综漫：你管一刀火葬叫赫刀？

Chapter 120: Abandoned. The character fights are well written and quite enjoyable. However, the author's personal style is very strong. It's okay for Demon Slayer, as the spells have already incorporated a lot of personal things. Next, we need to integrate Demon Slayer and the Xingyue world to create a big fight. I prefer the more traditional, original comic book world, but I have no luck with this kind of thing. ☕

The story inside is very exciting. Although the protagonist is invincible, he can still feel the splendor of the original world, which is equivalent to filling up the regrets in his heart. The bond formed will make you smile when you think about it. I hope the author will update it more. This book can be said to be the best among the time-travel comics on the bad streets.

It's good. It's very interesting and interesting. I heard from the author that there may be multiple female protagonists. Butterfly Ninja is one of them. He has several beauties. The male protagonist admits to having several beauties. He also admits that he and Butterfly Nin are an old couple. However, I always skipped the main world. If you don't watch the main world, there is no heroine. When traveling through the plane, the male protagonist is obviously a heroine without a heroine. He is cold and indifferent, has a bit of evil taste, is not close to women, and does not entangle with women. Time travel is only to improve his cultivation and change the plot. It seems that the female protagonist is superfluous. This kind of naturally loveless male protagonist has many female protagonists. I am speechless. It seems that the feelings come out of nowhere, as if the female protagonist comes and the male protagonist accepts it. Anyway, the ending of Butterfly Ninja in Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba is wishful thinking. The male protagonist has no expression and is still cold and indifferent. Fortunately, so far, there is no love line in the world. One star is missing because there is a female protagonist. The one star is missing is because there is no romance with the heroine in the world. I still like to see the male protagonist growing up and trying to become stronger and invincible, changing the plot. It seems a bit complicated later on, so I'm abandoning the article.

In the dim and dusty nothingness, the bright light is indeed the light and solid heart The road is divided into two parts, but the thoughts are solemnly converged. It is the interweaving of thousands of avenues and the interweaving of the boundless heavens. Flat fall. Reincarnation, picking up. Yin and Yang, Nai Luo. Time and space, quiet fall. Stars, turn and fall. Light and darkness, dark fall. Birth and death, sequential fall. Life and fruit, final fall. Eternity flat fall. Reincarnation. Introduction The road that has been walked for eternity, the true soul that has settled in the pure land The spirit of no way returns from many to one, calmly descends to the root of Nirvana Even in this life, there is a destiny that is difficult to cut off Even if I return home, I still have unforgettable luck The flat fall is the returning spirit Pick up, yin and yang, palindrome Two pairs of Qi gradually drifting away, lost in the chaotic wandering The situation of bilateral realization and reconstruction is transformed into the deep sequence of each division. Even if we are in opposition, there are commonalities that are inevitable Even if we are separated, there is still an unbreakable unity Picking up and falling is the exchange of separation and recombination. Naraku. Time and space. Transition Multiple lines of twists and turns, sinking at the end and tracing back to the source Several markers for recording changes, passing by in an instant and without calamity Even if everything changes, there are still memories that are hard to pass away Even though there is diversity, there are still lingering things that are difficult to stop. The fall of Nai is the legacy of looking back Silence. Stars. Purpose. Pan-color stars shine in the Milky Way and the void Numerous streaks of clear silk and sunflower seeds spread over the night and dusk Even though it is bright, there is still a feeling of regret that is hard to leave behind. Even though the oak tree is bright, there is an indescribable clarity The quiet fall is the crystal clear clouds Fall, light and darkness, follow-up A few drops of darkness in the dark night, stained in the abyss, sea and secluded curtain Only the faint morning glory of Yao is released, and the feeling is released in the vast sky and supporting the spirit Even if the shadow is condensed, there is still a blazing light that is difficult to penetrate into the ink Even if the sky falls, there is still a darkness that is hard to escape Turning and falling, it's the intertwined fog Mingluo. Life and death. Supplementary sentence Things that are as weak as a clairvoyance are sent to heaven, earth and the sea Fragments of dust and lifeless embers, sinking into loneliness and secrecy Even if it withers, there is still bloom that cannot be concealed Even in nirvana, there is indescribable vitality The fall of Ming is the gap between existence and loss Preface. Destiny. Inscription. Half of the signs of friendship and harmony are performed in Jie Jing and Tong Xi The fruits are arranged in a circle, protected by the waves and air conditioners. Even if I search for it, there are still reappearances that are difficult to replicate. Even if we are reunited, there will be times when it becomes difficult to belong. The falling sequence is a sign of the future Final fall, eternity. Quatrains The little-dot Taoist reshaped shapes are illuminated by the stillness of the heavens Various ways of thinking and thinking are endowed with the divine appearance of Guanghui Even if we lose contact, there are still things that are difficult to decide. Even if you wake up, there are still things that are hard to let go of. Finally, it is the stagnation of nothingness.

