Stealing Pen: I Became the White Moonlight of the Five Directions

Uh, based on the number of photos I've read now, I think I compared it with a place in Tomb Raider Notes, and then summarized the following points (don't spray, don't spray (›´ω`‹)), and there are some, uh, places that need lightning protection. First, the author's writing style is very good. It can be seen that it is easy to read and beautiful, and the description of the characters is also very clear. Secondly, the author added a mountain of personal settings in the introduction. I think it is the mountain of Mount Tai. Really, this can be regarded as an article based on the background and named characters of Notes on Tomb Raiders, because except for the background of Notes on Tomb Raiders and the named characters, it is completely different from the other places. I also think the character design is slightly better. When Heixiazi was a kid, I think it was completely different from the Tomb Raider Notes that I have been watching (,,վ㉨վ,,). I think Heixiazi's childhood should be because he was a young prince from an ethnic minority. He should He should be wanton and unrestrained, riding horses and running on the grassland, whatever he wants. His parents love him very much. Even if the family suffered changes later, and then he changed his character, he is still wanton and free and easy, but his smile cannot reach his eyes. Well, suddenly he said something a little sharp, what's going on? But it's really different. You can really think of it as another parallel time and space. The third thing, after that, I'm going to tell you about the whole story. It's really good to read as a parallel time and space. He writes it really well, because the whole story is not only different in character, but also the stories between it and Tomb Raiders are not very similar. The author also clearly said it in the introduction. Then I think his article is actually, well, some friends who don't like it very much don't recommend you to read it, because it really doesn't have much to do with Tomb Raiders. , For me, it's okay, I can watch it, and the overall story has ups and downs, and the characters are relatively full and distinct. It's really pretty to watch. I think it's okay, I've said all that needs to be said, and then let's leave it at that, little sisters, I don't have anything to say. Yes, I will continue to read it. If the later stories are not very good, I will quit. But I have only read the chapter about the black blind man now, but then again, so far, his writing has always been very good, so I am reluctant to quit. So that's my overall opinion on this book. I'm very grateful to my friend for patiently reading my book review. Thank you.

I really like it very much! ! ! ! ! Brother Da Zhang's character is perfectly portrayed! That kind of silent, secretly growing emotion bit by bit, let me teach you how it feels to love someone! Guided lovers! ! ! ! And Hei Ye's story line is also very exciting! Arrogant and dandy young master! But the relationship with her father is a bit different... Xiaohua is really, really well-behaved! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! So well-behaved that it makes people feel bad. This is all about loving you from the beginning! Teach people who don't know how to love to learn to love little by little, just like the saying in one sentence, "Some people are born to love others." Lin Xu is really nice, very gentle! Paying attention to the details of children and many psychological aspects will really comfort them. Because I am a child who lacks love, when I encounter parents like this, it's like the episode with the fat man! "Children who are not loved will be at a loss when they suddenly feel love." He is like a born angel! And every sentence of "I'm here for you" has a firm tone. He will pay special attention to details when dealing with small things, and will be relaxed about serious things. It will be really comfortable to get along with him. It's hard not to like such a person. Excellent, gentle and strong, and also loves children. I will be responsible for everything I do, and I will also be funny to liven up the atmosphere. For this reason, my evaluation—— ——"The fact that he brings happiness to others and the salvation of light is not his bonus, but that he is originally light and an angel."

It's rare to find a complete novel. To be honest, at first I thought it was a love-oriented all, and then the transition to a cp-oriented all was quite smooth. The character design is not actually OOC, but there are indeed many personal designs. The big difference with other fanfics is that the plot will not follow the content of stolen writing. To be honest, no matter how good the writing is, the same plot will still get boring. This book just skips the plot and writes about the process of getting along, which is quite heartwarming. In particular, there are very few articles about fat people. This supplement about fat people also completes the childhood of fat people to a great extent.

