A Kiss Out of Turn Beneath the Starlight

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How can I put it? There is suspense, but it is also very irritating. The male and female protagonists do not open their mouths and do not say anything. When the female protagonist says that the male protagonist is angry, she does not know why she steps on the male protagonist's point of view. The suspense setting is good. Is it a novel or a short story?

The plot at the beginning was really frustrating, but later on it became more and more mind-numbing. It was not only the story of the protagonist but also the supporting characters. There were also many twists and contrasts. All in all, it was a good article. Good luck to the author.

It's pretty good. The writing is a little childish in some places, but the plot is good. I read more than a hundred chapters in one go. The plot doesn't drag on. It's been a long time since I read a novel all night long... And when can I release Chapter 151?

There are too few [crying][crying][crying] I want to see the introduction scenes of the male and female protagonists earlier. I originally thought it was a sweet story, but now I feel heartbroken when I see so many plots [crying][crying] The author's chapters are so short, and he writes two chapters a day. When has this day come to an end? [Crying][crying] I originally thought this novel was pretty good, but after reading some comments from sober netizens, I didn't think it was that good either [scrolls] 1. The character design is not good🙅The heroine is what netizens call a beautiful, weak and tragic character. The author's description says that she is tough, not a weak dodder. However, from the beginning to the end of the injury, the hero almost always comes to help, and always forgives those who hurt him, and is unable to make them pay the price. However, the process of forgiveness is written as if the heroine is very entangled and makes a decision after weighing the pros and cons. The same goes for the male protagonist. The male and female protagonists are simply a pair of mutes. They talk about secretly missing the heroine and secretly protecting the heroine, but at the same time they allow the adopted daughter to hurt the heroine. They also inexplicably hurt the people who also protect the heroine, allowing those who hurt the heroine to take advantage of the loopholes😥 There are also some supporting roles that I won't go into details. You will understand after reading some long reviews. That Qiao Zhi doesn't look much smarter than the others, she just knows how to pretend, and it is easier for the heroine to trust... I feel that the heroine after amnesia is a bit stupider, maybe she really crashed [smile] Before amnesia, being a dog licker felt like either a substitute or blocking a knife, but I don't understand her behavior after amnesia 😪 It's very strange to become an "elite" or a president Summary: Except for the heroine's manager friend and the two signed "artists", those who don't know the characters can basically say that all the characters are evil (the male protagonist can't be considered a good person) 2. Female Competition 🤦‍♀️ Most of the girls around the female protagonist like the male protagonist? Are there no other men? A circle of people surround the female protagonist and want to harm her. They write the male protagonist to be strong but not loving enough and unable to protect the female protagonist. They keep saying that it is not easy for him and so on. There are reasons and reasons to write the female protagonist well. Weak, so what if she forgives (not pursues) those who hurt her, this is not kindness, others continue to hurt her, the heroine now feels a little mean-spirited, but not much, she can fight other people, but she considers this and that, anyway, she does not make a move, then the hero saves her, acting as a living Lei Feng, and later she is very pretending to see the heroine 3. The foreshadowing is huge, although it's not a bad thing, but it's been so long, and I haven't written half of the famous scene in the introduction, which means it has to be very long. However, I buried a lot of foreshadowing in the previous article and I haven't collected a few of them yet. I have read so many chapters, how can I go back and review the foreshadowing, and with this update speed, after seeing the later part, I have forgotten a lot of it. Summary 2: People in the article, especially the male and female protagonists, are not easy [smile] They all have their own difficulties [smile] No one cares about our readers' heartache🙃💅💃🕺 (it's better to dance)

Generally speaking, it is quite attractive, but the relationship between the male and female protagonists is too slow. At present, it seems that the love between the male protagonist is humble, paranoid and deep. There is a big misunderstanding with the female protagonist, which makes the female protagonist want to kill the male protagonist more than 30 times. Of course, I want to know what misunderstanding is true, because the female protagonist has amnesia and cannot remember many things. Therefore, the male protagonist has no choice but to practice a trumpet and use the pseudonym Z to fall in love with the female protagonist. The female protagonist has not yet discovered her true feelings for the male protagonist, and she is looking forward to the day when her horse falls apart~ The heroine Li Sui should have a big hidden vest waiting to be exploded. I thought that the heroine before she lost her memory was a love brain, and she chased Huo Youning shamelessly. Others thought that Li Sui must have fallen in love with Huo Youning, but as the truth was uncovered little by little, it seemed that he was just a shield, and the heroine had someone to protect. But after losing her memory, the heroine felt a little self-righteous. She thought she was looking for a substitute for the hero. There was a misunderstanding and she didn't ask for help. She failed in teaching her younger brother. For now, yes, the younger brother was designed to have an extra child. Half of it is the heroine's responsibility. The other half is because the younger brother can't stand up on his own. I hope he won't grow crooked in the future. Looking forward to regaining his memory and becoming stronger, Li Sui will shine when he regains his memory and will not be indecisive. Discover Lin Zhi's true face as soon as possible I hate Lin Zhi more than Liya, a vicious and dark black lotus. If you are not good, you will not be able to see others being good. There are too many foreshadowings. I look forward to the heroine's big vest.

The plot is quite good, the characters are well drawn and not stereotyped. My personal feeling is that the preparation for some of the memory fragments of the heroine before she lost her memory is too trivial and very procrastinating. The original relationship between the hero and the heroine, the original relationship between the hero Z and the heroine, the original relationship between the senior brother and the heroine, and the relationship between the hero and the deceased lady. At first I would guess that the heroine and that lady had a certain relationship, which has always been the case. The foreshadowing of her death is related to the heroine, and the car accident between the hero and heroine has been buried. However, there have been no other clues so far. It looks like an amnesia gag superimposed on a stand-in literary gag. However, judging from the length of more than 400 chapters, the foreshadowing so far is indeed too implicit and protracted. I hope that the next plot of the manor will make some breakthroughs in the heroine's tracing of the memory fragments and in revealing the relationship between the protagonists. Overall it's pretty good. I haven't seen such a characterization in a long time that makes me more able to watch it. I look forward to continuing to update it.

There are many details in this book that are worth reading. At first I thought it would be a scene where I lost my memory and saw my boyfriend's true identity and married my brother-in-law directly. After reading it, I found that there are many details worth digging out, especially Liya's identity. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Personally speaking, I think the author can write suspense novels. I personally think that the emotional plot between the male and female protagonists after chapter 190 left me a little speechless. I don't understand the male protagonist's connivance and turning a blind eye to others hurting the female protagonist. I feel that the male protagonist does not love the female protagonist, but is just possessive and paranoid. Also, z is too... Horrifying➕crazy. I felt so suffocated when z was in love with the heroine. I don't know what the heroine likes about z. I can only say that the heroine is too soft-hearted, beyond the soft-heartedness of ordinary people. The male protagonist and Z have both kissed the female protagonist, but the female protagonist can't even realize that they are the same person? This is…. But overall it's still okay, the author is very good and awesome 👍🏻Keep up the good work [Sending my heart]

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