Very good, there is no brainless plot, the plot arrangement is reasonable, and the writing is also good. The protagonist is decisive in killing without being brainless, and does not overwhelm the protagonist's combat power. It is a refreshing novel, it is exciting, and has good-looking daily routines. There is no bad point at the moment, but the number of words is too few. The most taboo thing about this kind of multi-world novel is that it is too slow. It is easy for people to read the book and then run out of people. I suggest you read more. Finished spreading flowers! ! [Notice]

My writing is not bad, it's getting better the more I write, keep up the hard work! Then, I want to know if it will be a single heroine or a harem? I'm a bit obsessed with the emotional aspect. I hope that for the time being, I will focus on improving my combat power, and I will write more about the emotional line later. After all, the protagonist still feels that he is not strong enough in the main world, so come on!

After reading it for a while, I found the story to be okay. I didn't give it five stars because there were some demeanor descriptions. A 175-year-old strong man who was originally very serious suddenly came to act cute or something. Just thinking about that scene made me feel uncomfortable. But so far, I haven't found any other big problems here. If there is, I'll talk about it.

The author's plot arrangement is okay, nothing too brainless. But the tension in the text is not enough. The description of the fight feels a bit lacking. But this is Tomato, and I won't say much more about free novels [face covering]

The author's writing was still relatively green at first, but by the end of Demon Slayer. It can be seen that the protagonist is slowly growing up, and the author's writing style is becoming more mature. I've only just seen the ending of Spell, and I'm looking forward to its future developments. (I'm not very good at speaking)

It's pretty good, and the content is also very exciting. I gave it four stars because the protagonist of "Swords and Swords Not Distinguished" is a time traveler, not an aborigine. Do you think an aboriginal can understand the characteristics of the world, but a time traveler cannot understand it? My opinion A knife is a knife, a sword is a sword, and you use the knife to practice swordsmanship

After reading it, uh, I personally feel pretty good. Let's talk about the advantages first. The plot language is relatively good, and the map forces displayed are relatively clear. Then, the world view of the comprehensive manga is more in line with my appetite. This is a refreshing novel with many exciting fighting scenes, which is more suitable for people who like to watch those exciting battles. The author also has some interactive messages at the end of each chapter. It will let people know the process of the book from start to finish, such as grading and so on. There is also the author's simplest blessing [face covering] Now that we've talked about the advantages, let's talk about the disadvantages. Well, the time scale is a bit confusing, the main plot is a bit short and fragmented, and the ending of the main world is a bit hasty and the plot is a bit not compact enough. However, I still feel that it is one of the few comprehensive comics in Tomato software that can be read. Recommended. Come on, author!

Generally speaking, it is a relatively good simulation novel. The protagonist in the author's writing has an independent personality. He still maintains an untainted personality despite traveling through various worlds. It can be clearly felt from the author's description that he has a distinct personality and is separated from each world. In terms of the plot, there is nothing too toxic and it is relatively smooth. There are advantages and disadvantages. The protagonist in the article travels through many worlds, and each world has its own advantages, which also leads to a greater demand for animation knowledge. When I was reading some of the anime, I had not seen the plot of the original work, which caused me to have a greater sense of fragmentation while watching it. This is also a common problem in simulations, especially in time-traveling animations. The worlds of other simulations are imagined by myself, and the background plot descriptions are relatively detailed, so there is basically no sense of fragmentation. I believe that the author has put a lot of effort into this book, and I also hope that the author can continue to work hard to bring us more wonderful stories. If the author can introduce the plot background and timeline when the protagonist travels to other worlds, so that readers can understand the specific conditions of the world, this will be of great help to readers, especially those who have not watched anime in this world. I hope the author can continue to work hard. I have been watching [Love] I just found out that this article has been finished. I look forward to the author's new work, don't let it be unfinished [roll eyes][roll eyes]

A very, very good novel. The writing is good and the plot is exciting. I haven't seen such a good comprehensive comic in Tomato for a long time. However, the ending is a bit rushed. Also, the protagonist Sakura Kuni, the Japanese name, is a little uncomfortable. The Japanese name of the time travel can be used. After all, the Japanese name of the time-traveling Japanese manga and the Chinese name of the main world increase the reader's sense of immersion.

