Fate, I Thought This Was a Love Episode

The plot of "Four Wars" is quite satisfactory, and the characterization and character interaction are on a tomato level. It is obvious that the author imitated the descriptions of the Japanese group dramas. Unfortunately, the writing power is still insufficient, but it weakens the protagonist and reduces the reader's sense of involvement. After all, the general framework of the plot fills in the blanks without much imagination, which loses part of the freshness. The description of the action scenes is not exciting enough, and the control of the cool points is a bit weak. There are too many oriental heroic spirits in the winter wood base, which is a poisonous point for the moon chef who is familiar with the moon setting. It can only be said that it is second-tier in the same type of tomato, but the starting point is always the benchmark. I personally do not want to let Tomato lower my personal aesthetic requirements. I hope the author will improve his writing skills in the future and try to balance between self-pleasure and serving readers [laughing] It sucks [laughing]?

The latest chapters of returning to Carlome's fake daily life are so beautiful, peaceful and happy, and Xiao Mo's carefree expression of his true inner emotions is very interesting and feels the same. It's a pity that it is false after all.

Everything else is fine, except that most of the time I can't tell who is speaking.

I just didn't see anything related to the title

Love to watch I hope the author can give Xiao Mo a he Or suffer meat [eat melon]

This book is pretty good

It has its own style, the characters are well controlled, and the comments are spot on.

Yes, come on, author

It's awesome, but the author is too short

The tonic is finished, you must have two weeks of medication

This is the first time I have seen so much original content, and there are almost no OOC Fate fans. The plot is well written, and the author's writing style is also very delicate. No one has good works [crying]

It's a bit uncomfortable to change the perspective too quickly. The plot doesn't have any interesting points, but overall it's still good to watch [Chigua]

Good looking, hope and little mohe

Not bad, come on, author

Well written, but the perspective changes too quickly

Very interesting, the book is very good.

Youxi, there are so many good people. Nice

Can the author tell me who has appeared? I am dazzled. In addition to the original 7, there are also Xiao Mo, King of Han, Jiajing, King of Tang, and who else [what] The author comes out and talks about Xuanjian's story again [laughing evilly]

So far it looks pretty good, keep up the good work And the author doesn't want you either [laughs evilly]

It's pretty good-looking. I feel like Xiao Mo fits the character very well. (*￣Rǒ￣)

A very good book

At least I can still watch it now without getting bored.

I read the book after reading the title, but what next? [Smile][smile][smile]

Not bad. It's just that there are too many people and I can't remember it.

It can look good. Come on, I hope I can finish it. Please Come on, my writing brother, Carlome's fake daily life is so beautiful, peaceful, happy, and beautiful, but it's a pity that they are all illusions. The author's writing is so good, come on! (●°U°●)

It's really good at writing about emotions and reality.

Nice! The combat is exciting, the plot is sweet, and it's not brainless.