Mortal Elixir

I have caught up with the latest chapter. Let me talk about my thoughts after reading it. The author's writing style is very good and the plot is also very smooth. It is quite realistic in comparison. The score is indeed a bit low. Personally, I feel it is at least 9.5 Points. There may be data errors and some typos in the front that prevent many people from reading. In fact, I don't think it matters much. Although there are typos, everyone can understand what it means. Come on, author, keep up the good work.

This feeling of letting me read slowly was only felt when I first started reading novels. I followed the first novel for more than 3,000 chapters. Great support from the author (๑ºั╰╯ºั๑) One hundred million chapters a day is enough, no need to work too hard ( ｡• 👅 •｡｀)

It's better than Taneda Mortal-ryu [face covering], I've been reading a few Taneda-ryu books recently and I feel like falling asleep while reading them

The plot of the story is compact, not verbose, and fascinating. I can't wait for the next part. Please update it quickly.

Very well written! The plot is also good!

This book has a rating of at least 9.5 On Tomato.

The writing is very good. I will continue to work hard and write the author's own point of view. It can be used as a reference for traditional leisure novels such as Mortals' Cultivation of Immortality and Covering the Sky. The layout can be larger, but it does not lack its own unique style.

The writing is very good and the pace is just right. It is worth recommending! It's much better than the mortal streams I watched before. Those who have been dragging their feet don't want to watch anymore. This one is really good. Please update it as soon as possible.

Not bad, not bad. I urge you to update it. I just happened to be stuck on Chapter 150. The foundation building was successful. I wrote too much and was procrastinating. If I didn't write too much, it's boring. I'll keep it on my bookshelf.

It's still pretty good-looking, very good, and it's considered to be the best in the world of mortals cultivating immortals. However, I have a question. Spiritual stones are used as currency for transactions, so they are called spiritual stones. Why can't they be used for cultivation? Saw more than 110 chapters. I only saw that spirit stones were used for trading. Does the 5-star change of the protagonist require Mu Xingling's child? Is he a eunuch who has no reproductive function? It is becoming less and less like the previous cautious and decisive killing without leaving any clues to others. I don't even want to read it, otherwise the writing has been pretty good before.

It looks good, but the male protagonist should tell the female protagonist more of his secrets, and why he can't buy a beauty pill. It's only 500 spiritual stones, which is very little for a man who can spend thousands of spiritual stones on his own initiative. Men should be nicer to their wives [laughing]

The plot has ups and downs, but there is a glimmer of hope at the end of the road. It has great luck and the character of Master Ergen.

I would actually rate it 9.0, It looks good. It just involves too many things, and the author's description of the elixir names and prices is a little casual. But it doesn't matter. The development system and world view are very clear, and the Conscious Human Resources Network is not obtrusive and relatively coherent. I've watched a third of it, and I recommend watching it.

I hope there won't be a knife, that... Confirm the relationship early, so that I can have the same feeling as Li Muwan. Overall, it's pretty good. I can read it all in one go. [Like] The shortcomings are a bit short [Explore] Li Erniu was a little unexpected, thinking he was brainless again, but he didn't expect...

Hurry up and update! There is not much to say. The protagonist has a hard time along the way. He is either looking for resources or fighting against the so-called rules. I won't say much about the heroine. There are more and more of them. It's a poisonous point. There are no other big problems. And the protagonist has a hang-up, but it's not very obvious. So, quick update! Not enough 😭

The book is quite good. The struggle between front and back does not destroy the combat power of killing people across two realms. There is no hole that has not been repaired and another hole has appeared. To say it is not poisonous, there are still some, but the writing is quite stable and you can take a look at it.

This is the authentic way for mortals to cultivate immortality The story of developing overseas power and the Southern Territory is not good to watch.

This novel is very well written, I like it better

It's well written, not mindless.

Yes, yes, it uses the environment of a fantasy world to satirize reality. Awesome [Like][Like][Like]

The plot is very good and there are no invincible cheats.

Really nice storyline, well written.

Not bad, I like it personally. I watched it all night [covering my face] What should I do when I go to work tomorrow?

It is relatively compact, has no fussy details, is not verbose, and is more comfortable to look at.

It is considered a good book on Tomato. Both the characterization and plot are very logical and fit well with the worldview created by the novel. But the development is too slow, according to this description. The ending is most likely just to become an immortal. If the Immortal Emperor and above don't have tens of millions of words, they can't write it down. There are probably very few novels of this size on Tomato.

The writing is so beautiful. Others have refined their Qi to the 9th level. You have refined your Qi to the 15th level. It takes 3 years to refine your Qi. The 15th level takes 45 years to build the foundation at the age of 60. The logic is too rigorous. Really scientific.

It must give a five-star review, I can't eat it alone [laughing evilly].

It is really not easy for me, a bookworm of more than 20 years, to see the present in one breath. This book gives people a feeling of meticulous writing and attractive storyline. Although the characters are lacking in personality, it can be regarded as a superior work. Come on, author, work hard to update.

The content is exciting, every step is carefully thought out, and it's worth a read.

The plot of this book is compact and well-conceived and foreshadowed!