A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: I Am Han Laomo's Uncle

Although it's unfinished, it's still a pity for me. There are very few mortal fans in Tomato, but there is a well-written novel that can be highly praised. As a result, it was reported by an unknown disaster brother-in-law, which led to the end. I am quite optimistic about this novel, at least it has the potential of 8.5 Points or above 😢 😢

The author will update quickly, update quickly. I want to read Chapter 2000, Chapter 2000. Hurry up! Hurry up! Write everything in your head. Write hard. 😏😏😏😏

It's really well written, nothing too bad. It is not necessary to follow the protagonist, but more to be optimistic about and invest in Han Li. Because he is Han Li's uncle, he also cares about the younger generation. This is not a nanny article, I have my own ideas and paths. Overall, this is a readable Mortal Cultivation of Immortality fanfic, much better than other fanfics. I hope the author will continue to update and the quality will not decline. But there are some minor pitfalls. For example, the person who makes elixirs has a very high success rate, even higher than that of the sect, and then he helps the sects to make elixirs, but no one wants to steal his opportunity. It feels a bit unrealistic.

It looks good, the protagonist has his own path to take, and Han Li is also in line with the original work. It's just that I write too slowly. Come on. 💪💪

It looks good, but the author, regarding the realm of monsters, that is, the legend of mortals cultivating immortals, why is it different from the mortal ones, first-order, middle-grade, high-grade, aren't they divided into magical weapons? What level should the monster be in? What stage should it be, early stage, middle stage, late stage?

It's very beautiful. I didn't give you five stars because you updated it quickly.

The structure is quite clear. It is not like other people who write and make things up randomly, which is not consistent with the original work. Next, it must be combined with the original plot, it must be realistic, and the plot must be rigorous.

Am I going to have 5 chapters a day? It's awesome. You can read it.

A very good fanfic, the key is that the protagonist is good and the plot is not draggy.

Very interesting, the plot is compact and reasonable