I Fell in Love with Ten People Online in the World of Immortality

How should I put it? It looks good, but it goes against the theme. Obviously, the proportion of friendship and love is not right. Most of the articles are about friendship, and some are about how the heroine improves herself. Compared with the three, it is obvious that the proportion of love is not very much. From the introduction and the title of the book, the correct proportion of the article should be the heroine's own strength (cultivation)>love>friendship (girlfriend love (female)) But obviously the proportion in the article is Friendship (bestie love (female)) > heroine's own strength (cultivation) > love I can't comment on others. From my personal point of view, when I saw the title and introduction of this book, I was more interested in seeing how the heroine seduce men and then improve her own strength instead of reading a large-scale story about bestie love. The large-scale story about bestie love feels a bit contrary to the title and introduction of the article. In terms of the words in the article, it might be putting the cart before the horse, right? But in comparison, this book is quite good. I hope that the proportion of the length can be improved in the future. [Thank you]

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The plot is very good and the plot is very attractive. The heroine is a sea king. She is not stupid and sweet. She is very motivated and hard-working. She is not pretentious. She is very good at catching men, just like fishing. But looking at the palace banquet, it seems that immortal cultivators have too little status in the secular world. Is that barrier definitely to prevent ordinary people from entering the immortal world? I think it's to prevent immortal cultivators from coming to the world to dominate and bless the world.

Author, you are really good at it. I almost made my lips curl up while reading it. To be honest, the only shortcoming is that it is not finished. I was not planning to read it because I wanted to stock up on it. But I found that I was really short of books and couldn't find anyone to read novels, so I found this book from the bookshelf. I just want to say that fortunately I found this book to relieve the pain of book shortage. But unfortunately I found this book before it was finished. It hurts me so much. So can the author make more updates? When you are free. (It is recommended that you continue to be available)

No follow-up? (Glancing up and down) (Cold eyes) Hehe (Smiling disdainfully) Very good (Shaking the red wine glass) (Take a small sip) I have seen through your little trick (the corner of your mouth raised a hint of evil) It's just to attract my attention (lowering the corners of your mouth coldly) However, you have to have a degree (eyes are three points cold, four points expectant, two points proud and one point indifferent) It's best to update immediately (sneer) Don't force me to kneel down and beg you.

It's really beautiful. So many abstractions. Hahaha. It's really beautiful. It would be better if everyone could eat it. There are no limitations on cultivation [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's super, super, super good-looking, and every emotional line is very interesting. The heroine is not like other heroines in novels. She has a career ambition and is really very good-looking [Adored][Adored][Admired]

Great! All kinds of interactions are written very delicately and realistically, not just about love, but also about friendship! Among them, the heroine doesn't just focus on the strategy, she also works very hard in practice. Great support, author, don't be affected by bad comments [Love]

Super pretty! There are many male protagonists, and the interactions with each male protagonist are super sweet. The female protagonist is very strong and sober, and she just plays with the male protagonist. The friendship between Yuebao and Qingbao is super good! The plot is not cliche. I read it all in one day without skipping a chapter. It's really good. It's been a long time since I've seen an article that's so to my liking!

Although the heroine is Neptune, does it hurt the hero's heart? But I think the heroine is quite kind sometimes. Not only do you work hard to cultivate yourself, but you also inspire those around you. I really like her energy. The heroine is worthy of being the king of the sea. The ambiguity with the male protagonists is so sweet. The female characters are so popular and the kind of pure friendship makes me envious.

The first part was okay, but later I found that the pace was getting faster and faster, and the second part was a bit rushed. It wasn't until I read the author's closing remarks that I realized that I almost couldn't see their ending. Fortunately, the author of "Sure" gave them an ending. Take your time and you'll get better.

My sister Yue is the Queen of the Sea! The story of the lower realm is very interesting. The upper realm is a little bit worse. Maybe it is too short and not as detailed as the lower realm. Anyway, Sister Yue Niu Niu Niu, can there be a side story? After entering that door! ! Is there any collision between the fish in the world of cultivation and the modern fish? [Adoration][Adoration]

There is no female rivalry, and she gets along very well with the original heroine. Men are like clothes, and sisters are like siblings. The heroine herself is also very sober, knows what she wants, has a strong career ambition, and works hard in practice. I love her so much.

