My Little Pony: Chimera

You still have a lot of shortcomings. In terms of character setting, the characters are too crazy. Not many people will like to watch a lunatic's performance. My suggestion is to set the protagonist as half crazy and half sane. There are too few exciting parts and the writing is not detailed enough. That's pretty much all my advice. (ง •̀_•́)งCome on and give you a five-star to encourage you. Hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.

Now that I'm an author, I'll give myself a five-star rating…it's not too much! Ha ha ha ha!

There is a shadow of Germany in this book