Collapse of Iron**********

Not bad, yes. One suggestion is to reduce the description of the background of the planet. Writing group portraits is difficult, so reduce the number of characters. Chapters 16~25 are the background of the first planet. Don't watch it and it won't affect the next plot. If you really feel bored, you can skip directly to chapter 25 onwards.

Isn't anyone reading this book? The author worked hard?

The author has carefully understood the background of the materials and rare objects, and the description of the fighting is okay. Five stars.

Well written and very beautiful.

Very good, I have my own ideas

Not bad, keep up the good work

It looks really good

It's very good, but why doesn't anyone see it?

Big boost to the author, this book will definitely be a hit. This book was published in August. In just three months, more than 100 chapters have been updated. How good is the quality? It must be five stars. Please support it.

It's pretty good among the Xingtetsu fanfics I've read.