Modern young man Li Lei's soul traveled through the mortal world and became Han Laomo's uncle. Carrying the top-notch innate spiritual treasure, the tripod, refining elixirs, and practicing all kinds of weapons, in the mortal world of underworld cultivating immortals, should you cling to the future Han Tianzun's lap, or become Han Tianzun's lap?
Reader comments
Although it's unfinished, it's still a pity for me. There are very few mortal fans in Tomato, but there is a well-written novel that can be highly praised. As a result, it was reported by an unknown disaster brother-in-law, which led to the end. I am quite optimistic about this novel, at least it has the potential of 8.5 Points or above [cry] [cry]
The author will update quickly, update quickly. I want to read Chapter 2000, Chapter 2000. Hurry up! Hurry up! Write everything in your head. Write hard. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]
It's really well written, nothing too bad. It is not necessary to follow the protagonist, but more to be optimistic about and invest in Han Li. Because he is Han Li's uncle, he also cares about the younger generation. This is not a nanny article, I have my own ideas and paths. Overall, this is a readable Mortal Cultivation of Immortality fanfic, much better than other fanfics. I hope the author will continue to update and the quality will not decline.
But there are some minor pitfalls. For example, the person who makes elixirs has a very high success rate, even higher than that of the sect, and then he helps the sects to make elixirs, but no one wants to steal his opportunity. It feels a bit unrealistic.
It looks good, the protagonist has his own path to take, and Han Li is also in line with the original work. It's just that I write too slowly. Come on. 💪💪
It looks good, but the author, regarding the realm of monsters, that is, the legend of mortals cultivating immortals, why is it different from the mortal ones, first-order, middle-grade, high-grade, aren't they divided into magical weapons? What level should the monster be in? What stage should it be, early stage, middle stage, late stage?
It's okay, why don't you write it down?
Very interesting, the plot is compact and reasonable
Not bad, young man
The structure is quite clear. It is not like other people who write and make things up randomly, which is not consistent with the original work. Next, it must be combined with the original plot, it must be realistic, and the plot must be rigorous.
It's very beautiful. I didn't give you five stars because you updated it quickly.
A very good fanfic, the key is that the protagonist is good and the plot is not draggy.
For tomatoes, it's considered a mortal product.
This is one of the few that looks good. It must be praised. The author should work hard for more updates.
Am I going to have 5 chapters a day? It's awesome. You can read it.
Very good, it's my favorite type, I hope the author will update it more
It's very beautiful. I look forward to having my uncle and nephew live together forever.
Good book, at least for now.
Four chapters a day is awesome
You can try to take a look
If you have inventory, don't hide it.
Good quality, love watching it, keep it up
Although there are some shortcomings, it's okay. Chapter 37 is a bit naive.
This book is actually quite good. It's the best book I've ever read. However, it started to get a little shaky after chapter 40. The end of chapter 50 was because someone reported it, so it was just written down and ended.
It looks good. When the time comes, Han Li will build the foundation and give him a big gift package.
Write the next book soon
I just enjoyed watching the finale.
Come on, big sister who writes about cultivating immortals [Sending my heart]
Forget it, let me give you a good review. At least it's not a lump.
It started out well, but the content was a bit short.
It's pretty good in fan fiction. [Praise]
The writing is so wonderful, I enjoyed reading it!
Although it's unfinished, it's still a pity for me. There are very few mortal fans in Tomato, but there is a well-written novel that can be highly praised. As a result, it was reported by an unknown disaster brother-in-law, which led to the end. I am quite optimistic about this novel, at least it has the potential of 8.5 Points or above [cry] [cry]
The author will update quickly, update quickly. I want to read Chapter 2000, Chapter 2000. Hurry up! Hurry up! Write everything in your head. Write hard. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]
It's really well written, nothing too bad. It is not necessary to follow the protagonist, but more to be optimistic about and invest in Han Li. Because he is Han Li's uncle, he also cares about the younger generation. This is not a nanny article, I have my own ideas and paths. Overall, this is a readable Mortal Cultivation of Immortality fanfic, much better than other fanfics. I hope the author will continue to update and the quality will not decline. But there are some minor pitfalls. For example, the person who makes elixirs has a very high success rate, even higher than that of the sect, and then he helps the sects to make elixirs, but no one wants to steal his opportunity. It feels a bit unrealistic.
It looks good, the protagonist has his own path to take, and Han Li is also in line with the original work. It's just that I write too slowly. Come on. 💪💪
It looks good, but the author, regarding the realm of monsters, that is, the legend of mortals cultivating immortals, why is it different from the mortal ones, first-order, middle-grade, high-grade, aren't they divided into magical weapons? What level should the monster be in? What stage should it be, early stage, middle stage, late stage?
It's okay, why don't you write it down?
Very interesting, the plot is compact and reasonable
Not bad, young man
The structure is quite clear. It is not like other people who write and make things up randomly, which is not consistent with the original work. Next, it must be combined with the original plot, it must be realistic, and the plot must be rigorous.
It's very beautiful. I didn't give you five stars because you updated it quickly.
A very good fanfic, the key is that the protagonist is good and the plot is not draggy.
For tomatoes, it's considered a mortal product.
This is one of the few that looks good. It must be praised. The author should work hard for more updates.
Am I going to have 5 chapters a day? It's awesome. You can read it.
Very good, it's my favorite type, I hope the author will update it more
It's very beautiful. I look forward to having my uncle and nephew live together forever.
Good book, at least for now.
Four chapters a day is awesome
You can try to take a look
If you have inventory, don't hide it.
Good quality, love watching it, keep it up
Although there are some shortcomings, it's okay. Chapter 37 is a bit naive. This book is actually quite good. It's the best book I've ever read. However, it started to get a little shaky after chapter 40. The end of chapter 50 was because someone reported it, so it was just written down and ended.
It looks good. When the time comes, Han Li will build the foundation and give him a big gift package.
Write the next book soon
I just enjoyed watching the finale.
Come on, big sister who writes about cultivating immortals [Sending my heart]
Forget it, let me give you a good review. At least it's not a lump.
It started out well, but the content was a bit short.
It's pretty good in fan fiction. [Praise]
The writing is so wonderful, I enjoyed reading it!