Summer in the Otherworld of the Demata

I've read more than half of it and would like to comment. The author should be a writer with a more orthodox and old-school style. From the plot, world view, and rhythm, it can be seen that it is not a writing style that Tomato prefers and is common, or it should be said that it is not a popular writing style at the moment. Nowadays, we pay attention to "emotional mysophobia". The pace must be fast, the plot must be explosive, and the world view must be passable. If there are real loopholes, one sentence can explain it all. This article has a very rigorous world view, with almost no loopholes. Some of the poor connections should be related to flesh cutting. CP does not insist on being clean. It can be said that no one who appears on the show cares about it. I like it very much. Nowadays, Internet articles are addicted to "first love" and cannot extricate themselves. However, I think the real beauty is that no matter when and where, you may encounter a new story. Just because you have stopped before, it does not mean that it is wrong to start again. You have failed completely, or even become crippled and have nothing. You are still beautiful. You can choose to bloom, you can choose to be a tree, and you can also be a ray of wind, as long as you want. I have always taken a clear stance that I don't like Shuangjie culture. Of course, this is not the core reason why I like this article. This book would rather be slow-burning but also logically complete, with just the right amount of passion and excitement, and a sense of beauty that comes from a slow pace. The protagonist in it is not perfect. He is inspired by the Virgin, helps the poor, and uses the values ​​​​forged by the civilized society of another world to face the primitive people who are struggling to survive in Ningguta. The tower girl is the type that I dislike very much. I am most annoyed by people who are willful and unreasonable. Shuangtai also has his own character flaws, but they exist in perfect harmony in the world built by the author. It makes me feel, ah, so annoying, but they are so real, they should be like this. Some books make people want to take on the role, while other books make people "watch that period of history." This book is the latter, so I only responded to half of it. Don't leave a bad review just because the setting is not satisfactory. It is normal for the story not to be to your liking, but the story itself is well written. Only with more excellent authors can we see more different worlds. I hope to see more magnificent and gorgeous dreams from the author, come on. I saw the back, Tomato hasn't been posted yet, don't stop me from leaving a message I was inspired by this after seeing the promotion battle. Excellent group figures make progress together and walk hand in hand. You can be better than me, even if you are not the protagonist. Competition is too serious now, and it is the same in novels. Even if the male and female protagonists have to compete, it is good to be able to accept the so-called dual strength. Most people cannot accept "each is the king", and they don't like the male protagonist to be stronger. In "Summer", the supporting characters shine brightly. They can become the crown prince one step ahead of the protagonist, become a landmark and decisive figure, and become a pivotal name in history. Just like Tai Da, he became a brave man again with his broken body, married a wife who was no less outstanding than the male protagonist's "sister-in-law", healed each other, and achieved a better life. I like such a "complete" story. It is not just the success of one protagonist and the happiness of a pair of CPs. It is a gorgeous fireworks show under the bright starry sky. Each one is dazzling enough, which is a perfect night.

This article is a very good article. The only thing I don't like is the CP of Abiwo. It gives the impression that there is a resource person in a good drama. He adds more characters but has no acting skills and always acts like a jerk. The character design is particularly unlikable, but this is the author's preference. Every time I see her appear, I want to give up on writing, but the writing is not bad. This feeling of not being good or not is too uncomfortable and too inconsistent 🤦 And what kind of grand duke is there, what kind of love rival drama is there?

I really like the Western Fantasy Infrastructure. When I read it, I thought it had been moved. I didn't expect that the author himself re-edited and uploaded it. If possible, I hope the author can revise the content related to spells and items in the later stage. I have a vague impression that it felt a little rushed in order to promote the plot in the later stage (I won't go into details to prevent spoilers). The ending always felt that it developed too fast. Overall, this is my favorite novel in this genre in recent years, and the emotional lines are very good. Of course it would be great if the author could write a few more new extras [sending my heart]

I personally think it's the most beautiful one I've ever seen in Red Persimmon. It's super good. Because the introduction said it was finished, I watched the uncut version and finished it. It's very good, the characters are good, and the plot is very smooth 😳

