Pokémon Travels Across the Real World

Overall it's pretty good

It's still very good. I hope the author will work hard and not be like a lot of elf novels that are either unfinished or not written at all. Hey, come on, come on, but this is the first thing to do at work, so just treat it as an amateur [shy][shy][shy][shy] Just don't stop updating, please beg me [I'm about to cry]

After reading Chapter 12, I think the setting is half acceptable. In fact, I quite like this genre with my own understanding. But in Chapter 12, the male protagonist was ambushed because of his Magikarp qualifications, so I had a bad feeling... I specifically read the table of contents and comments... The male protagonist's initial elf was Magikarp, and it was snatched away later. He only snatched it back at 168. It seems that the evolution is also 168... [Smile] I just can't stand it anymore... [Smile] Also, I don't know why, but the male protagonist always gives me a little yellow-haired feeling, but the male protagonist has never done anything, so it's very strange... [Face covering] Five stars for the author's hard work in coding. Evolution seems to be 124, wrong number... [Face covering]

The plot and writing are both very good. However, the short paragraphs in the book are not very "novel", but more like the division of paragraphs in paper books. When the mobile phone screen is not large, a particularly long paragraph will fill the screen with dense words, which can easily interfere with reading. There are too many words in one paragraph, and many shortcomings are not commented on. Compared with similar novels, there is little interaction. PS: Personal suggestion is that the author can refer to other novels and revise the paragraph divisions. Of course this is just personal advice.

Be yourself, Xiaozhi is really embarrassed like this

It's not bad. I personally think it's above average among similar books. It's just that few people read it and it's not popular. People who don't specifically look for the same type of book will read this book. It's very good. It's considered to be the best in Pokémon literature. To be honest, although it's not as good as Mr. Lu, it can't be calculated anymore. It's just that the score is too low, because there is no traffic, but the quality is at least 9 points on Tomato.

I like it, I want to see Xiaohong, I never thought I would be so attached to Magikarp

I still like the plot very much, but the word count is recommended to be no more than three lines, which is more suitable for reading.

The writing is very good [shy][shy][shy][shy][shy] nice and nice. I would love to see more [shy][shy]

So far it seems pretty good, just a little missing.

I don't know why the score is so low, but I am one of the few who can read it. It may be that I have been exposed to the more poisonous drugs and have developed antibodies. This kind of minor flaws is easier to accept. At least I have read hundreds of chapters and still have the desire to continue reading. I will not be exhausted or bored. It is good food. I give it a good review. Well, if I were to give it a score, I think it would be at least a 9.

There are very few good-looking elf novels anymore. This one has the flavor of Elf Master.

Awesome is just two words

The writing is quite good, but there are no pictures.

The beast wave probably finds inspiration from typhoons [I understand]

I hope there will be more pictures so that readers who don't know Pokémon can understand it.

It would be nice if your name and introduction were nicer. I'm not. I don't pick. I really don't read it. I can only say that it's good and it's very well written.

It's really pretty, but I feel like the blackboard writing needs to be divided into sections.

It's a quick update. It's similar to the previous Elf Master. It looks good, but the number of words is a bit less.

Tested by myself, the best in elf writing

The name is not attractive

What kind of things do the elves catch?

When will it evolve? It would be boring to go any later.

It would be great if I could use superpowers or waveguides, so I could communicate with my own spirits.

It's really good-looking. The male protagonist is not too flashy and has grown up in a serious and down-to-earth way. Goldfinger is there but not particularly exaggerated.

I still haven't finished it. The author is great and writes well. I hope to keep up the good work. Don't stop updating! ! ! !

I have read so far some of the Pokémon stories that rank among the top ones in my mind, but the ratings are surprisingly low.

Very well written, super invincible. It's just that I hope the protagonist's next elf will be a water leaping fish or a fire chicken. Please ask the author.

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The content is interesting, but overall not too exciting