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Okay, I have a suggestion, Shen Lei should not be with Xie Meilan. After the child (a girl) was born, they had some conflicts in their lives. Her boss took advantage of the situation and then divorced. Shen Lei ran away and Shen Fei became the father. This would create more drama and conflict.

It's okay so far. It's better than wearing Shen Lei. I really can't stand wearing Shen Lei.

Not bad, come on, the author, hurry up and write, even if the protagonist's girlfriend should not get closer to Xiaoyue [laughing and crying] Is the author a full-time writer? Not only do I publish chapters simultaneously during working hours, it would be nice if I could write faster, but it's also very good. I tried to write a novel myself in two or three hours and only got 2,000 words [crying]. Come on, author.

Why is there only one chapter and not two chapters a day? It's okay, but one chapter a day is too little. Just keep it up and hope you don't die from it.

Is it one chapter a day now? It's not enough [cover face][cover face][cover face]

It's good to read, it's really good to read, but only one chapter per day is too little. I'll keep it up for now. I hope I don't die from it. I'll come back to read it again.

It's pretty good, much better than other fan fiction.

Pry the corner of the wall and remove Xiaoyue

I've recently become obsessed with the Mortal Song fanfic. If I write it well, maybe it can become a success.

Good, good, good

The author updates a few more pictures a day, and can write more that are not in the TV series.

The language of the whole text is fluent, the writing is relaxed and natural, and it can be regarded as a relatively successful work. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is also very deep and thorough. The language of the full text is sonorous and powerful, and it makes people excited and excited when reading it. The material is novel, the conception is wonderful, and the language is vivid and lively. The fresh breath of life and children's interest are revealed between the lines. The author, please do not stop updating the code words.

Although there are not many words now, the writing is very comfortable to read! Very good!

Personally I think the best Mortal Song fanfic! Keep at it, author, and write at least 400 chapters.

I finished watching it in one sitting. I have never watched the TV series before. I thought it was well written and not at all threatening.

Not bad, very beautiful

A very good novel

Recommended, well written,

The writing is great, I give you five stars [heartfelt]

The characterization is very profound,

It's good. I've seen the TV series.

Very well written

Looks good, loves to watch, watch more. Hee hee😁

It's okay, it looks pretty good, and I finished it in one go.

It's very comfortable to watch and not so violent.

The best fan novel about Mortal Song that I have read so far. It is very good. It is very interesting and I love reading it.

Very good, the group scenes are well written.