Tennis: I Am Invincible with Self-Discipline

The previous part was pretty good, but after watching episode 8, I couldn't stand it anymore. Let the protagonist lick the dog! Even if you are confident that Hyokui will win if you reveal information about Hyokui, you should not tell anyone else. From the reader's point of view, the protagonist is a dog-licker and cannot control his mouth when he meets a woman! I retreated and couldn't watch anymore.

It's okay, but the author made the protagonist a bit empty, especially the protagonist's growth process. It gave me the feeling that after a few days of practice, he could reach Kanto, and after a few more days of practice, learn professional batting techniques and then develop a unique skill, he could reach the whole country. It has that hollow feeling. It should be described in detail, such as which one of the five dimensions it took to improve in a few days of training, how many days it was equivalent to after doubling, how many days it took to develop a unique move, etc. It is best to describe in detail a duel between the protagonist and others every two or three days, so as to highlight the protagonist's rapid progress.

Author, keep up the hard work, although some descriptions are a bit lacking but the plot is very good, [cool][cool][cool][cool]