Ye Wenwen's College Life

The heroine's love journey is bumpy, but a very strong girl can actually become strong on her own and take care of her son, putting aside love.

It's still ok. The first time I saw a single female protagonist and a double male protagonist [face covering], it's not an adaptation of a story that happened around the author. It feels quite real. But the narrative is a bit bland and there are too few inner scenes. For example, after Zhou Chuan's death, when the heroine saw Zhou Chuan's body, when writing about her actions and demeanor (holding him and crying), some of her memories could be interspersed; also, after Zhou Chuan was buried, the description of how the heroine came out was too brief [face covering] This is obviously a description When writing about the key link in the relationship between Cheng Hao and the heroine, I feel that the author has gone too far. The reader feels that the heroine fell in love with Cheng Hao right after Zhou Chuan's death, and the emotional transition was a bit abrupt. Also, Zhou Chuan's parents must be a little uncomfortable with the heroine marrying someone else, and the heroine's son Yangyang must also be a little awkward. I feel like the author can also make some contributions from these aspects.

The narrative is smooth, the male and female protagonists have distinct personalities, and the girl is independent and self-reliant, but she does not support giving birth at such a young age. I still feel sorry for her! [Cry]

Real and objective, I like the heroine!