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After transmigrating to the Primordial World, Wen Chi becomes a third-generation disciple of the Jie School under the tutelage of Han Zhixian.
Wen Chi knows that with his mortal human origins and lack of fortune, achieving anything through cultivation is nothing but a fool’s dream.
The Great Calamity of Investiture of the Gods is just around the corner. If he cannot improve his strength, he is destined to become cannon fodder.
To avoid being reduced to ashes, he has no choice but to abandon the traditional path of cultivation and turn his gaze to the newly emerging Human Way.
Starting with the planting of innate grains, he spreads the ways of farming and sericulture far and wide, and ascends to the position of the Most Revered Sage and Teacher of the Human Way under the name of the God of Agriculture.
He gathers immense merit and fortune from the Human Way, condenses a body of merit, severs his corpses, and attains the Dao of Primordial Unity.
A nation is founded on its people, and food is heaven to the people.
Throughout the chaotic heavens and boundless worlds, wherever living beings dwell, my incense offerings will be found.
I, Wen Chi, Most Revered Sage of the Human Way, speak for myself!
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The writing is okay, but maybe the formatting is wrong or something, and it sounds messy to read. Can you please change the line? Read it yourself and see if you feel uncomfortable.
It's so confusing and I can't read it smoothly.
What has happened? The master has become a Taoist friend, Tongtian has become a master, and the third ancestor of the human race suddenly changed from Suiren to Nuwa Fuxi. Did the author forget to write it?
It's not coherent and there's nothing new.
Messy, extremely messy
Too many typos Fight a little in the east, fight a little in the west 🤦
Don't you write novels that you don't read?
Messy