The Gu World: When the Rings of Time Resound, the Immortal Venerable Appears

It's pretty cool. This is the first time I've seen Bai Ningbing travel through time. However, I feel that Fang Lao Mo would not blame the kindness he showed towards Bai Ning Bing so quickly on the real demon in the world. I think he should have a long-term suspicion of the protagonist and constantly speculate on the protagonist's intentions. When they met the Gu Yue tribe later, Bai Ningbing helped her cover up. I think it would be better to intersperse a paragraph of Gu Yue Fang Yuan's guess about his purpose.

I want to see the protagonist's angry expression when she becomes a girl [laughing]

For the first time to myself [cool]

The subject matter written by the author is very novel, and the protagonist Bai Ningbing surprised me. It was a pleasant surprise. Here's a suggestion: don't give so many chapters to other characters. For example, Fang Zheng and Fang Yuan can accept more solo roles. Sometimes you have to write several chapters just for a supporting character who is not the protagonist. I still want to see the main plot development of the protagonist [Like]

It's wonderful, but it's too short. I finished it by accident. Come on.

It's pretty good, but it feels like some parts are a bit too dramatic. It's best not to depict reality after traveling through time, otherwise it will feel separated from the plot. Overall, it's not bad. I really like the character Bai Ningbing.

Isn't this Fang Yuan a little too kind? Sorry, I didn't say it

Just don't stop updating, work hard and watch the sky full of stars with the immortals side by side. Just kidding, the mortal world is so colorful, Bingbing is going to give birth to seven cubs

Come on, the content is good