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Neither of them are good people. Jin Zhong and Yan Wan have love and hate mixed with exploitation. After all, they died once. If Jin Zhong is still in love and puts down his hatred after a few words, he is not Jin Zhong. The time Jin Zhong cheated on Yan Wan, I really felt that it was completely in line with their characters. Anyway, madam, your writing is really great, I like it, and the details are well handled. Come on, madam! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
The writing is very good, the characters are not broken, and the core of the conflict and emotion between the two people is well grasped. It is very interesting to read. I will not make them different for the sake of their emotional line. I always feel that after the rebirth, Wei Yanwan will no longer be described as charming, charming, smart and innocent. You can't pretend, the kind of ruthlessness and grace that has experienced blood and tears, had a human life on your hands, a knife on your neck, thought about glory and wealth, and seen the most cherished treasure will come out from your eyes. Jinzhong is also a snake and hates him so much. How could he be so moved by just one or two words? Poisonous snakes are inherently dangerous, and they are even more likely to bite if they have hatred in their hearts. If the two of them were to be reborn, no one would be able to take revenge on the other less. It would take a lot of skills to express a little bit of sincerity. If you use your heart, you will waste your whole life. It's so on point and so well written. Let's not talk about Jinwei 99
One midnight in March or April of 2024, I stayed up late to read this Jinwei fanfic in Laofuge. It's hard to explain how shocking I was while watching it. The most intuitive thing is that my whole body felt numb, my heart felt itchy, and my limbs felt like ants crawling over me. The emotional fluctuations and impact brought by the text were directly reflected in my physical feelings. So I recommended it to my roommates and friends as soon as I got up during the day, telling them that they must read it. After reading it, they praised it and said that the work was very touching. As a result, not long after, about a month or so, excessive fans of the original work attacked the author's wife and even opened the box, and the work was forced to be removed from the shelves. At that time, I regretted that I only took a screenshot when reading the article. In the months that followed, every time I thought of this work, I could only reminisce and reflect on it... Fortunately, the author's wife uploaded this article to Tomato intermittently.
Talking about this article, the author's writing skills are too deep. The words he writes are like ancient paintings, old, plain but very charming. The use of some words and punctuation marks is even more unique! (For example, the use of exclamation marks, question marks, and periods, when to divide paragraphs, "I was so hung up that I didn't break both my wrists.") So when I read this article for the first time, I was amazed and immersed in it, and couldn't help but think about the author's wife's writing technique. It feels so old-fashioned, and it is easy for people to be involved in the era and the story. The plot design is interlocking and reversal. The two people, Yan Wan and Jin Zhong, restrain each other under the multiple shackles of etiquette, class, status, and morality. The over-the-top restraints are also delicious... Whoever sees the scene where Jin Zhong takes Yan Wan's earlobe and takes away the earrings will have his heart throbbing! ! !
It's great that the author's wife was able to write about Qingshuangtong [crying]. After the storm passed, she secretly uploaded it a second time for the readers who were still watching. As a reader, I was particularly touched. No matter what, I wish the author's wife a successful life three times! Thanks to my wife for producing such an excellent fan work for us.
(Suddenly I remembered that the author's wife had previously worked in another pit in Lao Fu Ge, telling the story of Jin Wei traveling to modern times and Wanwan becoming a little female ghost. It was a very cute setting. Only two chapters have been updated, and I still have the impression to this day. Unfortunately, after Qingshuangtong was removed from the shelves, this article was also removed from the shelves, and there may not be a follow-up in the future. It is really a pity [crying], but the safety of the author's wife is the most important! I don't want my wife to be attacked by excessive fans of the original work again)
What do you say about this book? It feels like it has cut me countless times and sweetened me countless times
It's really a bit rough at the beginning. I originally planned to read it as a sadistic novel, but the last chapter made me look forward to the follow-up, so I decided to put it on my bookshelf first.
