Reincarnate in Another World and Travel Around the World

I made the cover myself, so I'll give you some credit for your hard work. It's the first time I've made an outline and written a novel seriously, trying my best not to get lost. I have recently learned some techniques for writing online articles from Tieba, although I probably still don't know how to use them. All in all, let's have a pleasant creative time~

Although there are a lot of things to learn from (the author admitted it at the beginning, it is much better than a copy of a Korean comic), after all, this is Tomato, and the quality varies. In addition, the author's first book, the first book usually draws on other people's writing experience to improve himself, all of which are already very good. From the current point of view, the author still has great potential if he does not give up. (Although the author has already said that it is for his own sake, he still pays a little attention to give others who want to read the article a better reading experience.) Come on [give me my heart] (Finally comment on the shortcomings. Author, what is the name of your book? The protagonist's childhood experience should be brief. After all, if you are attracted by the name, you all want to see the adventure. I still look forward to the humanistic environment and scenery written by the author. Although it feels difficult to write well, after all, the author's style does not look like he has traveled to many places.)

I haven't seen Jobless Reincarnation so I don't know what I'm borrowing from it, but I hope the author can give a more specific and detailed portrayal of secular aspects such as the customs and customs of another world.

It's okay in tomatoes [like]

As mentioned earlier, I thought that Cilili would be separated from the protagonist, and it really lived up to my expectations. Let's put it on the bookshelf for a while. I probably won't come back to read it if I don't have a hundred chapters.

It's not bad, but I can't understand it later.

Hao Chi😋, just kidding, some places may be a bit confusing, but surprisingly it's not bad

It's good and interesting. It would be even hotter if there were more descriptions of the scenery.

It has a very relaxing atmosphere, very much like my memories of watching anime and novels in junior high school. [Sinister smile]

Chapter 2 It's such a mess. He suddenly became the leader and a slave (why didn't he redeem himself?) The first chapter was good. What a pity. I thought we would travel around the world with the girls later, but I didn't expect that we would be separated for the time being [face covering]

It's great, but it's so hard to find books to read.

This is really well written. Could the author please stop following me?

It has been sitting on the bookshelf gathering dust since Xi Lili left in September. I happened to think about it today and looked through it. I feel like it will take me a lifetime to finish it at this rate.

Good book, the style is very similar to Jobless

Um? I think the first volume is fine. An ending that exceeds readers' expectations is not necessarily bad. Although it seems a bit abrupt if the turning point is not handled well, there is nothing wrong with it in order to express what the author wants to write and to pave the way for the future. Of course, digging holes or not filling them is another matter, so I continued reading. Suspected to be a bit too electric [what] Volume 3

I watched it for so long and didn't rate it hahahaha

Okay, the author doesn't want to go to the palace, and must keep updated [Sending Hearts]

I felt pretty good after reading a few chapters. Keep up the good work!

It just looks good, it feels pretty good

😁Not bad. I feel okay.

Beautiful different world

Wuwuwuwuwu, the author... The author broke his teeth

It's very beautiful. Please support me. Come on, the author.