A Sleep **********

So far, it's going well. The protagonist is not arrogant and domineering. The character design is more to my taste. There is no cliché pretentiousness or slap in the face. Each character behaves in a normal way. I hope that the number of female characters can be controlled within a certain number, focusing on the development of several people and the emotional line of the protagonist, and fleshing out the characters' characteristics. Of course, I can eat fast food occasionally. If there are too many, I'm afraid that in some books, a character will appear once in turn in hundreds of chapters. If you can't remember the character, it will be no different.

Actually, I'm very curious. If the protagonist in Shenhao's novel is the kind of person who doesn't have much social interaction, and lives between two o'clock and one line every day, and doesn't go out during holidays, what will the protagonist do if he suddenly gets the system [laughing] [laughing]

Shu Huang, I see it's okay now... More trams, don't be a big G Cullinan

One palace, three lovers, it's a bit interesting

I read this book because my name is also Yang Fei. After reading about ten chapters, I felt pretty good. However, the author's protagonist is relatively philanthropic emotionally, but it does not affect the viewing. I hope the author can write well. [Cool]

It's really good, it would be even better if you could add pictures! [Laugh][laugh][laugh]

If you have money and strong abilities, there is really no need to go jungle. Aren't there a few good ones at the beginning? It's better to include them all than to play in the jungle.

The content of the article is very interesting, I hope the author can write good new ideas!

This book is good, but it's a pity that there are too few updates. Three chapters are enough for me, and I hope it won't end badly.

It looks good. I love watching it. So good.

It's ok but a bit short

Don't think too much, just feel good and that's it

I just like girls with lots of girls. If you are as scumbag as you are, be as scumbag as you are. Come on!

I don't know why the rating is so low. Good books must be read.

It's okay, let's see if it's okay

🐂🍺Okay, you can come on, come on

It's okay, I've seen it

Nice. IQ online.

Purely natural and pollution-free

Very satisfied, good quality

At present, the values ​​​​are relatively normal. There are no tens of millions of luxury cars, billions of villas, etc., Which are more in line with actual prices and a normal living standard.

😁😁😁Hehe, not bad, not bad

More scenes of enjoyment

Overall, the writing is good, and the harmony in the harem is quite good. After the system upgrade, I feel that this activity is not well mastered. It is relatively new and creative, but the overall feeling is not very exciting.