The Male Model I Keep Is a Powerful Warlord from a Foreign Land

I think I quite like it and the beginning is very attractive to me. I have been watching it for the past few days, from night to day. Help. Moreover, the writing of the female protagonist is also very enjoyable, and there are many plot twists that I could not have imagined, and it keeps reversing. Each character is also well-developed, (it's just that the heroine's father is very strange to him. Do you love her mother or not?) Then chapter 300 gave me the feeling that it was the best ending, because the reason why I kept reading was because I wanted to see the male protagonist know that this child is his. Author, please write the following plot well so that my breasts can remain unobstructed and make me feel better. Otherwise, I really can't stand it. And you are still serializing it. Why? If it's not the end, let me brush it up again [pouts]

It's super good. I eat this piece after eating it. It makes my stomach hurt from laughing.

The content is very interesting, but for personal reasons, oh, I begged the author to please make a side story to connect the brother-in-law and the heroine together. I really like them! ! ! ! ! And I really can't stand that feeling of regret😍😍😍😍 This is not to say that the male protagonist is not good, he is also quite good, but I still like him more than his uncle. This is just my personal opinion😃😃

Because I gave five stars to the extra chapter, Tomato's first book is not a cliche. It started out a little funny, so I kept reading. The male protagonist only loves the female protagonist from the beginning to the end. He started to dote on the female protagonist in the first ten chapters, but when I read it the second time, I found that the male protagonist didn't have many scenes. Not a bit cruel. I like Xiao Wan, the second male lead, and the extra chapters are all about him, so I'm still following it. The sad thing is that only one chapter is updated every day, which is not enough to read. This is the first time I have seen a book with more extra chapters than the main text. If you like Xiao Chenyan and Shi Yan, just read the main text to the end. It's a pity that Shi Yan and Xiao Wan, you must still have more to say about the extra story. The extra story talks about the famous scenes of telling 800 billion, how Brother Wan grew old, why he was three days late, how Shi Yan didn't love him (amnesia), and the sweet scene (the kind that makes you scream [shy]). In short, it is sour and sweet. Thank you Liu Qingci for your warmth in writing such a complete extra, although the ending is still be [crying]

I love watching it, Xiao Chen Yan, and Xiao Wan both like it very much. I think it's good that Xiao Wan has always liked the heroine. There is no need to arrange a girlfriend later. The feeling of three people helping each other is very pure. It's just a pain for Xiao Wan, so don't write it off.

It's really good to watch, but I want to see the relationship between Xiao Chenyan and Shi Yan [crying] Although the fourth brother likes Shi Yan, Shi Yan has no idea that the fourth brother likes her. They both went over. I want to see them going in both directions [crying]

It's so pretty, this Xiao Chenyan and Shi Yan are so incompatible The heroine in front is madly torturing the scumbag Later, I fell into the male protagonist's madness. Finally experienced human cloning. Ying Ying Ying was so touched, now that the update has arrived, she went to the military base to cook for him without notifying the male protagonist, hahaha. I'm looking forward to the follow-up. The author will update it soon.

I will tell you in the most straightforward and non-detoured terms that this is the author of the most beloved book in the world, and it is also the best-reading book [laughs] [laughs]. The extras are a blast to watch (the second male lead is a bit uneasy)

