Pokémon: the Ten Most Powerful Gyms at the Beginning

It can be said that the author wrote very seriously! There is no way, after all, it is a popular science book with a lot of battles and plots. It is normal for the progress of the real-life plot of this book to be slow. I have to say that the author has been very careful in writing this kind of popular science article about Pokémon, and even added an introduction to us. I am looking forward to what the author will do in the future. Plots that connect to the real world, again, if the author dares to continue writing, then I will definitely keep pursuing it. Why don't I just like Pokémon novels, and this kind of popular science Pokémon novels, there may be some doubts about the creation of the protagonist. Some people may think that It's too simplistic, but I think it's understandable. After all, it's really difficult to push the plot in this kind of article, and the connection between reality and Pokémon is a big problem after all. Furthermore, the author is also a newcomer, and there is room for development. Moreover, the problem is not big, and the writing style is a bit new and very correct. Usually, as long as you can persevere, it is also a test for readers to read this kind of article. After all, some people don't like it to be so boring~ The author has set his attitude very low, and it can be seen that he is trying to write this book very carefully, so I have no reason not to support it~ [laughing]

Hey, I have an idea. If we take stock of the future, Xiaozhi and the protagonist fight a 6V6 mythical beast battle. Xiaozhi has helped so many mythical beasts, so there is no way he can't make six [sneaky laugh]

It can be seen that the author really wanted to write it well, but the battles in the animation are too ordinary. I feel like the author doesn't play Pokémon, right? I should have only seen the animation and its derivative works. The author has a very good attitude, so I can only say keep going.

Come on, I've never seen the Pokémon in the Donghuang region [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Snicker][Snicker][Smirk][Smirk][Smirk]

It's really good. It makes me, a Pokémon fan, feel relaxed and happy. I highly recommend it (｡･ω･｡) [Love] This is one of the best Pokémon inventory books I have ever read. Everyone in the book has a distinct personality. The characters are vividly displayed on the page. The illusory but real Pokémon world appears in front of the readers. Perhaps this is the spiritual home of Pokémon fans.

Although it has shortcomings, a good book is about repeatedly discussing and learning lessons to become a great writer. I hope Ayan will refer to other people's structures to form his own style. I wish you success! [Laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

Looking forward to the follow-up stories. If this book is written well in the later stage, it will definitely become a hit. This kind of subject matter is very novel, it is comprehensive and integrated, and the plot is not forced. It is very smooth to read. Stick with it, come on! Great, come on!

The design of the characters' images and personalities in this novel is quite good. If you raise some issues in the book, the author will discuss them in the group and make revisions. And the author of this book is a new writer, so please take care of me. After all, the author who is still working hard coding at one or two in the morning is also very hard. I hope there will be less bad comments. Thank you.

Beautiful, good elf writing. There are anime worlds and self-created worlds, as well as Donghuang's special Pokémon and the author's own ideas. I hope that Jiang Yan's plot will be added later to talk about the protagonist's adventure of winning the championship. If there is a female protagonist, just goblin gym leader. There is no need to create a character, just add it to the protagonist's plot. The story of Xiaozhi can be appropriately reduced, and more stories of Donghuang characters will be added later. After the two worlds merge, we will talk about Xiaozhi's new adventure. If there is a female protagonist, the author can decide for himself as there are so many female protagonists such as Xiaozhi. This book is not like the previous elf inventory articles. It has a new story about Donghuang. The author should write more about this aspect later. Take stock of the protagonist's past and the stories of the people around him, including friendship, love, etc. All in all, this book has unlimited potential, so keep it up, author.

Yes, even if the Dragon King lineup is changed, it's too lame. It's not even considered Fairy Ice among the gym leaders, and it won't be in the top 5 [face covering]. But it's not bad that you can write like this for the first time, keep up the good work. (I thought it was a boy at first, but later I saw it was a girl. It turns out that there are girls who like Pokémon [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]) (Dragon King lineup: Kuailong , Aluminum Steel Bridge Dragon, Three Evil Dragons are okay, Tanabata Blue Bird can get by with a Mega, Monster Elong is okay, Red Faced Dragon is not rated) Maybe it's because I have a bigger opinion on Longsteel Ghost and Rainy Day Team, because I like them. [Eat melon][Eat melon][Eat melon][Eat melon] But overall it's very good

I really like reading it. There are really very few books on Tomato that I like to read. They are all used to pass the time (maybe I can't find them). But I really like this book, both in terms of the content and the characters.

It's very good. It would be nice to know more about Donghuang Pokémon. The others are also good. I'll see if the author can make a guest appearance for me in the future.

Looking forward to the development of the story, the plot is novel, the characters have distinct personalities and are very interesting. Come on [Like] The content of this book is fascinating, the plot has twists and turns, and it is exciting. The animation characters portrayed by the author are original and lifelike. Each character has its own unique personality and emotions, which brought me a wealth of imagination. The language is beautiful, the story is well-organized and full of artistic appeal. It is an intoxicating novel. [Adoration][Adoration]（＾＿－）

It's not like the old inventory article where it's always Ash Ketchum, the Rocket trio, the King of Champions and the mythical beasts, and there aren't so many extra things. It's good that the protagonist doesn't perform too much in the early stages of fusion.

Now it seems that there is no poisonous point, it is a very good book

Personally, I think it's okay. I read it all in one go. I just don't know much about the original part (I haven't seen it and I don't know which up owner or studio produced it). I just don't know how long it will last. After all, I have seen many authors who stopped writing halfway through, and I also want to see the author's Gan Yu cosplay photos.

It's very beautiful, fast-paced, and doesn't drag on. Although I always slide through quickly because it's too troublesome and my brain is not good. Unlike other authors, the 10 reviews are almost a hundred chapters long, which is too uncomfortable to read.

Author, I like you, I want to be your Gou [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore]

A very good novel, but it still has shortcomings. I would like to make three points here: …

You add a Donghuang champion trainer named Xiaoyao, a main light and Holy Spirit elf. The elf includes Miris, the god of war, and Monta, Miles, Holy Light Dimo, Puni, and the ancestral spirit beast of the grass system.

Can a unicorn be added to the main cast? The championship lineup must have a quasi-god from its own region, right?

The writing is quite good. Although it is a new author, it is still very interesting. Moreover, the author listens to his advice.

Although the writing style is still a bit immature, it is still well written. I am looking forward to Xiaozhi and the protagonist's trip in the Donghuang area. I wonder if my children will have the chance to appear~

The content is exciting, but I feel like the protagonist has too few roles. It's a pity that the update has been discontinued.

Feichang dripping Waiwei Gude

New author, please support me

There are very few girls who understand Pokémon, and there are even fewer girls who can write about Pokémon. We must support [Love]. [Love]

Very good, I support it, I just wish it could be updated faster [laughing] [laughing]

Needless to say, the author's writing is pretty good. Pokémon all support one hand.

The writing is superb. Can the main character have more roles? Please finish it and don't interrupt or end it [crying] [crying]