I am trying to save five people in the front. I like all four cubs! I cried when I was naming Ping. Later, you can see that Ping has become a different person because of Brother Xu's redemption character. In the middle, everything went dark because Brother Xu left. The plot of meeting two small worlds is so special. It's the first time I've seen such a setting. The second half is also a world of stolen pens set by the author himself. There are many custom settings. It can be seen that he has a lot of imagination. It is very interesting. It is the most unique fanfic I have ever seen.

It's basically an original plot, not very related to the original plot, except for the characters, but it's also very interesting. A lot of regrets have been healed, and Baima has survived; Black Glasses does not have to be worn all the time; Xiaohua is no longer the head of the family at the age of eight; Fatty has the company of relatives and friends; Wuxie has not become Sha Haixie... In the end, everyone became a member of the quick travel bureau and could always accompany each other. [Laughs][laughs]

I really like it, very very beautiful. The author's writing style is really good. When I read some passages, I always feel a warm and cozy feeling, which has a special atmosphere of life, just like the comfortable feeling of bright sunshine shining on the body. When I read it, I always feel my heart shrinking, like a warm current. Then the plot of the story is also very natural and not so stiff. The image of the little brother is well portrayed. He goes from being confused about not knowing love to slowly understanding love, then experiencing the feelings, and then immersing himself in the embrace of love. Naturally, the little brother who grew up in love is not as cold as the original. The protagonists Lin Xu and Ash are also portrayed very well, as well as the 521 system. It feels like they are not written on paper, they are like in front of me. Ash is a very gentle person, he will respect his little brother's ideas, and will tell him a direction when he is confused, to find his mother, so that he can feel love. I've just finished reading the little brother part, and that's it. Finally, author, come on.

All directions! ! ! The protagonist redeems everyone and is rewarded in the end! Everyone went to live in his world together, living together in the true sense! The emotions are also super delicate, and everyone has a certain degree of possessiveness towards the protagonist! Everyone is running towards Lin Xu and striving for this goal~ Lin Xu: My brother is a bit doha~

There is no fixed CP. The protagonist always takes the initiative and is not abusive. In addition to the CP, what is also touching is the gentleness and harmonious atmosphere displayed by the characters when they get along with each other. More everyday. The protagonists also get along quite harmoniously, especially in the later stages of the story. [Cool][Cool][Cool] Even though I don't like to criticize the protagonist's CP, I can still watch it. [Cool][Cool][Cool] The author's writing style is very good, and it is very beautiful. [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart] I hope the author can publish more new books.

An old fan would like to comment. I really like this author, so I don't need to urge me to update it. I am very happy to see more and more people liking this book. I still remember the paragraphs where the Shura Field is just for raising cubs. I read it and re-read it every day. I have read Xiao Hua Xiao Ping and Yi Qi countless times. It's so exciting to grow! To be honest, I don't like watching Shura Field, but I love watching the previous ones. I just watch the characters I like grow up little by little, become more powerful little by little, and then go for redemption. They are simply invincible. It's pure xp. It makes me happy, happy, happy. The subsequent plot direction is a little off, but everything still depends on the author's wishes. I hope there will be more encounters between Xiao Hua Xiao Ping and Yi Qi when they were young. Daily life is so comfortable and I like it so much. I hope that my homework will be great and I will continue to work hard, and then... Oh my god, let me fulfill my little wish (looking at you with big eyes)

It's so beautiful, I really want to see Shura Field soon [shy][shy]

It wasn't bad, but I felt a little uncomfortable watching it at the end. I felt like everyone was treating the protagonist like a monkey. No matter what, the writing is pretty good. It's sweet when it should be, and cruel when it should be. It can be used as something to pass the time.

