cool, but why is it rated so low?

Okay, come on. Just don't mess it up

Except for a few women in it who dream about future scenes, everything else is fine.

The idea is very clear, I can only say that it is very bold, but I like it

If you're a little bit poisonous in the front, you'll get over it, and things will get better later. Again, you've already come to Tomato, what else do you want about a bicycle?

The subject matter is novel and the writing is pretty good.

There is nothing poisonous about it, and the subject matter is relatively novel.

The combat is fun but not so brainless. There is no big problem with the integration of the world. It has written its own characteristics and plays jokes appropriately. Other comments have pointed out some minor points. There are no comments in the humanities to update. If you feel you can stand it, you can give it a try. The current score of 6.8 Is still a bit low for me (there are many books on the bookshelf but I haven't read it. When I wrote this, I knew that the score was low but the only low score to update is probably the personal beast-controlling filter~) Give the author a high score and cheer for the author [Thinking]

Looks good, but a little lacking