Become Invincible Since Becoming a Disciple of Yue Buqun

Can the author be faster? Two chapters a day is not good enough. Can't it be better to update 10,000 words a day?

It is difficult to write Jin Yong's fan fiction. First of all, the three views in Jin Yong's books are no longer suitable for today. The style of pleasure, love and hatred cannot attract readers who read cool articles on Tomato. If the author now has a fixed source of income, he can write slowly. If he does not have a fixed source of income, it is best to divide the book into a medium volume. There is nothing wrong with the way the book is written, and I wish the author a bright future.

In the later stages of airbending, it depends on your qualifications. In the early stage, Jian Zong can quickly create a large number of enemies. Wherever there are people, there must be a fight. The battle between the Air Sect and the Sword Sect has broken the backbone of Huashan. If you can't defeat them in the early stage, what's left in the later stage.

The familiar Jianghu has a different style, come on!

I saw Chapter 27, according to the author. A Zuoleng Zen is approximately equal to the perfection of Jiuyin + the perfection of Zixia + the perfection of evil-fighting swordsmanship. Dongfang Bubai should be equal to ten Zuo Lengchan. There is no doubt that Jin Yong is the number one!

Let me correct you. It only takes a few minutes for a master to fight against an enemy. All of them are instant kills. He can kill ten people in one step...

The nine spiral shadows in the Nine Yin Manual, the Destroying Divine Claw, the Heart-stimulating Palm, and the White Python Whip Technique. Who created it? [Thinking] It's time to get the Nine Yang Divine Art.

Take Yue Lingshan with you and travel across the heavens Come on, it's great. It's great. Let's add two more chapters. It's more exciting. Don't ask for more. It's okay to slowly improve your level. More people will read it. In the future, the third or fifth update will be the big one. Only in this way can the popularity increase. The theme of your novel is very good and the idea is okay. Take Yue Lingshan to travel through the heavens.

I feel like all the martial arts are weaker on the protagonist.

OK, it's pretty well written!

A very good little white text, it looks relaxed and I like it. Come on~

It's awesome, I hope the author can keep writing. It seems that the bird food is very satisfying so far, and the system's sense of existence is not very inconsistent. Not bad, not bad (｀_ゝ´)

Among the books I have read on Tomato for so long, this one is the most to my liking. The author must work hard!

The protagonist is female, but this book is one of the few excellent martial arts novels.

It feels okay. Sometimes the description is a bit annoying, but overall it's pretty good.

The writing is not bad. It is better than those novels that claim to be a strong woman but introduce the relationship between sisters and brothers for a long time. The heroine is clearly a genius but seems to have no mouth and cannot fight. By the way, it is still a Xiaoao fan. There are really not many Xiaoao fans nowadays.

A rare and good-looking transformation article. The author writes it very well.

Super pretty! Come on, author!

The writing and storyline are acceptable

The plot is great and very interesting

The character starts out relatively positive

It makes me feel comfortable

Good looking, good luck to the author

It sounds pretty good. I like it very much.

It's the best I've ever seen. I originally wanted to save more and watch it again, but it ended up being over.

The plot is reasonable and makes you feel when you watch it.

Not bad, quite novel

It's okay, but it's not promoted, so it's quite average!

After reading the latest chapter, I think it's pretty good. Five stars would encourage the author to keep up his efforts and write more outstanding works٩(๑^o^๑)۶

A very interesting Jianghu novel A good little piece of writing, the taste is light, not bad or poisonous, not bad