It's super good-looking. Whether it's plot or style, it's the type of Western fantasy that I like and look forward to. It's just that it's not the traditional Harry Potter Western fantasy, but the Western fantasy with a wild and romantic twist that I like, really. Ever since I learned about western fantasy novels, I have fallen in love with this genre. However, there are too few novels of this type and they belong to a niche genre. And there are even fewer novels in this niche genre that I can write about for Simba. This is the second full-length Western fantasy novel I have read. Sure enough, the charm of old novels is still greater. (PS, the first one was not on 🍅, it was seen on another platform a long time ago) I don't really like to talk about the plot when I comment, because I don't like spoilers, so I feel that if I say it, it will have an impact on others. But I want to say that this type of novel will give me a magical romance, a unique passion, a kind that takes you into another world, and allows you to understand the author's thoughts, or spread them to me as a reader from the author's thoughts. It can lead me to experience the unique romantic feelings of another different universe. This is also the reason why I like reading novels so much, that is, I can travel in different worlds. Moreover, the author's expression of emotion is not a particularly strong personal emotion, but a relatively rational way of telling a huge worldview in the author's thoughts. It feels like the author saw it and told us about it. Then during the lawsuit, he brought the author's unique romantic feelings to give us a different experience. A familiar, unchanging form of life that is different from our daily lives. It's the so-called feeling of reading thousands of books and traveling thousands of miles. Really, the reason why I like novels is because they give me a different feeling, but they are not the kind of emotions that are forced on me. Instead, let me simply watch, feel, and even enjoy the unique plot of the novel. Looking at the differences in the lives of the people of Dimata, I was thinking and looking forward to the changes that Master Mu would bring to them. It can be said that as a bookworm for nearly twenty years, I haven't seen such a fascinating novel in seven or eight years. Moreover, there is another regret, that is, the ban on sex is too serious now, and it cannot be allowed at all. This is really a pity. It is actually a very important component in the novel. It does not mean that without it, the novel cannot be read, but its presence really adds a little more vitality and even vitality to the novel. Finally, I would like to express my deepest gratitude. What you wrote is really good and great. I hope you will continue to work hard! Crazy comments every day, ooh ooh ooh ooh ooh ooh ooh ooh ooh ooh ooh! I really want to watch another Western fantasy of this type. Rough, brutal, and extremely romantic, with a bit of fantasy elements and western fantasy color. Is there, is there more, will there be any??? I want to see a movie of this type, this kind of heart-pounding feeling, this kind of unparalleled romance, this kind of indescribable excitement, can I still find it?

I really recommend this book, it's so beautiful that I don't know what words to use to describe it. I didn't skip a chapter in the whole book. I can vouch for the fact that I won't read novels for the rest of my life. It's really good. The world view is broad, the characters are well-depicted, and the plot is neither elaborate nor lengthy. It should be detailed or brief. When I read it, I could keep simulating the general scenes in the book in my mind, but I couldn't imagine how grand and spectacular the scenes in the book were. This is the only novel with more than 800,000 words that I have finished reading in the past few years. It is also the only book that I have never thought about giving up writing. It is also the only book that makes me excited enough to write a long review (compared to the book reviews I have written myself). The biggest feature of this book is that it is not the same as the modern novels produced by the assembly line. This is an "innovative" book. The biggest feature is that it is new. I have never read a book that makes me want to read it so much. I personally think this book can be published, but I don't want it to be published because it will be overhauled and a lot of things will be changed. I always think that I am just a voyeur, peeping at their lives in another world. I only hope that they can live a good and happy life where I can't see them. Thanks to the greatest author in the world for allowing me to know them in another world. 💕 I just want to send my blessings to all of them in another world: I hope you will be happy in the place we have not seen. 💕

The infrastructure is very good, but the deputy CP is too annoying and unbearable, but you can skip it by skipping some plots. The woman who is the deputy CP, because she hurts others, she also hurts others, and she doesn't look down on others. I thought she was an annoying passerby, but I didn't expect to become the deputy CP in the end. After reading other comments, it turns out that it is an ancient article. It should have been written very, very, very long ago. So I understand that it is an ancient article after all.

This is a book I have read two or three times. The world set by the author is wonderful. The combination of primitive and rough beauty with magical technology is the summer of Dimata and Dimata. It is really well written. It may not meet the requirements of the Shuangjie Party or the hobbies of some readers, but the author writes about love, family, and friendship bred in the vast land. Although some people think this book is ancient, I personally think it is much better than many of the current templates, illogical, sweet and embarrassing articles. ,✌️ It's just that when I watched it again, I really disliked the female supporting character Ta Qilan. In the early stage, she was inexplicably a pretentious girl. She had no quality and still wanted to pretend to be a tsundere. Come on, the arrogant and polite giant baby who has no AC in his heart is about the same. There is no sense of morality in bullying the weak and fearing the strong. Jealousy can't stand Zhongxia's love and goes to seduce Tessel. This is a really bad move. The man who hurt you is living well in Eden. You have a high position and you can't afford revenge. So why don't you catch Zhongxia who is easy to bully and bully him? If you say that being venomous does not count as harm, then that's fine. I'm just saying it anyway, so it doesn't count as harm. Later, when I got a man, I calmly joined the main cast. She had quite a lot of roles, so I saw her as a tool.

Mu Zhongxia VS Tessel I can't get enough of it, it's so exciting, every character is rich and has his or her own story. Teser quietly left Zhongxia in most of Veni and returned to Yahan. He said it was for Zhongxia's good, but in fact it was too difficult for him to make a choice and forced Zhongxia to make a choice. This was a little trick [sneaky laugh] [sneaky smile], but there was no one else. The last few chapters gave me the feeling that, ah, it turns out that so much time has passed, and the once shining Zhongxia has become a great figure in history. The only full-scale magic mechanic in the Rogrig continent, the National Preceptor of Eden, His Highness Drukuzaji of the Venetian Empire, and Master Viyaganno of Yahan.

It's great, the world view is well built, it feels like Game of Thrones. The male protagonist's husband fiercely replaced Long Ma's first husband 😂, he was rough, wild and had big breasts. Looking forward to the next plot! ❤️