Azur Lane: Commander Wobu Captured by Gravity

A unique blue novel (wws?) That stands out among the current itinerant novels, but this can probably be considered a itinerant novel (Dense Fog). The writing is excellent, and six stars is not an exaggeration. The main characters are also very good, but there are some flaws in the description and plot of some secondary characters, but the flaws are not concealed. In any case, it is a blue novel that can be remembered deeply by me. The last ship girl novel that impressed me so much was Deep Sea Admiral, but it is a pity that the eunuch is the author. I hope the author can persevere.

The author likes the French battle series very much, and the protagonist ship girls who appear are all French battle series. But! If you don't experience the German war charge when making a nest, it is destined to be a failed nest! Although the current Pan American battle line has kicked the already difficult German war down, it does not prevent me from continuing to play German war [cool] As a German stick, my nest batch line is: the first silver coin Schlifen, the first coal Elector, the first steel ship Mecklenburg [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

Awesome, but too slow. Hello author, I am the Commander of the Imperial Navy, Forgot in the middle Anyway, it's going to be so slow again I'll use the Red Baron to power up your iris girl It doesn't matter if you have full air defense. I will control the German war closest to you to kill you.

After reading dozens of them, my senses are quite good. Unlike other blue books, which have a large number of custom designs and ship girls that are so interesting and interesting, the author's update speed is not very impressive. It is still highly recommended. Please support it and don't be discouraged.

Good guy, for a moment I wondered if the quality was that of a tomato, this art? This writing style? This description? Oh My God! Either Tomato has always recommended hetui to me in the past, or there are really very few of this quality. Very good, very good xdm This is it. . . I watched it a little too fast. It was so hard to wait.

In short, the writing style is very good, it feels like prose, and it is very comfortable to read. Although Lorraine's behavior after changing Burgundy's mentality is a bit inexplicable, the overall plot development is clear and non-toxic. It can be regarded as a rare high-quality fan fiction in Azur Lane.

As a player who only plays Azur Lane, I feel that I can't understand it. I don't know who the ship girl next to the protagonist is, what she looks like, and what her personality is like. However, regardless of this, the author's writing is still very good.

In fact, the writing is quite good, and I am willing to include some descriptions of the ship's history and emotions. However, the occasional literary and youth parts need to be read carefully (which is probably not very good in Tomato). However, if it is written like this, some normal ship girls will lose the pen and ink due to insufficient gravity. All in all, I support the author, at least I think there are many merits [Sending my heart]

Most ship b stories always have an inexplicable sense of sadness Maybe it's because the background of Ship B is originally a tragedy. It's just that the good ending is shown in front of the players.

Although I don't play Nest, I play Granblue and Modern. For this book, the writing is quite good, but the score is a bit low. I have read a 7-ish Granblue novel before, with more than a thousand chapters, but the profit is not good. He directly explained the reasons after passing a stage and gave a hasty ending. It is quite a pity when I think about it, but I hope the author can give a good ending. In fact, I think this book should be called "Blue: The Mutual Redemption of the Ship Girl and Me in Another World" or "Blue: The Reliable Red Baron and Her Troubled Colleagues and Commanders" [laughing]

The only drawback is that updates are too slow... And I'm going crazy Attack point D!

It's hard to imagine that I can see Wen Qingfeng in a ship girl novel, but it's still good, come on. OK, I read this book again with the sadness and anger after the exam. First of all, the author has made great progress. The chapters after entering the academy are obviously a lot of progress, and the previous feeling of awkwardness is somewhat lessened (it feels like the author's emotions are fuller) But, it is also because of this reason that the subsequent plot is a bit difficult to describe, not because of other factors. The main reason is that the clue of this article is basically the emotions of Lorraine and Burgundy, which makes the plot very tortuous and complicated (the author said that he did not write an outline at the beginning). I know that the author may want to write a story of mutual redemption, but the foreshadowing is not very cleverly arranged, and the inner confusion does not rise gradually (for readers, it means they can see the true face of the characters little by little) In fact, it's like a sudden appearance that puts a lot of riddles and emotions directly on top, and it feels like it's killing people. Then it quickly fell back into daily life, which resulted in the whole experience being ups and downs but not having a good ending. For example, in the scene where Burgundy singled out a prostitute, the protagonist is in a state of "knowing everything, but doing nothing" and finally relies on the off-site power of "author's intuition" to complete the rescue. (It would be great if this section was turned into a comic or animation. After all, the stomachache scene in the youth love story is finally felt, and what fate meets is the best [licking the screen]). But it is also the most uncomfortable part. After the duel, one person has been redeemed, but what about the other one? From a visual point of view, it is like one person has committed the disease and then another person commits it. After finally catching Burgundy, he has to catch Lorraine himself. It turns out that this disease is not just a general disease, it is left by another me or even left by himself in the previous life. I hereby implore the author to consider writing a manuscript. I will do anything. There have been enough reviews of this kind of illness (sadness). Of course, the indispensable stomachache is still there. The last suggestion is, add more updates, add more updates, add more updates [blowing kiss]

