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There is no problem. The only thing that is a little bit poisonous is that Luo Xiaobei is already dead. He must be revived

The front looks very interesting, but I don't know the back, so I'll give it four stars first. However, I feel it's a bit redundant to exchange power for the protagonist. It's better to just get Obito's virtualization ability. The character has the ability to protect himself, and with space, he has the necessary ability for behind-the-scenes flow. To be honest, it's pretty good, but it's not behind the scenes anymore. It's offstage frequently, and it doesn't have any special effects, it just shows the face.

It is recommended to create a neutral character like Thresh who collects the souls of the dead. He will go wherever there are corpses and souls, and act as a troublemaker by the way.

I have seen a movie of the same type. The protagonist is also the first person to use the system and potions. He is turned into a fish-man by the protagonist. There is also invisibility and a queen bee in the back. There are many more after that. I can only say that they are relatively similar. But both books are pretty good.

The author reads it to me, and I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update it. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding every day and every night. The Sworn Author: A Little Explosion of Fantasy To the author Hello, I am your reader My hometown is in a rural area and I have a donkey. This donkey is very talented and very good at grinding. He is very creative and the noodles he grinds are loved by everyone in the village. Even wealthy people from countless big cities come here to buy the noodles it grinds. This donkey has extraordinary intelligence and works hard every day. He has been working hard and grinding countless high-quality flours. The best flour has even won a world-class "Best Flour" award. All of us love this donkey, he is our divine donkey. But now he is slacking off and no longer grinding dough. We try to coax it and give it delicious food, hoping that it will continue to grind flour. But he said nothing and was unwilling to continue working. It said, "I'm tired and want to take a rest." As a result, it was dragged to the entrance of the village by the village chief and the villagers who were angry because they could not eat high-quality flour. They killed it and made it into donkey meat for burning. You said it was true. Even the donkeys in the production team didn't dare to rest like this. Why did you say it... Alas, why do you think I am talking to you about this? By the way, when are you going to update?

So far, it's good. I like the protagonist's attitude of watching with indifference. Please keep updating.

If the world view is well established, the wisdom of the officers and soldiers will be gained and somewhat unlimited. You can try to make people more three-dimensional, and you can also try to describe the psychological activities of the characters. In addition, you can also add a little environmental rendering, such as subdividing the interpersonal relationships of 001, or appropriately describing the lives of some supporting characters. The interpersonal relationships between Jin Dandan's supporting characters and the protagonist are complicated, and should not be too single or parallel. If you want to write about some local supporting characters, you can appropriately describe the local historical and cultural scenery, which can make the world view more three-dimensional and full.

The content is invisible and the writing is very good, but there is one problem, which is the background description of the supporting characters. Take Xiaoyu for example: the story has no meaning and color, but it takes up so much reading time.

What is more interesting in the behind-the-scenes article is the collision between the extraordinary and the secular order, the source of the extraordinary that controls everything behind the scenes, and the protagonist's attitude of indifference to everything. There is no right or wrong, it only depends on whether I want it or not! Well written!

It's very nice and not poisonous for the time being. The character of the protagonist is very attractive.

Damn it, I like this kind of article so much, I can have an intracranial orgasm after reading it

The protagonist is a calm type, a behind-the-scenes player novel. The people he transformed cannot betray him. Many of his abilities are very interesting, but the police in it are a bit too powerful. When the person transformed by the protagonist comes out to cause trouble, his abilities and identities are immediately confirmed by the police... Except for the protagonist and the invisible girl... Everyone else is a wanted criminal. Although the Chinese captain is official, he is also under various surveillance.

It's no problem to maintain this quality and learn from it. After all, novels basically follow this routine. So far, there aren't too many poisonous points. It's just that some parts of the plot are blunt and [full], but it's okay. It's not a poisonous point.

Well written. Although it is a second creation, the style is also very interesting. However, it is recommended that the main character should have less scenes facing the public. After all, it is a behind-the-scenes article [Sending Hearts]

This is a novel that should be read without thinking. You don't have to be too rigorous to pick it out. At least it's not the Holy Mother. Ordinary people can just die and there won't be any bloody plot twists.

The real behind-the-scenes flow is not like other scammers who do things without wearing separate vests and forcibly highlight the protagonist.

Very well written! Not sentimental, not holy, not belittling IQ, little people also have their own ideas, heroes have heroic thinking, and righteous people have a righteous heart.

It is much better than other versions, and the plot is also very smooth. It seems to be very eye-catching, but there is too much nonsense in it and there are some lags. I hope there will be changes in the plot later, but I estimate that the total number of chapters will not be too many, and too many routines will affect the perception.

Not bad. I've seen this genre before, but I didn't portray the characters as carefully as you did. [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

The plot is a bit bland, but the setting is interesting

Ok, generally speaking it's okay.

It's not bad. It's a bit imitating the hand-rubbing gods from scratch, but it's a bit dissuasive. The plot behind it is okay.

There are few behind-the-scenes scenes that Tomato can watch, no favoritism, no dog-licking

Damn, it's really good. It doesn't look as disgusting as other novels.

This book is novel, interesting and worth reading.

This score is at least 9 points. I feel very comfortable watching it.

This is called cool writing. Keep writing, it's not enough.

I quite like the plot, setting, and a good behind-the-scenes novel It's so spicy, the author won't run away, right?

Although it is a copycat work, it is well written. No exposure, no diaosi or virgin

The writing is very good and suits my taste. It is an excellent book in the behind-the-scenes story. I hope the author can stick to it.