Jiyan of New Eridu

Keeping the level above 8.5 Is no problem. →

Not bad, the writing is enjoyable, although I don't want a female protagonist (the kind with no foreshadowing, no story, no emotion) Being stabbed in the back by Jue is a must, it just depends on how the author writes it. The advice I can give at the moment is probably to be more diligent in dividing the novel into sections (?). Reading a novel in one glance and ten lines will make you tired if you read too many words in one paragraph 🤦

The writing is okay, but I feel that Xing Jianya's age is not right. The hole should have erupted when the Maixiao siblings were young, and Xing Jianya's age should be younger. Suddenly I remembered that Xing Jianya and the brothers and sisters of Mai Piao met in front of the tombstone. The hollow explosion happened when Miya was a child. The brothers and sisters of Mai Piao and Miya should be about the same age. It is best for the author to revise what he said before. It is best to go through the plot and watch all the PVs before revising. JueZhouZero is about to reach 2.0. After reading the plot before 2.0, The plot should be quite easy to write. After the modification, it is best to read it yourself. Is the context connection smooth?

The author should update it quickly. As a memorial to an old drifter 👍

It's a very fresh subject matter and the writing is quite good. Come on.

I haven't played Zero Zone yet, but it looks pretty good.

So far it looks okay

Very well written. I haven't seen this in a long time. Come on!

Very well written, keep it up

The potential is unlimited, keep working hard 🤭