I also hope that the author can write about he in the future. I really don't want to be stabbed
(The above is purely personal opinion) Looking forward to the follow-up ~ [smile]
After reading it, my wife's article was like a rain, pattering and lingering. Every time I read it, there seemed to be a picture, as if they were really whispering quietly in the small Palace of Eternal Life in the deep palace. It was such an indescribable love. My wife writes really well about love. The scenery outside the window and the thoughts in her heart are so thick that in my heart, as a reader, they are still the same bowl of white fungus soup. Two lifetimes of love should be carved and remembered in two heavy rains and two tribulations of life and death. When I read it to the end, I realized that there were only twelve chapters. Not a single word was wasted, and not a single foreshadowing was wasted. I really, really like this method of profiling with scenes and cutting it apart bit by bit with what I thought. At the end, a thunder fell. It turns out that I can't let you go at all. The love written in this way is really very touching. I hope my wife is happy, and I also hope that the Yongshou Palace team in this small world written by my wife is happy.
Thanks to the author's output, the changes, strategies, and pull between Wei Yanwan and Jin Zhong are endlessly satisfying. After living two lives, what is my heart and what I am living for? I have been wasting time and again. The answer is self-evident. This article is really good.
It's so well written, why is the rating so low? The author's writing style is so exquisite, his words and sentences are extremely delicate and beautiful, and his insights are profound. It breaks the usual setting of Zhongzhong rhythm brother. Falling in love and killing each other is the real destination of the two people. They are sweet and doting on each other, intrigues with each other, hate and love at the same time, feel angry and ashamed at the same time. Guilty, every paragraph made me want to shed tears. I read it with great emotion and wrote a review with melancholy. It is a blessing to be able to appreciate such a good article while I am alive... Thank you Jinwei, thank you to the director, thank you to the author, I will always love you😢🙏🏻
Why can't I give it 100 stars? I feel like there are ants crawling all over my body.
I thought the teacher would stop updating, but today I saw it was updated! I have long heard that Qingshuangtong is a masterpiece that has entered the Wei Dynasty, but I didn't get to watch it at the Old Ford late in the game. I am really grateful to the teacher for being willing to publish it again! Jinwei's wet smell is so good, I love it so much, but... But is the rhythm of Chapter 9 going to be? [Crying]
It smells so good. I have eaten such a delicious masterpiece.
The characters are very fitting, not OOC at all, and the emotional changes are very reasonable. It is indeed a masterpiece.
I have read no less than 20 Jin Wei fanfics. This is the best written one, and the only one in which Jin Zada's character design is more in line with the TV series.
I came here because of the reputation, what a masterpiece of mine, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh [crying]
It's my favorite style! It fits their personalities very well, they are both a bit awkward types, I look forward to the follow-up!
Wow wow wow it smells so good, how could I let go of my grudge so quickly in my new life! It smells so good, but luckily there are gods willing to let them come again.
Love it, love it, love it
So fragrant and so sweet
Where is the follow-up?
Please update it soon, please madam
It's the right taste, it's the right taste, it's just like this that there is an indelible trace of humanity floating in the ghostly atmosphere.
I really enjoyed the author's writing style, which is very delicate. I feel like I belong to the CP of Jinwei. The characters are very three-dimensional.
In Zhenquan Shenwen, the love-hate relationship between Wanwan and Jinzhong is intertwined, and the pull between reason and emotion is too delicate.
I cried after reading it over and over again, the most non-ooc Jinwei fanfic, we Jinwei are lucky to have a wife [crying][crying][crying]
This article is great, Lao Si wrote it in such a way that Jin Zhong's love-hate relationship is in his heart (˵¯͒¯͒˵) It's a fairy tale~
Hey, hey, hey, boss, I'm here to do it again.
Can there be a follow-up?
It's really beautiful…
The teacher is so good at writing...
The author's writing is amazing
A masterpiece! ! A masterpiece! ! A masterpiece! ! A masterpiece! !
The writing is so great. . Nice
Beautiful, the writing is very comfortable
God, this is a masterpiece, but it's a pity that the rating is so low.
Oh my gosh, it's so well written.
It's so good, wow, wow, wow, I was so scared in the middle that I thought I was going to be.
