Thirty years to the west of the river and thirty years to the east of the river. Sixty years is too long. Seize the day and night.
A generation of martial arts master is reborn in the world of fighting spirit.
No system, steady development, the progress history of a genius
Reader comments
The first three chapters are well written and I have the desire to read on. After reading about ten chapters, the writing deteriorated a bit. In terms of plot, the fighting skill level given by the protagonist's master and family is a bit too high, and the dialogue between the protagonist and the guards when he goes out for training is a bit immature. But it's still pretty good among Dou Po fans.
You can't just let me enjoy it alone, everyone comes to see it, 5 stars must be 5 stars!
The content is very good, one of the better among fanfics. Who is the heroine?
Um😓, mainly because Xiao Yan lost Yao Lao. . . At once. . . .
The first three chapters are well written and I have the desire to read on. After reading about ten chapters, the writing deteriorated a bit. In terms of plot, the fighting skill level given by the protagonist's master and family is a bit too high, and the dialogue between the protagonist and the guards when he goes out for training is a bit immature. But it's still pretty good among Dou Po fans.
You can't just let me enjoy it alone, everyone comes to see it, 5 stars must be 5 stars!
The content is very good, one of the better among fanfics. Who is the heroine?
Um😓, mainly because Xiao Yan lost Yao Lao. . . At once. . . .