Kai Changsheng, but His Fiancée Is the Villain

This book is remarkable. The good thing is that the author's writing style is good, and it has a sense of atmosphere and story. But the overall plot is too depressing. Although it is very real, most readers like to watch some heartwarming plots instead of too many life and death separations. In short, I hope the author can change the plot style. Those regrets can be compensated for, and if they can't, don't add fuel and jealousy. Especially the part where you don't know which regret is made into a leader is very heart-wrenching. Although it can arouse the reader's emotional ups and downs, it means that your writing is perfect, but changing the plot may make the score higher. Come on, author, keep an eye on you!

October 10 Currently, you can see the October 10th update here. Giving five stars can be regarded as encouraging the author. Let me briefly comment on my first impression of this book. My impression of this book is quite good. It conforms to the routines of some popular longevity novels. The protagonist is eventually involved in major events that save the world for various reasons. He not only saves himself, but also helps the world. The characters are very positive, but also a little bit funny. The protagonist is not someone who is overly vindictive, but he can also kill ruthlessly when facing external enemies. The author's writing style is also good, and the story progresses not too slowly. In just about 80 chapters, the protagonist has already been given a very important task, and the interaction with the heroine has basically reached the final critical period. After the whole story, I didn't feel disconnected. The author is also good at whetting the appetite. For example, what is the meaning of the half bowl? Why does the female protagonist want the male protagonist to give it to her, but she doesn't want to take it from him by force? Is it true that the heroine did not hesitate to connect herself with the hero just for the remaining half of the bowl? (Of course, these questions may also be caused by me not looking carefully enough) After talking about these acceptable aspects, I will talk about some problems that I think exist. First of all, there are reasons why this book has a low rating. One is that the author's title is a little misleading. I am a relatively superficial person, and I usually like to read stories with male protagonists, female protagonists and villains. I clicked on this book and took a look at it [face covering]. The male protagonist is far from being a villain, and the female protagonist is not like a traditional villain (probably because the heroine's behavior is not very villain-like, which means that the conflict with the male protagonist reflects the feeling of a villain). In short, the content is not in line with my expectations for the title of the book, and it did not bring me a sense of satisfaction. The other reason is that the performance in the early stages of the book is relatively depressing. Let's not mention the issue of the marriage contract being replaced, but let's talk about the little female supporting character. The author was really quick to cut the female supporting character, and the female supporting character died of illness in a short time. The protagonist had no way to do anything about it, and there was no use in being sad. The protagonist still chose to face life, and it felt a bit like the knife-man in "Alive". So some people want to read something exciting, but when they come in, they are stabbed inexplicably [cover their face], which is really helpless. Another reason is that some important things are not explained more clearly to the readers, such as what the origin of the bowl is, what the heroine wants with the remaining half of the bowl, and what the blood is like (these are actually okay, it is not a big problem if I don't mention them, they are just setting up suspense). More importantly, since the protagonist's half of the bowl is about training and has nothing to do with immortality, why? In the early stage, he just refused to return the bowl to the heroine (note that the whole broken bowl belonged to the heroine's father). In the early stage, the male protagonist refused to return it even though he had the chance to return it (mainly because the male and female protagonists had the least bond at that time, and the male protagonist still wanted to break off the engagement) [facepalm]. He looked confused to me. I thought I missed something. I really didn't understand what the protagonist was doing? (It just makes me feel that the direction of the plot is not so appropriate, it is a bit imposed on cause and effect) If these things are not explained, people who like to see God's perspective will feel that they are in a fog, and they come and go suddenly. Since there aren't many exciting moments, some daily antics can still make people happy. It's a pity to publish it in this place. Most people who like Tomato like novels that have a lot of excitement and come fast and furious. That's about it, I'm tired of writing, welcome to discuss.

It looks good, the story is well connected, logical, and the writing is good Both the slow pace in the front and the climax in the back are both very good. A lot of people talk about the heroine, but actually I really can't dislike it. The female version of Fang Yuan is actually very good, but the description of her is not that detailed. She could be revealed more about her background story, such as why she became so extreme, etc. The character lacks charm. Sure enough, most people don't like Fang Yuan's sexual transformation. Moreover, the progress between men and women is a bit too slow. The relationship between them can refer to the relationship between the male and female protagonists in the comic "I am the Evil Emperor" Come on, author, don't supervise, keep updating, always support Give you more love to generate electricity [send heart]

The writing style of this book is fluent, and the lines are lively and interesting. It breaks away from the familiar style of longevity novels and takes ordinary and simple life as the theme. It does not emphasize cultivation like a long life, nor does it focus on participating in the world like meeting and intersecting with princes and generals. Although it is systematic, it is almost invisible, and the content is novel and unique.

I want Concubine Yu to have a single female lead, not Concubine Han [smile]

A very good book, it can be regarded as the replacement of "Lan Ke Qi Yuan", but it is not like Lan Ke's fairy looking at the world, but the fairy's experience of the world.

Come on, don't be discouraged by other people's cynicism.

Immortality is so sad

Not bad, my chicken brother is still so awesome

The five stars are just for myself and I don't comment on other people's opinions.

Is the author a Hakka?

Personally I think it looks pretty good

It feels good, okay.

Hurry up and code for me. Your five stars are indispensable for me. I hope the heroine is not Han Fei, otherwise my brother will have to get out of bed early.

Why is it rated 5 points? I feel it's okay.

Wonderful, good, good novel

Finished reading Chapter 103. Why are the scores so low? . I go

It feels good, just a little bit depressing If you can't stand the abuse, run away.

The atmosphere is very good

It's okay, I can't stop watching it

I laughed so much that I peed myself

A very good book

Needless to say, good luck to the author

My name is truth

Okay, but the main line hasn't moved much.

Good (no evaluation if less than five words)

It doesn't matter who the heroine is, as long as she's not Concubine Lu Han

It's so beautiful. Why is it rated 5.4?

The tempo is very slow, very slow, very slow, very slow, and there is no title [laughing evilly]. I suggest you play the next one if you see it.

Okay, okay, as long as you keep updating it, it should become a masterpiece by then