After the Heartthrob Brothers Entered the Game

Overall, it's very good. The subject matter is very attractive and the author's writing style is also very good. But there are still some minor flaws: 1. The front line in the early stage is too long, which makes it a bit frustrating to read. It only feels a bit more competitive after more than 80 chapters. According to this process, if the author's front line in the later stage is not as long as the early stage, there will be a feeling of exhaustion in the later stage, which will look unpleasant. 2. There are too many descriptions of the younger brother, and most of the early part is about how much he hates the heroine. Although the author may want to create a tough-tongued feeling, but there are too many times, and this character is not as lovable as his brother. But no matter what, I really like this subject! ! I hope the author will continue to work hard! !

It's a rare forbidden brother story. The three main characters are all very good... It's a three-dimensional version that I will like. Especially the younger brother who obviously likes it but deceives himself and makes excuses to break up the heroine and the older brother. It's not for his own good, but he turns around and says in his heart that he doesn't love it. He lives the life of his older brother with a very honest body. The fragrant and happy dog-licking life... Really vividly demonstrates the inconsistencies that many real men have... Whether you are a good man or a bad man in a relationship, you have to give yourself a high-sounding excuse. It is also in line with human nature. Even if people do bad things, they will find excuses to convince themselves of their hypocrisy.

The author's writing is very good. Although both the older brother and the younger brother are dissatisfied with the moral integrity, if the male protagonists can reduce the derogation of the female protagonist in their hearts, the image of the male protagonist will be more likable. However, I still look forward to the author's next brother rice bowl.

It's good to watch. In the middle, it's a bit depressing to watch the heroine chasing her brother, because his eldest brother is so dead, and so is his younger brother. I thought that a rich man with a good personality and a good character for the heroine would appear, so I would just change the hero. But after I got married to my younger brother, I finally felt less unhappy. Also, did the elder brother regain his memory later? There is a paragraph describing the dream, I don't know whether it is true or not. It is probably that he will dream about the memories of his previous life one after another. How many times does the author update a day? How many words per day? The first world is not over [almost crying]

It's quite nice to read, and the writing seems quite comfortable. However, this book is a unit story, and the plot advances too slowly, which is a bit stretched. I feel that the first short story will not be completed until after 100 chapters. The selling point of the relationship line should be the brothers vs. The heroine. Both men are a bit shady and tough-talking, which makes me feel a little aggrieved. The heroine is responsible for her good looks and wants to find a new one, but it doesn't have to be him to piss them off. But I clicked in because I wanted to see the brothers' rice bowl [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] Now my younger brother is successfully engaged to the heroine and is being teased so hard [smirking] that I am laughing to death. In the last life, was he jealous of his older brother to death? [Take a closer look]

The basics of a selfish and bad woman, but the author writes it well and has enough tension The first world is unfinished (I love my brother more than Sandwich. I'm sorry that I kicked my brother out when I was about to get engaged hahh) but I couldn't help but read it all. Waiting for updates

Originally, I read the comments and persuaded me to quit. After reading it for a while, I was still heartbroken. In fact, none of the comments were so negative and aggrieved. [Feeling heartfelt] Maybe I have read too many irritating books. This is more like pulling, not a bottom-line plot. The key female protagonist is more purposeful and purposeful. I read the copywriting "Love at First Sight" carefully. Maybe my younger brother had a crush on me when they were in school and then fell out of love one-sidedly? Brother, I can't tell if this man is too tough-mouthed.

The author writes very well, really I don't know why some people complain about the author's procrastination in writing. I think the plot is very good, and it is step-by-step. How fast is fast? Like the kind of person who falls in love with you in just one or two moments? From the crematorium? I think this pulling feeling is just right. And the writing style is very nice. The rural style of the first world is very real and natural, and the story about a male reborn is very novel. I love watching male mistresses. Don't be dissuaded by one-sided words. Anyway, I really like the heroine's character, especially the heroine's little selfishness. I am a heroine who is very happy with her little selfishness. She is an atypical good heroine. She is very realistic. She loves the heroine's baby to death. Her little sister's personality is also very lovable. Finally, the author asked if the one about ancient Chinese poetry in the next world is good, I want to read it❤️

The writing is good and the character is distinct. I think there is no difference between the second life of the heroine and the first life. The heroine loves herself very much and knows that she just wants to live a good life. As for the brother, he was happy and tired in his first life. He said that he had to take on the responsibility of the eldest son, and the heroine was criticized by her mother-in-law. Even if the heroine resisted, it was because the brother was not firmly on the heroine's side. As for the younger brother, he is not so responsible and has the ability to give the heroine better, but he is touched by himself and has a bad mouth. He thinks that he has arranged a sweetheart for his brother. He married the heroine thinking it was for his own good. In fact, he just likes the heroine. Although he has not done any real harm, his brother has really bad breath, just like a little brat who bullied a girl when he liked her when he was a child. None of the three people are perfect and have no major problems. Not abusive. At least the heroine is not romantic at all. Who can give her a better partner? This is a good article.

Who in the family understands? There are really very few novels of this type. Oh my god, they are so beautiful and so enjoyable to read. The most pity is that the first world is not finished. Woohoo, I really want to read the whole world in one go. I highly recommend it. It makes me so happy.

