Become Invincible from the Star Dome Railway

It's not bad, but it's a bit OOC, there are many female protagonists, and in terms of the relationship line, there is a feeling that the male protagonist has a crooked mouth, and the girl has to have a good impression, or even give it for free. As for having fun and making songs, these are good and exciting points, so the previous shortcomings are not harmful. I look forward to seeing you with four stars.

Although it is very abstract, it is still characteristic. It is quite interesting and recommended. The backend is very confusing, especially singing and other things, and you can't write half a chapter of lyrics. Each character has a close-up. At the end of the chapter, the combat power has collapsed. It's a mess. Just look at the front.

I advise you to take care of yourself. Update a lot, it has the potential to be popular. I have read and reviewed many novels. You can write the manuscripts that you have not published and send them to me. Let me look at them for you, so that I can give you some suggestions [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] (The abacus hits everyone in the face)

The first one is me, I slapped NO on a passing duck [laughing evilly] Look at the last reading time [laughing] Ciallo～ (∠ω< )⌒★

Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. I feel the same when I see it: It feels great! Comfortable~comfortable~The Silver Wolf section satisfied me even more. The three views of the protagonist are also very consistent and very immersive. Good book.

Recommended Mi family novels that will give you a different feeling of pleasure [shy]

Renew! When you update, minor flaws will be removed Big, the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you watch the second watch, a little patience is born. Students, the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to come out sound, the number of dead harvests began to decrease. When you update the fifth update, the reader's protection will spontaneously take shape. Success, the voices of praise became louder and louder. When you were at the tenth watch, the great Confucian's debates were deafening Deaf, tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, the bookworm has you in his memory a place, even in a long life, your name The words will also leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all difficulties, but More than 90% of the problems are caused by insufficient updates.

I disagree with you. I think pasta should be mixed with No. 42 Concrete. Because of the length of this screw, it can easily affect the torque of the excavator, you know? When you smash it in, it will produce a large amount of high-energy protein in an instant, commonly known as UFO, which will seriously affect economic development and even cause certain nuclear pollution to the entire Pacific Ocean and the charger.

Let's talk about the shortcomings first. The protagonist's succubus attribute suddenly appeared after seeing the silver wolf (personally, it feels a little abrupt), and the pride of being a time traveler is too prominent (this is also mentioned in the article), and there are many details that are inconsistent with the setting (such as time and character age), and there is also the need to prepare in advance for Lao Mi's backstab (the definition of the character's combat power and the Star God). The advantages are that there is no limit on the protagonist's combat power (the limitations are mentioned briefly), there are many activities, and it is very enjoyable (if you don't care about the shortcomings). If you don't care too much about the setting, this book is still a lot of fun to read.

It looks good. The author should hurry up and evolve the code machine. As long as you are willing to update more, other readers will be willing to do anything. @ When will the new book be released?

No wonder it's always on the recommendation list. It's really good. I really like getting along with the characters. I feel very comfortable with the storylines with Lang Bao and some characters. And it also has some fun, but haha, I don't even want to read this for fun. The most important thing is that the xp of this book is very suitable for me. Qingque, Fu Xuan, Silver Wolf, Hanabi, and Xiao Yunli should be at the back. It seems that the author is also a lolita fan, and they are all about 1.4 Meters tall. Then I ask everyone if there is a Star Iron novel. Push it, I want to read Star God Big Sister [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile] Some of the poisonous points are actually not a big problem for me personally. It depends on whether you are resistant to toxicity. If you read enough books and for a long enough time, these small poisonous points can be completely ignored. The poisonous points of this book mainly lie in the character of the protagonist, but I can accept it. There are no other particularly poisonous points in my opinion.

The writing is good, the subject matter is quite novel, and the protagonist Lezi's attributes are also remarkable. The only thing that makes me uncomfortable is that there are not many female protagonists in the label, and I don't agree with the concept of love. I have always felt that as a young person in the new era of the 21st century, if you have the ability, you can choose not to fall in love, or you can choose to fall in love, but you can only have one partner. This is not only responsible for the person you like, but also for the person who likes you. However, I can understand this book as a purely refreshing article.

First of all, review the topic. The title and introduction of the book say that the protagonist's main activity is singing, which means that he is not the kind of Long Aotian who is always suppressed by strength. The protagonist takes a relatively peaceful path and does not offend others unless they offend me. A lot of people in the book regard this book as a cool article. Is there any possibility that one must be strong enough to take this route? Strength is the premise of behavior, which can give readers the feeling that the protagonist is at ease, so don't watch it if you want to watch it without thinking. I believe that those who click in are basically attracted by the song and the subject matter.

Front row reminder, I haven't read this book for a long time, but I still want to say something about it. This book is more suitable for reading without thinking. It is indeed very enjoyable as a refreshing article. I haven't seen the combat power they mentioned, and it may be suppressed later. In addition, there are still some minor problems, such as the Star God seems a bit weak; the author's combat power level is a bit confusing? (Doubtful) Just like the level of life, I don't know what it is yet (maybe the author will talk about it later); the protagonist's value is a bit low (the value given in the lottery is a bit too low, so it's too low in combat power?); The female character throws herself into someone's arms a bit too quickly (maybe it's because the love line in other novels I've read progresses more slowly, I still prefer to develop it slowly). I've seen a lot for the time being, and here are some suggestions of my own. You can see that you are really awesome. You are so patient in reading some of my opinions. In reality, you should be a patient and gentle person (thank you for reading my comments) I will continue to comment when I catch up on the latest chapter (don't criticize me, woo woo woo)

It looks good, I just like the feeling of being invincible and loved by the group. If Pinoconi wants to write about Omphalus after he finishes writing, he can wait until all the main plots of Ompharos are over before writing. For the sake of good quality, he can afford to wait. Or wait until the main plot of Ompharos ends, and intersperse other worlds to make a transition. After all, I have seen many cases where the writing speed was faster than the official updated main line, but the writing completely collapsed later. At least I feel like I can afford to wait. If mhy can wait for the speed at which it updates the main line, then I can wait for this book too.