Neither of them are good people. Jin Zhong and Yan Wan have love and hate mixed with exploitation. After all, they died once. If Jin Zhong is still in love and puts down his hatred after a few words, he is not Jin Zhong. The time Jin Zhong cheated on Yan Wan, I really felt that it was completely in line with their characters. Anyway, madam, your writing is really great, I like it, and the details are well handled. Come on, madam! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
The writing is very good, the characters are not broken, and the core of the conflict and emotion between the two people is well grasped. It is very interesting to read. I will not make them different for the sake of their emotional line. I always feel that after the rebirth, Wei Yanwan will no longer be described as charming, charming, smart and innocent. You can't pretend, the kind of ruthlessness and grace that has experienced blood and tears, had a human life on your hands, a knife on your neck, thought about glory and wealth, and seen the most cherished treasure will come out from your eyes. Jinzhong is also a snake and hates him so much. How could he be so moved by just one or two words? Poisonous snakes are inherently dangerous, and they are even more likely to bite if they have hatred in their hearts. If the two of them were to be reborn, no one would be able to take revenge on the other less. It would take a lot of skills to express a little bit of sincerity. If you use your heart, you will waste your whole life. It's so on point and so well written. Let's not talk about Jinwei 99
One midnight in March or April of 2024, I stayed up late to read this Jinwei fanfic in Laofuge. It's hard to explain how shocking I was while watching it. The most intuitive thing is that my whole body felt numb, my heart felt itchy, and my limbs felt like ants crawling over me. The emotional fluctuations and impact brought by the text were directly reflected in my physical feelings. So I recommended it to my roommates and friends as soon as I got up during the day, telling them that they must read it. After reading it, they praised it and said that the work was very touching. As a result, not long after, about a month or so, excessive fans of the original work attacked the author's wife and even opened the box, and the work was forced to be removed from the shelves. At that time, I regretted that I only took a screenshot when reading the article. In the months that followed, every time I thought of this work, I could only reminisce and reflect on it... Fortunately, the author's wife uploaded this article to Tomato intermittently. Talking about this article, the author's writing skills are too deep. The words he writes are like ancient paintings, old, plain but very charming. The use of some words and punctuation marks is even more unique! (For example, the use of exclamation marks, question marks, and periods, when to divide paragraphs, "I was so hung up that I didn't break both my wrists.") So when I read this article for the first time, I was amazed and immersed in it, and couldn't help but think about the author's wife's writing technique. It feels so old-fashioned, and it is easy for people to be involved in the era and the story. The plot design is interlocking and reversal. The two people, Yan Wan and Jin Zhong, restrain each other under the multiple shackles of etiquette, class, status, and morality. The over-the-top restraints are also delicious... Whoever sees the scene where Jin Zhong takes Yan Wan's earlobe and takes away the earrings will have his heart throbbing! ! ! It's great that the author's wife was able to write about Qingshuangtong [crying]. After the storm passed, she secretly uploaded it a second time for the readers who were still watching. As a reader, I was particularly touched. No matter what, I wish the author's wife a successful life three times! Thanks to my wife for producing such an excellent fan work for us. (Suddenly I remembered that the author's wife had previously worked in another pit in Lao Fu Ge, telling the story of Jin Wei traveling to modern times and Wanwan becoming a little female ghost. It was a very cute setting. Only two chapters have been updated, and I still have the impression to this day. Unfortunately, after Qingshuangtong was removed from the shelves, this article was also removed from the shelves, and there may not be a follow-up in the future. It is really a pity [crying], but the safety of the author's wife is the most important! I don't want my wife to be attacked by excessive fans of the original work again)
What do you say about this book? It feels like it has cut me countless times and sweetened me countless times It's really a bit rough at the beginning. I originally planned to read it as a sadistic novel, but the last chapter made me look forward to the follow-up, so I decided to put it on my bookshelf first. I also hope that the author can write about he in the future. I really don't want to be stabbed (The above is purely personal opinion) Looking forward to the follow-up ~ [smile]
After reading it, my wife's article was like a rain, pattering and lingering. Every time I read it, there seemed to be a picture, as if they were really whispering quietly in the small Palace of Eternal Life in the deep palace. It was such an indescribable love. My wife writes really well about love. The scenery outside the window and the thoughts in her heart are so thick that in my heart, as a reader, they are still the same bowl of white fungus soup. Two lifetimes of love should be carved and remembered in two heavy rains and two tribulations of life and death. When I read it to the end, I realized that there were only twelve chapters. Not a single word was wasted, and not a single foreshadowing was wasted. I really, really like this method of profiling with scenes and cutting it apart bit by bit with what I thought. At the end, a thunder fell. It turns out that I can't let you go at all. The love written in this way is really very touching. I hope my wife is happy, and I also hope that the Yongshou Palace team in this small world written by my wife is happy.
