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The writing is very good. It can be seen that the author wants to cheat the heroine but also tries his best to avoid Mary Sue. I give the author a big thumbs up for this writing style. Doesn't the heroine's head ailment really have to be cured completely after graduation and working as a medicine practitioner? The difficulty of the heroine's fight against Voldemort will increase a lot. The author's idea of ​​adding the legacy of Hogwarts to fill out the story line is also great. It can reasonably avoid some tragedies without the heroine knowing the plot. I hope that the author's subsequent writing will not collapse, and that the characters in it will not be overly flattering (the most serious fanfic beautification filters are Sirius, Lupine, and Snape) and that Cedric will not be slandered. This is really a great regret for the original work [Petrochemical]

In fact, the author's writing is really good (๑˃̵ᴗ˂̵)👍 It's not as Mary Sue as some other HP fics (after searching around, almost all of them are heartthrob settings, I am really disgusted by this setting), the plot is also very reasonable, with the author's own highlights, and Pappy is also a very cute little girl As for why I gave four stars, it's not the author's fault, because I personally prefer to keep myself safe and mind my own business, so some parts may look a little uncomfortable, but the author's writing is really good✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

Dear teacher: I am a veteran reader of Teacher, and I have followed him all the way from Old Ford. However, I have been busy doing homework for a while, so I have not read Teacher's masterpieces. In the past two days, I have caught up with Teacher's latest chapters, and I only read one word of them. It's so cool! I have read a lot of HP novels, and there are many protagonists who are strong, calm, loving, and wise, but the character of the protagonist of the teacher is unique among them. She takes the overall situation into consideration, is forbearing and restrained, sensible, and pursues knowledge, just like the sun! There is light in her! (I'm not very good at expressing [face covering]) Come on, teacher!

Why was it removed from the shelves? [Cry][cry][cry] Is there anywhere else to watch?

The teacher's writing is super good. It's really great and not OOC at all. I hope that little Pammy can save herself, but also save her. The writing is really beautiful. Teacher, you are an amazing person in the Harry Potter fandom. Gryffindor students sent congratulatory messages!!

I like this book😘We Ravenclaw has also risen🥹Finally we are no longer little transparent😭Think of other books I have seen before: the heroine's ancestors, parents' generation, and descendants all went to Hogwarts, and then she went to the other three houses, but she didn't come to Ravenclaw😭Little Transparent is sad😢 I also really like the female characters written by the author. They have their own personality characteristics and shine with their own light in the book.

Waiting for update In my opinion, most of Tomato's hp fandoms are too childish and boring. This one incorporates a bit of Hogwarts heritage, but it's surprisingly good. I'm looking forward to the follow-up development. There are also CPs that I can beat, including cute Harry and George. I like them too🉑🌚

It's really nice to watch, the content is very substantial, and there's nothing wrong with the characters. The heroine's character is very lovable, and the character interactions are really super warm. It should be regarded as a refreshing novel with all the characters being together and interactive and warm. I really like it (*´ω｀*).

Very lovely everyone! [Mo Ya also has the role of controlling a threesome [Pabbi: Thank you, I won't eat it] Papi is so brave [? A child, a very, very good little girl! I look forward to Rouse's continued creation, and I will follow up on updates every day. (*˘˘*).｡.:*♡[Loving][loving][loving][loving][loving]

The female protagonist is really like a handsome male protagonist, who is independent, courageous, calm at times, and not angry for nothing, which will leave a deep impression. What about the follow-up plot of the special period - especially the Triwizard Tournament.

This is a rare fanfic, one that is not a nymphomaniac and likes the main character from the first moment. It is well written and has its own plot [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

It's really beautiful, and the setting is also very good. Why don't you write it somewhere else? I really don't want to give up on this book, so don't stop updating it [crying]

I really like it. I got it from Old Ford. My wife likes it [laughs] Ahhh, this is so exciting. The Ravenclaw diadem just fell into Pappy's hands?

The writing is very good, why has it been removed from the shelves? [][] It seems that the manuscript was swallowed by 🍅 after it was saved [][][]

I really like it. She is in the top ten in my row. The heroine has always been very good and she is not very frustrated. Harry is a good husband. I recommend it. I recommend it.

It's super good-looking, and I really like the storyline. 😍Huo Yi, the player, substitutes for yyds. Come on [like][like]

How so! ! ! ! ! [Crying][Crying][Crying][Crying] Don't give up, it's no longer available [Crying][Crying][Crying]

Broken, the author is great, I can't read it after the Parseltongue chapter, [has been removed from the shelves][cry][cry][cry]

It's nice to watch. It's important to say it three times. It's a good match for CP. The kids are so cute. They love each other. It heals like a fairy tale. I feel so warm after watching it.

I can see from behind. I don't know how to post a paragraph comment! Very nice! ! ! Auditing is so bad!

Harry, Harry, I ate, ate, ate, there were too few from Heiden School and Shiyuan, so I ate hard! ! ! !

Why was it removed from the shelves? The writing is very nice.

The most beautiful thing, you don't have to blame yourself ૮₍◜ෆ◝.₎ა

Why was it removed?

My book has been removed from the shelves. Can it be restored after review? The writing is really great. It is one of the rare HP fics with good writing and no OOC.

It's very nice, no flaws so far

Well written - I really like my wife's writing The description is very logical and not rigid. The heroine is very good and I love it——

Can read, ma'am. I just can't comment I really like this book

Why was it suddenly taken off the shelves?

Wow, I can't see the new chapter. Will it be posted again? Where is it? I really want to read the plot behind it. After reading so many, I still like this one the best. I can only read it again.