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I have always wanted to read similar books, but unfortunately there are very few, so I just write what I want to read. It can be considered as a prehistoric book, but I don't know if I can write it back to the prehistoric era. The results are too poor.

It is a collision between the classical fairy tale and mortal style, which is a relatively rare type in Tomato. The author cleverly gave the protagonist a golden finger as a "disciple of interception", and set it in the ancient background, so it feels much less abrupt. This kind of world view fighting type novel can be summarized in one sentence: "My setting is above yours". To be fair, the cultural heritage of classical immortals and their chivalrous spirit are both higher than those of ordinary people. However, because the classical fairy tales lack outstanding works, and there are few literate people who read novels, the classical fairy tales do not have an advantage in this worldview confrontation. But the wonderful thing about this book is that it rides on the "prehistoric" train. In the Xianxia worldview, to use the language of the entertainment industry, [you mortals are just traffic, our brother Honghuang has both traffic and celebrity status. (Just kidding) Prehistoric fans are a bit obsessed with the plot of the fan circle, and believe that the prehistoric setting is the most powerful. Generally speaking, people who watch Xianxia and don't agree with this point are sensible and don't know how to line up, so more and more people agree. Therefore, it has created the special status of Honghuang, set up the background of Honghuang, and the story has a solid foundation. Plus some [farming] plots, so the overall look is interesting. The disadvantage is that it can be seen that the author is not clear about his own strengths and weaknesses, so the rhythm is not obvious and a bit erratic. Suggestion: Write according to the rhythm of farming flow, just write in a cycle of [What is added to your territory] > [What is its role] > [Subsequent development] > [Preliminary verification]. For example, your Tiangang Star Array [Added Tiangang Star Array]>[Added starlight, the array can transform spiritual energy, etc.]>[The array will grow on its own and is expected to turn into stars]>[When there is a crisis, the star array will indeed work]

It looks good, it's my type. I just hope that there will be less scenes with the Bai family. I feel that the Bai family is so annoying!

Sharp. This is a completely unimagined path. Cut off and teach the disciples to rebuild their path.

It's a good novel, but the setting seems to be related to the world of Fengshen! I prefer it to be an alien universe, one of the heavens and worlds, rather than a subordinate unit of the prehistoric world! As I will explain later, it does not belong to the prehistoric world! Very good, but the progress of the protagonist is a bit slow! A bit slow to warm up!

The author [seeking attention] values ​​quality over quantity

Author, please don't abandon the book

I read it slowly from the first one. I didn't expect that this one is also written in big letters. Hahahahaha. I started chasing the Earth Immortal when I was a child. It's really a fate. This book is also very beautiful. [Blow a kiss] [Like], I support you [please update]

A rare theme, using the ancient times as a guide to write a new beginning! The novels I like to read keep me going and I keep reading for updates every day. This is the first one. I look forward to big updates. Come on!

It's very novel. I have read many novels derived from Fengshen, but few of them are good-looking and lack new ideas. But this one is thoughtful and has its own characteristics.

Has the author passed the exam? I think this article is more than enough to write an essay.

Hey friends! 🌟I heard that you have been in trouble recently, and I sincerely hope that you can dispel the gloom like sunshine. Remember, no matter when and where, I am by your side. Come on! 💪

Objectively speaking, it does not have 5 stars, but this book is very good, but the score of this book is not high, 5 points is a stretch. Classical cultivation and Nascent Soul cultivation are well integrated, and the plot setting is also in line with my personal taste. For the time being, there are no major poisonous points, and the minor poisonous points are insignificant.

It looks great, please write soon! [Anger]

The settings are very reasonable [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

It's a very good book. I hope the author will keep writing.

This book is really good to read. It spreads the classical culture of cultivating immortals in the world of mortal underworld and slowly changes the world of mortals cultivating immortals.

Very well written! It's the plot and story I want to see! Great, come on! Author[top post][top post][top post]

It's quite interesting. "Hongyun Reconstruction" [smile][smile][smile] It has a very ancient feel and the setting is quite good.

Looks good, really

It's okay, it's just that the protagonist's cultivation level is higher so that things can be done better. After contacting the leader, he can occupy several big positions in this world.

Bao, this novel is simply a shining pearl in the world of online literature! The twists and turns of the plot are like a roller coaster ride, the characters are described with such exquisite detail that it feels like seeing it with your own eyes, and every chapter makes you want to stop putting it down. I have been deeply into the trap, and I will update it quickly. My children can't wait!

Oh oh oh oh oh so beautiful

The book is very nice and rare.

Chapter 24 is too written

It looks good, I want to give the author a thumbs up.

Very good story line

It's a good book but not poisonous. I added a bookshelf.

A very nice book

The plot is so good, come on💪