First of all, I want to praise the author. The plot is very well set up. I feel like I am involved in it. It feels like I am really cultivating immortality. Every character is rendered very well. I like the character of the heroine very much, and I love watching the heroine fishing. There is also the process of the heroine's continuous growth. I think the plot is well grasped. The heroine is very talented and is a genius. But it's not that the writing is particularly outrageous, because I think some writing is too exaggerated and a bit unreal. This one is very good. The heroine has her own thoughts, will explore and move forward, and constantly summarizes methods that suit her. Finally, I would like to praise the girls' friendship, which is really heart-warming and breaks the usual tendency of the novel to not deal with the original heroine. But the bad thing is that I think the character names are not well chosen. For example, can the heroine's Yue and the senior brother's surname Yue be avoided and replaced with other surnames? There are also some problems with details and logic, such as trial clearance and so on, but maybe I am too stupid to notice it. But the author himself also said that it is a mindless and refreshing article, so it is not bad. However, I still want to give five stars to encourage the author. Overall, it is very good!

It's pretty good. Actually, I just came here to watch Sweet Love, so I don't bother to care about other things, such as some combat power levels, and the heroine kissing her when she was in her teens. Just watch it without thinking. Moreover, the heroine did not reject anyone who came, the kiss was just for the purpose of ascending to the sky, and the relationship was only with the few in the extra story and his younger brother. He was so lucky, Chunyang, to get the status. Tsk, there is always a feeling that he still lacks something. He got it too easily. At the beginning, he resisted his scheming type because of his previous life. He was still imprisoned. Fortunately, the heroine was able to escape and she just cooperated with him. Although she punished him, it felt a bit light. She was obviously killed by a yandere in her previous life, but she still tolerated it. Sure enough, she was still a spoiled child. The heroine has a delicate image in front of them. It's a pity that she's not a top girl, but she's not bad either. The family and friendship are really great. I really like the bond between them. Qingbao is really cute. It's a pity that there is less writing in the later period. I really feel that I can still write it, but it's okay. It's great that the author persisted until it didn't end.

The writing is great. I really fell in love with Yueyue at first sight. I really like her sober and independent character.

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I was wondering why I didn't have the motivation to read the novel. It turned out that it wasn't finished yet. [Cry]

It's very, very charming, but the number of chapters is really too few. [Sending my heart to you]

It's really pretty. Then can you put more plot focus on love? I clicked in after reading the title, but the protagonist has been practicing and practicing [Thinking]

The heroine's character is well developed, she is diligent and hard-working, very positive, like a little sun, and sincere towards others. The supporting characters are also particularly well created, with a distinct personality, and the plot is fast-paced and novel.

It's very good-looking, but there are only five male protagonists at the end. I didn't get the one I liked in the early stage, which is a bit sad, but it's still very good-looking, and most of them are super awesome. I know it's unrealistic to accept them all, but those early ones really impressed me.

After reading it for so long, I realized that I didn't even leave a review for the book [face covering]

Believe me, this book will definitely be on your bookshelf. The plot is interesting and not distracting, the heroine silently does important things, and the male protagonists are also good [shy][shy]

Normally I'm a baby who only gives ratings after seeing the ending [shy] (crazy hint)

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa;; I really like our Yubao; so cute) [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

Very beautiful, looking forward to more updates ˆ ⑉> ‧̫ < ⑉ˆ The novel is getting better and better (●°u°●) The novel "Baobao" must be becoming more and more popular and more people will read it. Continue to recommend to friends [blowing kiss] [shy]

Woohoo, I really like this theme! Big cheers for the author! Really good-looking

The heartthrob is very good-looking, the heroine is very clear-headed, determined to go home and has been working hard for it, super, super good-looking! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Very very beautiful! The posts between girls make me feel so soft🥺🥺The heroine is a professional (although she is forced(?)), And every fish takes the bait actively, which makes me feel happy!!!