From the Start, a Tardigrade Chews Its Way Through Retirement in Shikkotsu Forest

The author didn't read Naruto very much, just for this book, I read it briefly. The chapter about Tsunade's longevity at the beginning shocked me a lot, and he also said that the Yin Seal was invented by Tsunade😰 But as a newcomer, you still need to be encouraged.

Halfway through, I found the writing to be very good, especially Tobirama's character design, which is very close to the original work. Just because it's so close, it doesn't seem like a thing. My personal idea is to teach Tobirama a lesson when the protagonist becomes stronger.

The writing is quite good, but I was originally attracted by the title because I wanted to see tardigrades with high defense and high blood pressure, sweeping across the ninja world, but it turned out that Tobirama was trained like his grandson. The gap was huge, but after Tobirama died, it was still very enjoyable to watch, but the concentration of tardigrades seemed to be a bit low.

What the hell o. O at 5:05? The author's description is very good, and he also understands the plot and characters very well. Except for the beginning of the plot, which is unpleasant, it is also in line with the characteristics of the characters. Of course, the plot itself is not too different from the original work. This will dissuade some people, but it is more friendly to people like me who don't know the plot and haven't watched much, and who have forgotten about what they have seen before╮(￣▽￣)╭

Since the main character has lived for such a long time, he should act more mature and not act like a child.

The writing is quite good. Regarding such a low score, my personal understanding is that some plot arrangements are not so comfortable and do not fit the original work so well. Sometimes I can't help but want to give a low score. But in fact, it is still well written. Except for Tobirama being a little aggrieved and uncomfortable when he is alive, it is good at other times. I hope the author can stick to it The role of Beiliuhu played by the protagonist is not very good and it's very uncomfortable to watch.

When the Thousand Hands Clan is destroyed, I will give you full stars. To deal with Thousand Hands, use Thousand Hands method. "What? Senju Tobirama, you ask me why I want to kill your Senju clan members. Don't ask, ask just for the sake of peace. Just think, I will kill your clan members." If you resist, will you start a war? Did it destroy the peace of Konoha? So you are not judging chaos. I want to kill you, but you don't resist. Does that mean there is no war? Does that mean Konoha's peace is not destroyed? So I want to kill you. Do you have to stand still and be killed by me for the sake of peace? Otherwise you will destroy the peace of Konoha. What an evil Senju"

The pinnacle of fan fiction The characterization is penetrating The plot design is treacherous [laughing evilly][you taste it carefully][learned] Currently non-toxic

In fact, it is well written. The low score is mainly because many people hope to change the tragic fate of many characters. This book is as close to the original work as possible. The protagonist is also a Taoist + evil-minded + fun-loving person, so he is also laissez-faire about many things.

This rating is a bit low. I have read a lot of Naruto fanfics. The author's writing style and logic are pretty good. I hope to continue to work hard.