Juezuzero: I Can Use My Body's Ability!

The writing is great, and there are no bad points for the moment (except for the first meeting with Jane, which is a bit abstract). The plot does not exactly follow the one in the game, which is a good point! You won't feel bored watching the same plot over and over again, it's very novel. It just depends on how to deal with Fariy's ownership at the end (after all, it was Ling/Zhe who got it in the game. The main reason is that the protagonist can't use it much if he gets it at this stage, unless his ability to feel holes and cracks was given by Fariy, which feels unlikely). Overall, it's very well written! Keep it up! More updates [laughing evilly]

The protagonist's character is the highlight of this book. If the introduction can be changed, it will attract a lot of people, um, but I saw that the author previously said that he does not know how to make the protagonist lose control and then swallow the corpse, and then someone will come and quickly adjust the state to act. In this way, the two characteristics of the protagonist can be clearly shown, one is to swallow the corpse, and the other is good acting skills I was forced to finish it... I couldn't bear to let it go, I couldn't bear to let it go, because I had been receiving it from the beginning, alas.

Just by looking at the title, it seems that it doesn't make much sense, but when I see the content that is different from the original plot, I feel that the logic of the plot is clear, the concept is clever, and the protagonist is very clever. In addition, the description of the food is also surprisingly good. Bonus points. In short: it's great!

It feels pretty good, and I'm starting to feel more immersed in it, just like the book Lord of Ten Thousand Nights that shocked me so deeply. Of course, that book is number one in a certain novel, so it's still far from it, but I can vaguely see the shadow of that book in this book.

It's very well written, but your butterfly effect is too strong, I really can't stand it [face covering] [face covering] (Ling's worries are gone)

Should we try to bring that (fairy spirit) back later qwq, otherwise it will be a bit difficult to handle. If the plot collapses, it will not be particularly easy to write, because if this robot is gone, it may lead to the loss of some main lines and branch lines, and some bonds will be missing qwq

It's a pretty good novel. The protagonist's character is also my favorite type. Too many fan novels have protagonists who are too crazy and just put on the pretense. This novel is better written and logically clear. It's worth reading.

It has certain logic and writing skills. The rating may be too low due to the subject matter, title, and content of the first few chapters. If you have been exposed to Ju00 Zone, be patient and read a few chapters. It is the best work of Ju00 Zone. In the early stage of Tomato, the good swordsman is a big sacrifice. It may be better to change the data of Cave Thief. It can be done secretly to help her escape, which is better than death.

Give yourself a thumbs up for trying to write fan fiction for the first time!

Remember to play "Faded" (0.9X speed is best) when hunting for prey in this article [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's okay. I personally think it's pretty good. Although I felt a little awkward at the beginning, it's still very good overall. I hope the author will update more and not be a eunuch. I hope I'll read more and make this book longer.

The protagonist's acting was flawless and had everyone dancing around. The ability to gain the opponent's traits by eating something is very useful. Two updates a day are very stable. As long as the author does not have any accidents, I will be there.

It's good-looking, even though it doesn't have a high rating, but it's well-written. In addition, it may be a bit dissuasive in the early stage. You can choose to skip a part, but the later part is still very interesting. It's a pity that the later part is not finished. The subsequent plot is presented in the form of summary. I can't help it. There are too few people to read it, so I can't write it down.

This book is just like "JoJo's Bizarre Adventure". The name is as disgusting as frog peeing, but the content will definitely make you happy!

The description of the main character eating Yi Ke raw made me want to eat it too. I wonder if the Nineveh cuisine of the same type as the main character is sold [Thoughts] Even though I'm a fan, I can still understand it without playing the game.

Very good, very good. Please update it soon. It is the most comfortable and best fanfic I have ever read. The protagonist has brains, is decisive enough, has a great personality, the story is very smooth, and he has changed his style, which is very good. Come on

This protagonist is really awesome with his body.

Not outrageous, have your own ideas, don't just follow the official plot The only drawback is that there are a lot of holes dug and it is difficult to fill them.

I hope there can be more scenes of eating Yiku, I'm hungry [laughs]

The logic is very rigorous, the protagonist's brain is fine, and he takes the initiative to become stronger. It's a rare good book.

Very nice to look at, the logic is clear, the characters have not changed, and the plot is smooth.

He dares to love and go out. He can eat YiHai to increase his ability to survive. The YiHai is very interesting. I recommend watching it😁

No, this book has 190,000 words, so why does it only have 18 reviews?

I said there are a lot of perfect book reviews but the overall score is not high [Thinking] It turns out there were four mid-points earlier [Thoughts]

Very nice! ! Why is there no one? ! The character of the protagonist is also to my liking, and the supporting characters are not brainless either! [Cry]

Show me your teeth! I want to see this mouth! !

It feels like the author is also trying to give the protagonist a reasonable background version in his writing. This book deserves to be pushed to the top

From a common sense perspective, it's okay.

This book is good, I like it

A good book