Thanks to the author's output, the changes, strategies, and pull between Wei Yanwan and Jin Zhong are endlessly satisfying. After living two lives, what is my heart and what I am living for? I have been wasting time and again. The answer is self-evident. This article is really good.
It's so well written, why is the rating so low? The author's writing style is so exquisite, his words and sentences are extremely delicate and beautiful, and his insights are profound. It breaks the usual setting of Zhongzhong rhythm brother. Falling in love and killing each other is the real destination of the two people. They are sweet and doting on each other, intrigues with each other, hate and love at the same time, feel angry and ashamed at the same time. Guilty, every paragraph made me want to shed tears. I read it with great emotion and wrote a review with melancholy. It is a blessing to be able to appreciate such a good article while I am alive... Thank you Jinwei, thank you to the director, thank you to the author, I will always love you😢🙏🏻 Why can't I give it 100 stars? I feel like there are ants crawling all over my body.
I thought the teacher would stop updating, but today I saw it was updated! I have long heard that Qingshuangtong is a masterpiece that has entered the Wei Dynasty, but I didn't get to watch it at the Old Ford late in the game. I am really grateful to the teacher for being willing to publish it again! Jinwei's wet smell is so good, I love it so much, but... But is the rhythm of Chapter 9 going to be? [Crying]
It smells so good. I have eaten such a delicious masterpiece. The characters are very fitting, not OOC at all, and the emotional changes are very reasonable. It is indeed a masterpiece.
I have read no less than 20 Jin Wei fanfics. This is the best written one, and the only one in which Jin Zada's character design is more in line with the TV series.
I came here because of the reputation, what a masterpiece of mine, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh [crying]
It's my favorite style! It fits their personalities very well, they are both a bit awkward types, I look forward to the follow-up!
Wow wow wow it smells so good, how could I let go of my grudge so quickly in my new life! It smells so good, but luckily there are gods willing to let them come again.
Love it, love it, love it
So fragrant and so sweet Where is the follow-up? Please update it soon, please madam
It's the right taste, it's the right taste, it's just like this that there is an indelible trace of humanity floating in the ghostly atmosphere.
I really enjoyed the author's writing style, which is very delicate. I feel like I belong to the CP of Jinwei. The characters are very three-dimensional.
In Zhenquan Shenwen, the love-hate relationship between Wanwan and Jinzhong is intertwined, and the pull between reason and emotion is too delicate.
I cried after reading it over and over again, the most non-ooc Jinwei fanfic, we Jinwei are lucky to have a wife [crying][crying][crying]
This article is great, Lao Si wrote it in such a way that Jin Zhong's love-hate relationship is in his heart (˵¯͒¯͒˵) It's a fairy tale~ Hey, hey, hey, boss, I'm here to do it again.
Can there be a follow-up?
It's really beautiful…
The teacher is so good at writing...
The author's writing is amazing
A masterpiece! ! A masterpiece! ! A masterpiece! ! A masterpiece! !
The writing is so great. . Nice
Beautiful, the writing is very comfortable
God, this is a masterpiece, but it's a pity that the rating is so low.
Oh my gosh, it's so well written.
It's so good, wow, wow, wow, I was so scared in the middle that I thought I was going to be.