I like, I like Brother Xu, I like Zhang Hengyue, I like Qi Yiqi, I like Wang Yueban, I like Xiao Chen, I like Wu Xiaowu. I like it because of the author. The characters are delicately drawn and the writing style is unique. Five stars is the limit of a review, not the limit of my love for the author's works. 521 Is definitely my favorite little system in Pirates fanfics. It's cute and pretty versatile. Overall, just two words, love it𓆩♡𓆪

Update soon! ! ! ! Really good-looking, all? I can accept it hahahahahaha, does the author have the opportunity to create a group? It would be better if there were 10 chapters every day [I understand] [I understand] [I understand] Hahahahaha

The writing is very good. Although there is no rating, it is probably because it has just been published and not many people have read it. I really like it. I hope it will be updated soon. I am looking forward to it. I will give it a five-star rating here. I think I will become an old fan in the future. The book is very interesting and updated regularly. You don't need to stock up on books, and you don't have to worry about not reading them for ten days and a half. Anyway, it's very good. [Thinking][Shy]

The emotional line is very delicate. The only regret is that there are no extra chapters, and there are no separate extra chapters. The ones before the weird dungeon were pretty good, but the ones after the dungeon were like an assembly line. I can only say that the rest was just average. Overall good

It's very beautiful. Please keep updating. Don't stop updating. (*σ´∀`)σ

This book is exciting, but not brainless, and it's super interesting! A hundred updates a day would be even better [smile] Is it over? What a pity! It feels so sudden, I hope there will be a sequel

I like this genre very much. The protagonist is not delicate and frail, but she really feels like a male mother.

It's nice to read [Sending my heart to you], but the new book is too short. Hey, I want to read Shura Field [Adoration], the author will give you a lot of support [please give me more updates]

It's very beautiful. Please follow the author more. It's not enough... I want to see Shura Field... Hurry up and follow it. I'm itching for you to be stuck, so what happened next? Please send me the archived manuscript to look at... Come on!

It's nice to read. I personally think it's a very bland sweet story. It doesn't have a sensational feeling and has a bland narrative. It's the first time I've read this type of story anyway, and it doesn't follow the original work. It's very novel. If you like strong emotions, don't read it. Other than this, it's still highly recommended (the five of them stopped at hugging and kissing, but the kiss was just on the neck, and not all of them kissed. I played with Fatty, but I personally feel that Fatty and the other four people have different feelings for the protagonist) [Love]

Okay, it's my turn too. It's pretty good. This is the first time I've seen this type of film. It's quite novel. He has a very distinct personality and is quite good. You can guess in the middle that they will join the department, and they will be very happy later o(*￣▽￣*)o

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh nossssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss from it.

I've never read Pirates, but this fanfic is the only one I haven't read. It's great! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

This is the first time I've seen the cubs raised in a tomb robber. It's so beautiful. I want to see the Shura Field soon [Cool] [Cool] No need to say more, just a five-star review without further ado

Hehe, he is super, super, super good-looking. He couldn't be more beautiful. I can't think of any words to praise him, because I can't find any words to praise him. He is really good-looking.

There are not too many strange settings, and the emotional line is clearly explained, so you don't fall in love out of nowhere. Raising a baby in the early stages is really sweet, as you can see the original character looking happy as a child. There was love that turned bad in the later period, but we also respected each other and did not impose CP in the end.

2025.7.19 Like, like, like, Lin Xu (very patient and gentle with children), I like the character, and there are some funny elements in it (all five people's favorability value is 90😊), it's a bit like running in both directions!

It's good-looking \(//∇//)\, the plot is not laggy, I just like it very much, the protagonist has no father, and the person is very nice. Among all the fanfics I have read, I really like this book (//∇//)!

It's very interesting, but there are too few of them. Personally, the character's personality is still written according to the original work. What I like most is that the white horse is actually alive! The little brother has someone to care for, and the little black blind man also has a master. The little flower doesn't have to be alone so early. Although he still takes charge early, but with the protagonist here, he doesn't have to face so many things by himself! But it's too little each time. It would be better if it could be more. I want to see Shura Field!