
At the Beginning, Tardigrades Gnaw at the Old Man in the Wet Bone Forest.
开局水熊虫,湿骨林啃老
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A New Fanfic That Really Brings Out the Content of Naruto and Has Excellent Writing Style ~
Is there any new Naruto fanfic on Tomato that has novel, strange, surprising content, smooth writing and connotative content? If the number of words is less than 30w, please avoid it~Please give me some advice~
High Score Um Naruto (9 Points or Above))
High Quality Fanfic
High-quality anime fan fiction, preferably more than 500,000 words
It's True That Naruto Is Getting Worse with Each Passing Year, so We Can Only Use the Previous Books to Compare.
I want to read a book similar to "Naruto: Beginning with the Twin Kamui".
The Protagonist Is Not a Human Being, Does Not Transform, Has No CP, and Has No Ambiguity.
The protagonist is not human, has no CP, has no ambiguous objects, does not change his form, does not meddle in other people's business, and is decisive, just like "Evolution from a Big Tree"
Animation Fan Fiction
Thank you all
The Protagonist Becomes an Unpopular Monster, a Calm and Calm Type
I want to read a book similar to "I, the God-level Hyperjetton, the Top Gourmet". I've been looking for it on multiple novel platforms for a long time, but I'm surprised that no one writes about unpopular monsters in movies and TV series. Why doesn't anyone write about skeleton giant lizards? What a handsome monster!
The Book Is Out of Stock, Please Recommend It
Want to watch something like "He didn't say a word, he just kept killing!" Book. The book is out of stock, please recommend it
The Old Bookworm's Book of Desolation. Asking for Books╯▂╰
I want to read a book like "You'll Be Back at Dawn".










































Halfway through, I found the writing to be very good, especially Tobirama's character design, which is very close to the original work. Just because it's so close, it doesn't seem like a thing. My personal idea is to teach Tobirama a lesson when the protagonist becomes stronger.
The author didn't read Naruto very much, just for this book, I read it briefly. The chapter about Tsunade's longevity at the beginning shocked me a lot, and he also said that the Yin Seal was invented by Tsunade😰 But as a newcomer, you still need to be encouraged.
The writing is quite good, but I was originally attracted by the title because I wanted to see tardigrades with high defense and high blood pressure, sweeping across the ninja world, but it turned out that Tobirama was trained like his grandson. The gap was huge, but after Tobirama died, it was still very enjoyable to watch, but the concentration of tardigrades seemed to be a bit low.
What the hell o. O at 5:05? The author's description is very good, and he also understands the plot and characters very well. Except for the beginning of the plot, which is unpleasant, it is also in line with the characteristics of the characters. Of course, the plot itself is not too different from the original work. This will dissuade some people, but it is more friendly to people like me who don't know the plot and haven't watched much, and who have forgotten about what they have seen before╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭
Since the main character has lived for such a long time, he should act more mature and not act like a child.
The writing is quite good. Regarding such a low score, my personal understanding is that some plot arrangements are not so comfortable and do not fit the original work so well. Sometimes I can't help but want to give a low score. But in fact, it is still well written. Except for Tobirama being a little aggrieved and uncomfortable when he is alive, it is good at other times. I hope the author can stick to it The role of Beiliuhu played by the protagonist is not very good and it's very uncomfortable to watch.
When the Thousand Hands Clan is destroyed, I will give you full stars. To deal with Thousand Hands, use Thousand Hands method. "What? Senju Tobirama, you ask me why I want to kill your Senju clan members. Don't ask, ask just for the sake of peace. Just think, I will kill your clan members." If you resist, will you start a war? Did it destroy the peace of Konoha? So you are not judging chaos. I want to kill you, but you don't resist. Does that mean there is no war? Does that mean Konoha's peace is not destroyed? So I want to kill you. Do you have to stand still and be killed by me for the sake of peace? Otherwise you will destroy the peace of Konoha. What an evil Senju"
The pinnacle of fan fiction The characterization is penetrating The plot design is treacherous [laughing evilly][you taste it carefully][learned] Currently non-toxic
This rating is a bit low. I have read a lot of Naruto fanfics. The author's writing style and logic are pretty good. I hope to continue to work hard.
This is the first time I read such a unique book. Senju Tobirama's characterization is very good. The biggest feature of this book is that the protagonist is a tardigrade [what] [what]
In fact, it is well written. The low score is mainly because many people hope to change the tragic fate of many characters. This book is as close to the original work as possible. The protagonist is also a Taoist + evil-minded + fun-loving person, so he is also laissez-faire about many things.
I know that the rating will be swallowed up. Only four stars are valid, otherwise it would be really given 5 stars.
Feijian is dead, the ancient treasure should be established, slug, white snake, help me!
This kind of book is a slow-burning one, but there are a few of it, but I'm worried that I'll run out of books. I feel like I don't know when to appear and change the plot, and my strength is a bit too weak. I don't know what the author will write next.
It's a bit frustrating at the beginning, but it's still good at the end. It would be great to tell you about the later ancient collection. It just feels like the style has changed a bit. But I think it's okay, except for the sad part, which is a bit less than okay.
I was persuaded to quit in the early stage, but my imagination and writing are very good.
In fact, this book is much better than most of the casual novels. However, after reading too many cool novels, I only know that the protagonist is very awesome. If he is a little more realistic and a coward, he will start to call him poisonous. If he can't beat him, he will pretend to be a grandson, and he won't pretend to be a lifetime. If he thinks he is poisonous, he will leave with bad reviews and leave. How good it is to interfere with people like Orochimaru and Danzo before it goes bad.
A good Naruto novel that doesn't bring the perspective of the protagonist, but has that feeling of being👍👍👍
It's a very comfortable read. There's nothing toxic about it. I highly recommend it.
What a slutty novel
Yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah
Very nice But I have an idea, I don't know whether to talk about it or not...
It's okay, but the protagonist's role is a bit small. In the early stage, the perspective of Tsunade's team was purely for fun.
Isn't this very interesting? It's just not an invincible novel. But why is the score so low?
The protagonist was really frustrated before, but now the writing is very good. I suggest the author add a slow start to the introduction.
In the early part of Tobirama, it mainly depends on the individual. If you can accept the poison, there will be no problem. If you can't accept it, it will be a big poison to persuade you to quit. I think the flaws are not concealed. A decent book that you can read. The supporting characters of Shinzo, Beiruhu and the Empress Dowager have exactly the same characters, so I just accepted the fact that the three of them have similar personalities. This can be regarded as a minor disadvantage. As for the plot, I just follow the original plot and write a running account and add a little daily life. It is still quite satisfactory. If you want to kill time, you can read it. Personally I think the score should be around 7.5.
It's good to watch, but it's just not enough. Come on, I hope I can see a hundred unread chapters next time. It's hard to find a broken chapter to show off its power in ancient Tibet.
It's hard to say whether the third vest, Bei Liuhu, is a good one. He doesn't look like a cute and childish naughty boy, but he looks like an overbearing kid. But the requirements can't be too high. Just don't die in this book.
Four stars, please encourage me.
Very nice, please keep up the good work It's very interesting. Please come to me for more chapters.