I can see that you, including Commander, are all extremely powerful. No wonder you are attracted to each other. It's very literary and youthful writing, but it has a degree, so it's still good.

5 Stars, it must be 5 stars. Let me just say it directly. If you want to watch World of Warships on Tomato, this book is enough. I personally have not seen a fan who is better than him.

There are relatively few comments. The popularity of Azur Lane is not too high. In terms of writing style, it is relatively delicate and looks very comfortable. Moreover, the novel focuses on secularization, and ordinary humanistic literacy is not too high. Many novels are too detailed to describe it, which is not good. The author has a good handle on it.

The writing style is rare and beautiful in Tomato, and the content is very graphic. I haven't read such an inspiring book in a long time. I applaud the author.

Many players in wows, Azur Lane, and Ashes Battle said it was a great experience once they matched up with each other.

Very wonderful description, the description of the French ship girl is very delicate Those who are on the radio will like the literary and artistic description method.

The writing is delicate and elegant, your language is beautiful, the characters you write are vivid, passionate, fresh and full, able to arouse empathy and have distinctive characteristics.

Five stars reserved by the author

The author will tell you honestly, are you a swordsman? What did you hit? Knife? Too much sword? Facelift? Saber? Long sword? Big gun? Miao Dao? Hit by sword?

It's not bad, but the writing is a bit literate. This style of writing generally appeals to the audience

In order to be able to understand this book, md set aside 70g on his computer overnight to download www [smile][smile][smile][smile]

What can be seen from the conductor's perspective is that the protagonist takes the principle of decentralized command to heart We all know that every commander has to struggle with variables and constants in war. Technological progress is a variable, while constants transcend time and technological changes, such as war principles, war realities and uncertainties. There are two basic ways to deal with uncertainty, centralized and decentralized. If war experience can provide any guidance, then it can be said that decentralized processing of uncertainty is more efficient than centralized processing of uncertainty. This is the advantage of decentralized command. Specifically reflected in the article is that the role of the protagonist, the commander, for specific tactical battles, allows the ship girl to maintain freedom of decision-making and action within the scope of her authority. Regarding how to do it, try to let the people on the scene make the decision (except for the time when helping Burgundy activate skills, which is considered micro-management) The team spirit of the protagonist and the ship girls is, in my opinion, what Nelson and his gang of brothers and Arleigh Burke are to Little Beaver Squadron. It should be said that effective command and control relies on the consensus of commanders at different positions (here refers to units with decision-making capabilities). The basis for this consensus is doctrinal teamwork and trust. Even when fighting Sirens, wars still need to be fought by people, and finding the method that best utilizes their talents is always the key to victory.

The writing is not bad, but it's a bit literate

I took a quick look at it and found it to be well written. Authentic wows and azlane style. I hope there won't be any bloody plot. The style is okay.

The Christmas box is pretty good, I opened it with good stuff, I feel very good, I give it five stars [laughs evilly]

It's okay. I feel good about this place so far, but there are a lot of poisonous points. To be honest, the soul travel plus the retention of the original owner's consciousness, as well as the uninterrupted literary youth, are quite poisonous. I can only say that it depends on whether the individual can accept it [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

The writing is on the radio. It just so happens that Grand Republic and Burgundy are also my favorite bbs. I give it five stars.

So if you write in this book that the relationship between the male protagonist and him is particularly good, I hope that the two of them can get together in the end. I hope you write it like this. I hope you can write this book better.