From Godfather to the Boss of America

The writing is readable, which is good in Tomato, but it needs to be improved; the characters are a bit homogeneous, especially the protagonist's younger brothers. I feel that there are not many memorable points after reading it. The protagonist's calm image in control is more prominent, but the bravery in gun battles and the quick wit in political battles are not strong. There is more to say in this aspect of the plot; the rhythm is not good, and I hope to move towards relaxation and restraint. System problem: This is not a brainless article. In the middle and later stages, I forgot about the system even if I didn't read the comments XD. You can write with or without a system, and you can write well. The problem is that the audiences are different, and it is normal for there to be controversy when the style changes. For those of you who want to read a side-scrolling story about hegemony, why not come in and take a look around to watch the protagonist get frustrated and curse? There are too many ways to give the protagonist a golden finger to start a business, so how to deal with it is very important. I read the author's profile and it said that if someone reads it, he will make a comment, so gkd🍉[please ask for a comment]

As the saying goes: I have never cultivated good deeds in my life, and I love oil and munitions the most. Suddenly I pulled open the nylon rope, m16 broke the peace lock in the Middle East, and when the Mississippi tide came, I realized that I am who I am today.

Hello, author, I have copied your book and published it on other platforms. The feedback from readers has been very good and the profits have been good. Recently, there have been a lot of requests from readers for more chapters. I hope the author will write more chapters so as not to affect my profits. I hope you know how it goes!

The logic is tight, and the foreshadowing is also recycled. Each character seems to be alive, with its own color and thickness. The protagonist is also brave and resourceful. Come on, author! [Please update] It's so beautiful, but this is not enough! Some plots have been deleted due to force majeure. After all, this kind of article will involve some sensitive historical figures. It is really not possible to use homonyms. The most important thing is that the book can survive. Come on! Then I seem to be lucky enough to be nominated in the author's "What I Want to Say" 💕 Thank you, it's really a surprise 💕

It's not a cool article, but it's better than a cool article. It may not be so smooth in the middle, but it will eventually clear up. This author does not want to be a writer who writes mindless and cool articles. He wants to be a story author. Just like his protagonist does not want to be a miner or work on the railway, but to become a godfather. I hope you can also become the godfather of tomade (tomato)

Very, very good. Don't forcefully influence the outline and become China's licking dog. Just keep it close to the real life style👍 It's a bit exaggerated about the Rockefeller family, and the money is a little small, but it is acceptable as an economic article.

It is currently tied at 116 chapters. It is very, very good-looking and the protagonist is very charming. Before about 50 chapters, the system was more powerful, but later on the system had a very low sense of presence, so it was not a mindless and enjoyable article. In fact, I want to watch the current plot that relies on wisdom, strategy and courage to achieve goals, and I also want to see the early plot that relies on the system to achieve goals more easily. I like both types. It would be great if the author could write two books about both, haha.

I just didn't write any more. It's really good.

Very interesting and engaging! Can't wait to see what happens next!

The protagonist rectifies a family at the beginning, and then the pace becomes extremely fast and exciting. Within 50 chapters, he has become the sixth largest family of the New York Mafia. Then the protagonist got in touch with Roosevelt, and a partner of the protagonist's family became a representative of the United Workers Union.