It's good to watch, but the heroine is a bit frustrated. Oh, it would be great if a new male protagonist could appear out of thin air [Love]

It's quite nice (๑•.•๑) But the first world is too long! Also, these two male protagonists don't have long mouths [awkward laugh][awkward laugh] I just saw Chapter 50. Why doesn't this brother act? I feel like the heroine can like someone else [crying] [crying] I even cried, it's a bit cruel. Although the heroine didn't pay a lot [crying] [crying] I felt sad and heartbroken when I saw it (つд⊂)

If you can write an arrogant and selfish character so cute, you must be a cute person. What I hated the most while watching the movie were the two male protagonists. I was left speechless several times. I watched the movie relying on the female protagonist, who had a magical sense of cuteness.

This book is super good. I look forward to the follow-up. My brother looks arrogant but he is actually a complete idiot. My brother was reborn too late and his wife was laughed to death.

As the name suggests, the article is stimulating and stimulating [laughing]. The two brothers are always tougher than the wall, but the result is like breaking the defense hahahaha. Damn it, you must fight [laughing]

Very well written. I don't know why the author doesn't update it anymore. If the author can see it, it will satisfy the fans' wishes. Keep updating! We are waiting for you. I hope you are doing well in the real world too

Author, please don't make me kneel down and beg you [crying] [crying] Oh my God, I finished reading it in one go [crying] [crying] I particularly like the two male protagonists. I just started reading the introduction. I thought there were several stories, but then the first story turned out to be so long and not finished yet! ! ! It's really heartbreaking, but the writing is very good and clear, and the subject matter is very attractive to me. Of course, the plot is also very attractive to me. I just want to update it more. [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] I just went back to read the introduction, and when I saw that the person with the loudest voice wrote it first, I immediately raised the flag of being a cruel young lady! ! ! Follow the votes and vote sisters [sending hearts] [sending hearts] [licking the screen] [licking the screen] [licking the screen]

The brother's rice bowl is very fragrant, and I am afraid that the author Jun will be a eunuch. What makes this story so interesting is that brothers love each other so much that they turn against each other, and the younger brother is really a living treasure. At first, he refuses to admit that he is spying on his sister-in-law, and insists on stopping the heroine under the guise of caring about his brother. The abacus can be heard from a distance. The elder brother had a noble and forbearing demeanor, but unexpectedly, his younger brother stole his home.

It's good-looking. Some people say that the male protagonist is not good. He has his own little thoughts, which means it doesn't make him a millionaire. I think if everyone likes it, he is already a millionaire. I think it's very true that human nature is so thoughtful and likes to give up good things. Isn't it more vivid?

I like this book very much. I have read many of them. Yours is the one that I like the most. If the flowers in the back are not broken, it will definitely become popular. Come on (ง•̀_•́)ง I've been chasing you for so long, what did you write next? It's getting more and more watery, and there's no point at all. A short story is so long. It's not finished yet. What are you doing?

It's beautiful and the writing is superb. When I read it, I felt that the writing style was very familiar. I discovered it as I read it! Isn't this just how writers write? The description angles and characters in the books written by Yu Hua and others are really similar and very attractive! Zanye

So well written! ! ! The writing is super good, and the description of the heart is very delicate. It is really amazing. I look at my sister-in-law and refuse to admit it. She makes excuses every time and brainwashes herself every day. It should be good for the heroine. I am looking forward to the future development. I hope the author will update a million words every day.

It looks good. At first, I really thought that my younger brother wanted to help him get rid of the heroine, but it turned out to be his own selfishness. He said he didn't like it and hated it, but in the end he loved him more than anyone else [laughing and crying]

I came across this book several times in the recommended places. Looking at the cover, I thought it was the kind of male video [face covering] that I really didn't want to read at first. The book was boring and boring. I was attracted as soon as I opened it. I read the introduction out of habit and found out that it was not what I thought. I read it without sleeping all night. I loved it. I was looking forward to the next plot. I couldn't stop reading it, and the author wrote it very well. At first, I thought it was a long world, but later I couldn't read it at all. My brother is so [like] [like] blessed to have you as my brother. I also like the character of the heroine very much. I enjoyed the self-guided strategy. The brother is wavering between his responsibility as the eldest son in the family and his true love. If the original story is followed, it feels like the heroine accidentally fell into the river, and then if the brother goes back, he will be connected to the original world. This time it's my younger brother, but he still doesn't admit that he likes the heroine. If the heroine finds out, you won't be able to regret it.

It's good to watch. Stay up late and watch. My sister-in-law opens the door. I'm my brother. Don rice, rice bowl.

Oh my gosh, it's only the first 20 chapters and it's really not good to read, but the rest is really good to watch, this pull is really good👌🏻, the heroine and the girl are really silly and cute [laughing and crying] The author has written every story well, I love reading it anyway, I want to read it

I imagined a story about a female writer who is so smart and sharp that she falls in love with her cold and calm male protagonist through word games day after day. In her story, he never stopped for her.

Very pretty! ! I am also a long-time book fan, and this book makes me want to read more. Although the character of the heroine is not very good, the author made me feel that such a charming heroine is such a charming heroine because others like every aspect of her. Anyway, I don't know how to put it, the sense of substitution is particularly strong, which is much better than the kind of heartthrob novels that have no inner description and just fall in love directly. I can't understand it at all, and I can't get into it.

It's super pretty, but there's just too little, and it's tied in one breath. The heroine is very lively, and she is not too exaggerated or a Mary Sue story. This alone defeats most literary works. It's fresh, the author must be more diligent and support [love]

Good-looking. Unique and good-looking. I haven't found any similar articles yet [Adoration][Adoration]