Who Is Coming to This World?

After reading more than 20 chapters, it can be seen that the author has his own ideas. He does not follow the popular fast food trend. There is no big problem with the logical characters. I hope that this level can be maintained in the future. I saw that the first few pictures in the fourth volume are really awesome. The details and facial expressions of the scenes are all very well captured. The male protagonist is so handsome when he appears.

It's very good. I mean the back. The first three volumes and the last three volumes don't feel like the same style at all. It can indeed be seen that the author's writing skills have grown during the period of updating this book. But some problems are that in the later period, the author basically does not use explanatory text, but relies on the plot to promote the readers to understand what happened. Why is it like this here, why is it like this there? To be honest, there is no problem with this writing method, but here is Tomato [Thinking], in fact, it is still possible to directly write out the foreshadowing and settings, so that people who read faster will have an impression. But for me, I really liked the main character in the later part of the book. There are also attributes of girls. I like the latest one so much, but why does she smell like a knife [face covering]? The author needs to be kind.

The three views are upright, the protagonist is beautiful, but he is not a virgin, and he is not aggrieved. It is a harem story, but the characters are not marginalized and there is no transparency. Very nice article

Although I have only read a few chapters, I can immediately see the amazing potential. Reality is not mindless, just like the feeling you get when you see the sentence "The world is fake, but love is real" in novels.

I personally feel pretty good. Over the years, this is the second apocalyptic novel that makes me feel more reasonable. The first one is Li Jiayu's twins [laughing evilly]. That book is my introductory apocalyptic novel and it is the first apocalyptic novel I read. Unfortunately, the author is missing [face covering]. This book still has great potential. Come on, author [top post] [please update] [I also strongly recommend] [bird food masterpiece] [already planted grass] [bookshelf plus one]

It's pretty good in front of me and I can't compare with some experts. But from what I've seen, except for the sudden incomprehension sometimes, there's nothing wrong with it. I'm sure it won't have such a low score. The author deserves encouragement for being able to write so many words. There is no feedback on the growth of strength. I feel that the male protagonist is very powerful and only he knows it. But it is not written in a vulgar genre. The supporting characters cannot express the feeling of the male protagonist's increasing strength.

Surprisingly good, basically no bad points, recommended, multiple female protagonists How to put it this way, it has a fairly classic protagonist (who has succubus attributes and will become stronger when encountering a strong one) without some vulgar slap-in-the-face plots. There are many female protagonists (as of Chapter 255, there are clearly Mo, Mu, Dai, Bai, Ning, Fan in preparation, and Su Xiaoling who only appears and disappears in the early stage), but the emotional line is well written and not too blunt. There are 17 heroines so far, plus Roland Wei'an and Su Xiaoling who were not written by the author, there are 19 (Mo Xinxue, Mu Xi, He Xiaoning, Daixia, Yu Mingqing, Bai Shaoran, Ji Ningxuan, Qing Lan, Murong Lianze, Ren Ying, Roland Aaliya, Lorta Mei, Su Li, Mengjie, Xu Wan, Qi Lian, Huo Tiya) To add (Miriel, Wen Han, Reina) 25.11.11

Good-looking, very correct outlook on life

How pitiful, there are not enough people to comment after 700 chapters, this is the first time I see this [face covering]

The writing and characterization of the novel are quite good. There are just some problems with the plot outline, and the plot is not exciting and engaging enough. The essence of the novel is to use plot to promote the plot, rather than to advance the plot through killing monsters and upgrading. Fighting monsters and upgrading is the most boring thing. Come on, five stars to show encouragement

I have read dozens of chapters, and the writing is okay. What makes me even more impressed is that there are not enough people to rate it, but I have written so many words, but it appears on the recommendation list. Come on

A niche treasure, I found a good book

Little girl? , It's very poisonous, the cognition of a 14-year-old is already very clear. Are you still playing hide and seek with your parents? Apart from this, the first part is pretty good.

To be honest, judging from the author's ratings and the number of people reading this book, I don't think that's the only thing. I've been into this book so far. The author has been very thoughtful in every chapter, including the description of the characters and the development of the plot. I really rarely comment on it, but I was able to read this book on my spare machine after school. I hope the author will continue to persevere. Come on author.

After watching the instructor BOSS in the novice period, I found that the protagonist is a scroll king who is liked by the landlord, and nothing else! After discovering that I was being hunted because of my ring, I didn't find a solution but just went out for a meaningless run (even running into no man's land)... In the end, I relied on powerful plug-ins to kill the novice instructor BOSS. Oh, by the way, I forgot to mention that! I only found out about my cheating by relying on the novice instructor BOSS's "villain dies because he talks too much" setting. Without this setting... (Mainly because I don't like to see this kind of routine anymore, so...)

Very good novel

Why is no one watching?

Beautiful, a niche treasure

Author, have you forgotten that there is Su Xiaoling?

Yes, but it is said to have multiple female protagonists, but in fact there is no emotional development at all. It feels like the label of multiple female protagonists is used to deceive people.

No poisonous spots have been seen so far. It shouldn't be only 6.4 Points. Unbelievable. At least it has 8.5 Or even 9 points.

I just hope that in the end, the female protagonists and the male protagonists can be happy together and don't have too much trouble [laughs][laughs][laughs] It's really beautiful, I support it, I support it [laughs][laughs][laughs]

A rare good book. I can see that the author wants to write something in-depth. Very good.

Overall, it's really good-looking. The writing is a bit shabby in the early stages, but it gets really good later on. At least it's considered excellent on Tomato.

It's pretty good, I think the plot is quite attractive, at least for me it's watchable [Like][Like]

It feels good at first glance, with delicate emotions and a very apocalyptic atmosphere.

It's very interesting, good luck to the author

Pretty good still

It's beautiful, but it's a pity that no one sees it

It's so beautiful, no lie