Immortal Cultivation Family: the Rise of the Jinling Immortal Clan

No brother, why do you feel that your writing is on the same level as the novels I wrote? 😦, The writing style is a little better than mine but not much. It makes me more confident [laughs][laughs][laughs]

The writing is really good, the plot is compact and watchable, the male protagonist has a very charming character, is ruthless and selfish towards outsiders, and is responsible and responsible towards family members [Like] [Like] [Like] The writing is very realistic, not fake and empty-handed, and does not sacrifice one's life for the great cause of the human race every day, it is all for the benefit of oneself or the family. They compete with each other, and I didn't see the treasures of the secret realm. They are all kinds of wars, between various family forces, between countries, and between monsters and humans. They are very real. No one will risk their lives for others. The harem was opened. Fairy Qingyin originally gave birth to a gifted son to the male protagonist. They became husband and wife, and they just needed a ceremony to form a Taoist couple. As for the male protagonist, in order to speed up his cultivation, he fell in love with a beautiful female cultivator with a powerful spiritual body, and kept saying that they would be Taoist companions with her. What about Qingyin and his son before? In order to cultivate immortality, you should use whatever you can use? [Awkward laugh] The male protagonist is really a despicable villain, cruel and ruthless. Except for mortals who don't kill indiscriminately, monks, regardless of their level of cultivation, will kill and seize treasures as long as he sees an opportunity. He is almost like a demon cultivator. But the relationship between men and women starts to go to any lengths for cultivation, which is disgusting and can't stand it [laughing]

It's really good, with this structure and concept, but this Thunder Spirit Body feels like it has a little flaw, which is the acquisition. I hope the author can work hard and continue to add updates. I will keep going. As long as it is written well, I think it is a good book. Come on, work hard to update.

Come on! Is it the responsibility of guardianship to cultivate immortality, or is it a person's immortality [shy][shy][shy]

It's pretty good-looking, very practical, not a dog-licker, and vividly describes the work at the bottom level.

It's a pretty good family novel. The protagonist's character is indeed very distinctive. He is extremely egoistic but always clings to family ties. The protagonist is indeed quite decisive in killing. The description of other members of the family is also good. The protagonist is not the one who leads the entire family. Keep up the good work, author [smile]

This novel is very exciting

Tomato is the first book that I gave a good review after reading ten chapters. The first heroine didn't appear too early, the second sentence is smoother than other authors' books, and the group portrait of the third family is well written.

Okay, if you have a family, it won't be a drag.

It's a very interesting family story. The monks in the family will "protect" everyone when they encounter danger outside. The family is united internally. The whole family is a ruthless master. They appear to be righteous but hide their evil ways.

It's well written, not bad

It's beautiful, and it's all golden elixir, so you can have offspring.

I just like this kind of family story, please support it!

The author's writing is very good, surpassing more than 80% of the nearly a thousand novels of the same type that I have read.

Not bad, the logic is clear, there are no poisonous points, and the plot description is okay

A very nice cultivation novel.

It's a very good Qi training and foundation building. The plot has ups and downs. It shouldn't get such a low score.

Good book, it gets more and more exciting later on, a book of fairy grass

It's okay, very real, the protagonist is not invincible, he kills decisively, and puts family interests first

Good-looking, worth watching, decisive in killing

Not bad, it feels comparable to the Moon-watching Immortal Clan.

Good job, keep up the hard work, come on

Keep up the hard work

Not bad, very pretty

Well written, no poisonous points

Good-looking, passionate and worth pursuing

Not bad, worth a look

Good-looking, love to watch, like to watch

Okay, getting better

Watchable, the plot is reasonable