In view of Goldfinger's positioning, the background of the main world is not small. , It feels better. The copy world can be streamlined, and the main world can be richer in content.

I like the genre very much. It travels through multiple worlds, but the plot is compact and not messy. I personally think that one shortcoming is that the characters are not vivid enough, especially the characters in the main world, but it is already very good! Come on, author!

I watched the latest chapter in one go. The storyline did not completely follow the original work, which is good. It has its own unique rhythm and style. Authors also need to remember, what kind of novel are you writing? You have written hot-blooded comics from the beginning. You have always written hot-blooded comics. Changing the style in the middle will only ruin your reputation. So don't listen to some people's suggestions about daily life and plot. Hot-blooded comics don't care about these. [Punch out] [Punch out] [Punch out] [Punch out] [Punch out]

I have just finished reading Chapter 108 of the first volume. I have one comment. Overall, it is okay. Of course, there are many comments pointing out the character problems of the protagonist. It is understandable, but I can accept it. I hope the author will write better and better [Love]

There is no serious poison in this book. The main character has a sister, a brother, and Weixia in the main world. I particularly like other places. It is suitable for those who like unlimited anime and specializes in knives.

It's a book that I personally like very much. Unfortunately, I don't have the habit of reading books now. I just like to read the ending. Otherwise, I would have to support it. It's just that the ending was too rushed, the writing was a bit sloppy, and there are still a lot of things that haven't been written, but overall I still like it very much.

It's very good. It's a rare good book. Although the happy ending plot is cliche, it's really touching. The psychological portrayal of the characters is also very good. The story of the protagonist returning to the main world every time is also very exciting. It's considered a good book.

It's really good, and it's quite good among comic novels. The author's writing skills are still very strong, his ideas are solid, and he is very detailed. The plot is very coherent and thoughtful. Personally, I think 9:06 is fine.

I think it's pretty good-looking, but of course it's hard to agree on what everyone thinks. If you have an opinion, you're right. The protagonist is quite invincible, not the kind of invincible that sweeps away everything from the beginning. It's like he has information gaps and is always one level higher than the enemy.

Advantages: steadily growing writing style, passionate battle descriptions, well-paced plot arrangement, many and intensive exciting points. Disadvantages: There isn't much of an emotional line component. To me, the plot is actually bland, because I prefer novels with emotional lines. Writing original worlds and anime heroines but not accepting them may be a poison point for some people.

The writing was a bit rough in the early stage and some of the plots were a bit disappointing, but it is better than most comprehensive comics. The quality of this rating is very reasonable. There are a few 9-point YY novels about never seeing a woman that made me vomit. With more than 100 chapters of Fate, it is obvious that the author's writing style has improved. The multiple female protagonists are not reflected in the current review, but this is a plus point for me. I will look at it in the future. It can maintain its absolute superiority to some 9-point novels.

It's not that I thought that more than 40 w words would be enough for me to read for two days. I read it all at once and finished reading it in one breath. The copies were very good, but the reality almost made me jump to it. I look forward to the author's next fantasy and martial arts novel.

I pay tribute to the author. I think the time travel novel you wrote is very good, so I use my two accounts to give you five-star praise. The affirmation of a ten-year-old bookworm

I pay tribute to the author. I think the time travel novel you wrote is very good, so I use my two accounts to give you five-star praise. The affirmation of a ten-year-old bookworm

There are a lot of bad reviews in the comment area, but if you start reading it now, it is actually quite good. The author has made major changes to the first few worlds. In the later period, because the author wanted to finish the writing in advance, many story details were skipped, and only some of the content that changed the plot was retained. I used to read it from novels with reviews of more than 9 points, but I didn't expect this one to be okay.

I read it in one go, and it's a very smooth process. I hope the writing gets better and better.

The Tomato novel is very well written. The character chooses swordsmanship as his major skill, which is very lovable. I am also very interested in choosing the fan world. Fully recommended! ! !