Ridiculous, She’s the Commander

Come, the author, read with me I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code words diligently. I am coming from darkness. The author reads with me. I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code words diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to code words every day and every night. The keyboard in [Wangchai], the guard on the Great Wall of Internet literature, I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding day and night. [Wangchai] And the male protagonist is Zhong Jingtong

Although the writing is okay, can the modal particles be changed? Most of the modal particles are like na or something weird, like an old-fashioned young student. It wouldn't even be the same word if it were replaced with it, right?

The writing is very wonderful, the plot is not procrastinating or watery, the characters are vivid and interesting, and it is very interesting to watch (ˊ˘ˋ*)♡