I feel that the author is very good at writing emotional dramas, whether it is about family or love, it is not bad. It breaks away from the traditional and very cliché plot. The uncle and nephew will not break up because they fall in love with the same person. I think the description of the relationship between uncle and nephew is very good. The relationship between the two people is still very good. The uncle also dotes on the nephew. I like it very much. Although I have only watched half of it, this kind of drama The descriptions of family affection and love are really great. The common feature of almost all the novels I read before is that the family affection is terrible. It seems that because of the appearance of a woman, harmonious family members will turn against each other. This is almost a very common mistake. However, the author did not write it like this, but jumped out of this garbage thinking. It is not the kind of two people fighting each other just for a woman. The plot is still okay, but there are still some loopholes. I hope the author can patch the characters in the follow-up, that is, continue in the extra chapter. Emotionally, the brother-in-law's feelings for the heroine are a bit too exclusive, and the focus is unbalanced. He wants to make him affectionate for the second male lead, because he wants to create a very affectionate man, and a somewhat sad kind. But maybe the emotions can be appropriately shifted to describe the character's other feelings. , Will be more important than focusing too much on one relationship. In the plot, the brother-in-law's family line has always felt a bit uneven, and even some of the family lines are not well described. In the plot, it seems that he is only portrayed as being very important in love. In love There is nothing wrong with writing about the importance of love in romance, but what is important is that the characters must reach a vivid level emotionally. The uncle is a good man, but he should not live just for Yan Ying in his life. The plot overly describes this direction and characteristics. At this point It is suitable for a rich and rational description of the character's emotions and the direction of life. It is not just because of meeting the protagonist, but because of the growth in getting along with the protagonist. Why do I feel that my brother-in-law's feelings are only for the heroine, and even somewhat divorced from the character's experience and emotional richness? The reason for Fu's rationality is very simple. It's him and Meng. Meng loves his younger brother very much and always protects him. The relationship between the two must be very deep. In fact, it feels like the uncle doesn't feel deep feelings for Meng. He treats the other person well just because of kindness. In the text, the uncle Shooting myself in the head with a gun in the casino is the reason why I have a bad feeling towards my uncle. The description of this paragraph seems to be to portray that Yan is more important to him than his own life. You can write it like this, but using dreams to be the shocker in this paragraph and to set off the emotional scenes of my uncle is not clear. Dream is important to my brother-in-law. Objectively speaking, the importance should be higher than Yan Yan. This is not to belittle the heroine, but from the perspective of experience and emotional investment. Taking his five-year-old brother to drift across the sea, along the way, he was beaten, begged, life-threatening, and even In the end, I had no choice but to stay with an old man for myself and my brother. I faced multiple miscarriages during pregnancy, but my husband didn't care. Why do I feel that this part is so bad? Because in this part, there is no inner description of my uncle's worries about Meng for himself, even a little bit of guilt. Even the conversation with Meng when he committed suicide was like, he was a very poor emotional loser, but Meng didn't care, kept forcing him, pressuring him, I think Meng is very pitiful, he is not an evil mother-in-law, it's not that I don't like the male and female protagonists, and it's not that I don't like Xiaojiu. In my opinion, Meng is always being pressured. Meng does not have a backer like Yan, and there is a steadfast person to protect her. There is a description of my uncle's psychological feelings about his impulsive suicide, as well as an emotional description of the dream, even a trace of the guilt caused by thinking about the tears his sister shed for him. This guilt is not a kind of moral kidnapping, but should be a description of the love for his sister from the heart, and even the guilt of almost making his favorite sister live in pain for the rest of his life. I feel that my uncle's feelings for the dream are not as high as for the male protagonist. I really hope that the author can patch up the relationship between the siblings and clearly describe their time together. This painful experience is very charming and very pitiful. The woman Meng is very charming, just like a cockroach, and is very resistant to stress. I actually like the siblings quite a lot, especially about the family relationship between the siblings. In the plot, there is a lot about the two. I also like the personal slapstick. My favorite trio is Meng, Luan, and Yan. The emotional lines of the family group are really good (cb). However, some plots do not deal with emotions very well. I don't like this part. In summary, it's because of this. The description of the relationship is not good, especially the relationship between the brother and sister. It even feels like Meng is paying for it without thinking. It is very pitiful. The brother-in-law's emotional contribution is only briefly mentioned. It is more like it is for Yan and Yan, as if he has never thought about Dream. , Maybe there are, but not many, not impressive. The ending of the three characters in the main story is still a pity. There is a gap between the mother and the child, and the uncle never calms down and thinks about his guilt for the dream. I really like the emotional line of the family of three in the extra chapter.

The early stage is super funny. I have read too many books, many of which I couldn't stand after reading a few chapters. I have already read this one. I really like my brother-in-law. It would be great if there were two female protagonists [crying]. This is the first time I read a novel and I like the second male more than the first one, but the male protagonist is also very good.