It's a very good book with multiple female protagonists. I've been following it, but because it ended so suddenly, I didn't know it was finished. I thought it was discontinued, so I haven't read it for a while. All in all, it's a good book. It may have some shortcomings, but I think it's okay, and I don't have to worry about Weng Xing's line, which is cut off directly from there, so there are no plot problems. The protagonist is invincible. I'm pretty much invincible throughout the whole process, except for the first few chapters, but I never felt aggrieved. As long as I can accept stories with multiple female protagonists, I think it's fine. Both of the author's books are quite good, and there's also a book called The Lost Rabbit, but that one is not particularly in line with my preferences. I only read half of it, and then I didn't read it. But this one is still very good, and I recommend you to read it. I feel like it's not too poisonous.

I had seen the AI ​​characters in Station B reverting to their roles and singing, and I thought what if. What would happen if my favorite characters could really sing those songs? But after all, it's just a rough idea. It's not as perfect as the author's. So far, the writing is okay. Why do you feel that your relationship is progressing too fast? Because they are all good girls who deserve to be treated better. They all have their own shining points.

It turns out that I have read all three books by the author, but I didn't pay attention to the author's name. Personally, I think this book is pretty good, but there are a lot of female protagonists, but that's not a big problem. I can't help but feel comfortable listening to the songs while reading the book. I recommend it!

If nothing else, this book is really good. Just write two or three sentences about music and it won't affect the perception. At least it's not too bad. The description of the main character in front of it can definitely make it an invincible novel. Anyway, I recommend it to old bookworms who find it really comfortable to read. I hope it won't be too dull later on.

It's just a post about Beng San. You can read it if you're a double chef. If not, you don't mind reading it. Overtly and covertly, they say Beng San is better than Ben Tie.

Very good, a lot of fun, cool writing, not cliché cool But I feel there is a bug, which is why Aha has so few appearances. I am currently in the 49th picture. The protagonist has done so many big things, and Aha has not appeared yet. Then there are suggestions. I hope you can recruit some imperial sisters. Qingque, Silver Wolf Airport is not advisable.

I just realized that I don't have 5-star reviews yet, so I have to add one. I've wanted to read BGM-type novels for a long time. For example, if I pick up any type of BGM, then you will never be able to beat mine in my BGM, or music-type novels, but I feel I felt that this material seemed a bit niche and no one had ever written about it. I couldn't find it no matter how hard I looked for it, so I simply gave up. I didn't expect that an author would write it now. So I must give it a five-star review. The next different world will not be about jumping to the next door, Sanbengzi, or Genshin Impact.

The plot is pretty good, and it basically focuses on the protagonist having fun. But I don't know why the heroines in the early stage were all lolita. Holy shit [face covering].

How to say it? The last time I read this book, it was updated to more than 110 chapters. The last time I saw 102 chapters, it was almost gone. It's just that after a while of raising books, there are already so many. [Laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

I have read the latest chapter 114 so far. So far it is very good. Although the songs in a few places are a bit weird, it is acceptable. However, the biggest problem of this novel may be that it is too urgent. This is only chapter 114! If I hadn't planned to write it from the beginning of Genshin Impact, I would have written the plot of Iron Break directly to Ompharos. It was too fast. It would take half a day to write the ink for other books. Maybe 100 chapters would not be enough to write in one day.

There is no morality, human nature is arrogant, the methods are despicable, and the actions are casual. It is similar to the applause novels and fan fiction, but it is precisely because the other novels are too high-end, and they are all very well written and heart-wrenching. They are not suitable for people like me, so I came here.

Okay, okay, this is a rare masterpiece of Star Iron fan art. Come on, author, keep updating, speed up the pace, and try to keep up with the plot [Punch Out][Punch Out][Punch Out][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

This book is quite good, very interesting and enjoyable. The only drawback is that the author is too short and it is not enough to read. While reading the novel, I met a lot of up owners and listened to the songs, and I also got to know a lot of interesting songs and videos.

The writing is quite good, and it can be regarded as a good-looking Mi family novel. In addition, those who said that the combat power is overpowered, I thought the author had sealed the skills of the protagonist. The protagonist said that the rules he set for himself are not without them. Oh my god, this is not a combat power overpowering. I don't see any frustration. I think it is an invincible novel. I have read too much. I suggest you read the Dragon King novel to balance your mentality [face covering]

The writing style of Bengtie fan fiction made me unable to put it down, which is enough to prove the excellence of this book. The author's music selection is also very good, and he also carefully considers the fit with the plot. I basically don't listen to Chinese songs anymore, but when I was reading this book, I kept listening to the songs in the book on a loop. The length of the real book alone may be equivalent to the amount of Chinese songs I listened to in a year.