
Becoming a Destined Villain, the Heroine Asked Me Not to Come Over
成为天命大反派,女主让我别过来
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 834k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Fantasy High-Concept
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 9mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
1.5kReads
6.3Score
158Shelves
408Chapters
221Listens
140.4kReads · all time
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Coding is not easy, so I dare to give my efforts five stars. Normally, it's 4,000 per day. There aren't many people at the beginning. If I can get 100 reminders in the future, I'll add another chapter the next day. If there are big bosses who can sponsor gifts, I'll add another chapter. The maximum number of codes per day is 4 (it's the limit, I can only code so many). Thank you for your support [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
The protagonist is invincible in the same realm, but goes against the enemy across realms. He is basically invincible. The harem is not a superintendent, and the push speed is very fast. So far, I haven't seen where the behind-the-scenes information written in the introduction is reflected, but the rest is pretty good. If the protagonist wants to go behind the scenes, should we also arrange a super powerful double-king package for the protagonist? Personally, I think the arrangement of the Sons of Luck as the early bosses is not very reasonable. The behind-the-scenes flow system seems to be very well developed. It should be the only one that can pose a threat to the protagonist. It should not appear so early, but if the author is going to write the protagonist to take over the other party's industry, it will be too sexy! The one from Xiao Huohuo's template is a regular early-stage monster in a fantasy villain story. Yang Yi's rebirth style is a bit unreasonable. Maybe it's because I don't think the protagonist is crushing enough, so it's hard to handle. There is still a shortage of popular characters in villain stories such as the son-in-law and the father-in-law who has been haunted by his own mother. If possible, it would be interesting to see if the author could add a few pseudo-villains of fortune who express their feelings or regrets. The follow-up problem is a bit big. In order to connect the plot of the new map, a plot about the birth of a child was created. Even if the child was born, a son was born. No matter how you arrange it later, it will seem very uncomfortable. It is better to change it to Stockholm or place a slave mark. There is also a common problem in harem novels. In the early stage, the heroine is invisible, and most of the heroines who appeared before Chapter 200 are not even on camera. The overall outline feels unclear, and the pace of the plot is sometimes fast and sometimes slow, and the pace is unclear. The problem of the protagonist being ridiculed by the Holy Body in the early stage was solved when he started to play behind the scenes, but there is no traditional battle of wits plot. The protagonist is completely at the level of defeating ten people with one force, which makes the confrontation plot look very clownish. The beginning of this book is really good, why not make some changes and start a new book.
It's quite interesting. It's supposed to be a harem with multiple female protagonists. The protagonist will give the female protagonist opportunities to make the female protagonist stronger. She won't be a vase, and she's not too brainless. I've read more than fifty chapters so far, and I have recommended a female protagonist and a maid. I don't think it's poisonous, and it looks pretty good. Including the child that many people are talking about, I don't have any feelings about it, and I won't compete with you for anything. There are so many blessings about having more children, it's just one child, there's no need to be so malicious. I don't know if all the female protagonists and supporting characters have been collected: Su Meier, Yun Li, Xiao Ziyan, Luo Shuangfei, Nalan Yuruo, Lin Wanqing, Lin Wanyue, Hua Jingrou, and one I forgot about, Yan Zijin and the three supporting female characters from the Tianshu Dynasty, Anya, Liu Ruyan, Nangong Yan... I don't know if that's right… Let me go, why did it take so long to read? I must have forgotten to turn off the book while listening to it at night [laughing and crying]
He pressed them on the table and pulled apart pairs of black and white mesh. Only a top artist like me, who never leaves his hand with a magnifying glass, can take every work of art seriously from beginning to end. Then he slowly approached and said to him in a magnetic and charming voice, "Update soon."
The plot is quite smooth, I pushed it aside. When I read Chapter 209, I didn't think it was a bad thing (I didn't think giving birth to a boy was a bad point, and the scenes about the child were less than one page in total). I rejected all the heroines I accepted. When changing the map, the heroine put her into the small world and took her with her. Unlike other novels, I just changed the map and ignored it.
It's not bad, the protagonist's taunting body is almost perfect.
It's a pretty good villain story. The rating is indeed a bit low, but the author was tricked by himself [face covering]
It's okay, but points will be deducted if the heroine gets pregnant too early.
I've read ten or twenty chapters, and it seems to be attractive enough to keep reading. It's not as cookie-cutter as other villain novels. Come on, author.
The setting is very good. Compared with other villain stories, you can't kill the Son of Destiny at any time or else God will punish you. The protagonist has good luck and will forcefully kill the Son of Destiny, and help from outside will come from outside. Luck is simply chance. When the protagonist dies, the chance is gone, which is relatively reasonable.
Very well written! ! ! It's just not enough. The author should update it soon.
Okay, I finally found a good book [laughing evilly]
It's pretty good among similar books.
It's okay. It's considered to be a mid-to-high-end villain novel. It's less toxic. The author is more willing to listen to advice. Overall, it's worth reading.
Average. Give a good review.
Not as bad as 5.9, Right?
It's okay, it's okay [I understand] [I understand]
It's okay, actually, I personally think it depends on whether the male protagonist suits my taste [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]
It's very routine, I personally think it's good
Yes, it's a long way ahead of similar books.
So far it's pretty good, at least I don't see any problems. I hope the author will keep up the good work! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
It's okay, but there are a lot of metaphors and few details.
The writing is okay, but the author should not forget about the protagonist's children. It's been decades and it's time to show his face.
Personally I feel pretty good
It's pretty good among villain stories.
Tempering body, condensing qi, transforming emptiness, spirit sea, Xuanying, heavenly being, heavenly king, emperor, supreme, great emperor
Not bad, well written, I hope it can be completed
I feel very good about this book, but the protagonist, supporting characters and supporting characters all need to work well together.
Yes, the protagonist is not aggrieved
This is what a villain looks like [shy][shy][shy]