Canterlot High's Hapless Detective

If nothing else, this will be the best Equestria Girls fanfic so far. While restoring the original work, it can also highlight the protagonist without squeezing out other characters. In this regard, it is better than most fan fiction. There is also the protagonist. In fact, for me, a fanfic needs two things to be excellent: 1. Restore the original characters. This is actually the easiest thing to do in an animation like My Little Pony Girls where every character has a distinct personality. 2. Write your own original parts well. This is the part that best shows the author's writing skills, so it is the most difficult. Currently, there are only five fan fictions I have read that can do it, and this is one of them. Finally, cheers to the author👍 I hope you can write more Haokande [Like]

It's a good watch. I finished reading it in one sitting yesterday afternoon. The emotional line is not frigid, but the plot development is the same. It feels a bit like Asasi + the persecuted classic light novel male protagonist, and the detective part is also very interesting. It's a sickly but not overly pretentious plot, so that's okay. I hope it's just ambiguous, the real harem is so weird, I won't read the stock trading article, or I can just write a side story at the end. Update soon🥺🥲😭😡

It is currently a mid-opening story. The writing is a bit complicated at the beginning, but it is not very good later on. The portrayal of the protagonist is simply too perfect, and the plot is also quite good, but the background story is a bit messy. Generally speaking, it is at the top of the masterpiece, and it is half a masterpiece. I hope it will be longer and the ending will be better. Xiao Ma can be regarded as having a magical book.

The writing is smooth, the punctuation marks are used correctly, and the paragraphs are quite comfortable. It has surpassed 90% of Tomato books. As for the plot, the main character is very clear, and there is a lot of original content. There is no OOC, and it is considered the best among pony fans.

I've read more than half of it, but I probably won't read any further. Overall, I feel aggrieved, compromised, vain and resigned. But other comments said it was a redemption. Maybe I am really not suitable for reading this type of article. But I can't put down my bowl and scold my mother, so I give it five stars. I hope the author can have more appreciative readers

Excellent and full character creation and interaction, maybe a little raw in some places, but the emotions are really realistic. I am optimistic about you, the author. If you open a new book or change the platform, you must say something in the group 666, don't accept any of the main lines, only write the if line. If you are a tall person, why are you so pretentious? If you can't be a husband, why can't you grow old by your side?

It's three hours of hard control, but it's too short and not enough to watch. I feel that the characters are brought to life, especially the three siren sisters, who only have one theatrical version in the original work. They can be written in such an impressive way. The portrayal of the protagonist is also something. The author has worked hard to write something really great. I look forward to the following plots.

Super nice little post. 1: The character descriptions of each character are consistent with the original work, and the writing style is also good. From the text, you can clearly imagine the scene and feel like you are watching an animation. The descriptions of M6 and other characters (the three siren sisters and the princess sisters) are also very vivid. 2: The setting of the protagonist is also very novel and unique, and the occasional jokes and jokes are just right. From the author's arrangement and emotional lines of the characters, it can be seen that it is not a brainless harem flow (the female protagonist is inexplicably moved by herself and gives herself away, and the male protagonist naturally accepts it). The protagonist has a rational attitude towards the favor and affection from other characters, which reflects the delicate and not casual feelings of the male protagonist. 3: Although I have never watched My Little Pony Equestria Girls, it does not affect my reading of the article. The plot is stable and has no poisonous points. Even book lovers who have not watched the original animation can safely consume it. 4: According to the foreshadowing laid by the author in the article, it can be seen that there may be several different routes in the ending. For example: the male protagonist recovers his memory and returns to reality, recovers his memory and chooses to stay, a decisive battle with world rules or a similar behind-the-scenes boss, and a world reset line. (Personal guess) But I still hope that the author can give a good ending. All in all, this is a very good and beautiful Pony novel. The author is also very productive. I hope he can follow the outline steadily to the end and not end hastily (please, it's so hard to find such a book that suits my appetite). I also hope that the content of the article will be basically daily-based, with appropriate battles (there shouldn't be battles, right?). I also hope that the author will have time and energy to write about the world of Equestria and give Twilight Sparkle and Big Sister more opportunities to appear. Come on, author, I will always support you! [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates] It looks good, I love reading it, I like reading it. The author please update it quickly [crazy] [crazy]

I have read the food-grade pony novels, and currently have completed the pony line and the siren line. Friends who like ponies can take a look, Chinese people don't lie to Chinese people! ! ! The author's writing style is very good, the emotional description is very good, the characterization is very detailed and consistent with the personality, and the plot of the story is arranged in an orderly manner. The appearance of the IF line is the finishing touch, allowing each character to have a sweet love with the protagonist. The only small flaw is the update problem, but fortunately, I am a high school student and I usually don't have time to read it. Sometimes I can read a few chapters at a time. Finally, author, when will you arrange for my senior sister? I am almost going crazy. Of course, if the author has his own rules, he should write according to his own ideas. I wish the author good health, a happy family, a happy life, wealth and beauty, and more updates. Every chapter of your novel is the reason why I love life

It's great. It's the best book I've seen in My Little Pony. It has its own story and the plot is well integrated. I think fans don't like most of the author's original plots, which are either sensational or very inconsistent. This book is very well integrated. It's extremely comfortable to read. It's not inconsistent. The character is well developed. He's an awkward detective. I I read it in one sitting without any feeling of boredom. It has a little bit of Sherlock Holmes elements added into it. The only thing is that I don't like the sad part. I don't like the life experience very much, but it also explains why the protagonist has such a character. Of course, it is a matter of personal preference. I am not impressed by the look and feel of the whole book. I highly recommend it! ! !

As one of the few Equestria Girls fans, Calilum's image is very vivid, whether it's the way he's always physically attacked by villains and his obsession with hats that don't match his clothes. I won't say more to avoid spoilers. I'm looking forward to the development of the story.

I like this. Ordinary and everyday. I hope to receive them all. It's up to you, the author.

So far, the writing is quite good. I hope the author can integrate the protagonist into the events of Equestria as soon as possible, and the emotional line is also quite anime-like. In addition, I hope the author can add more original detective and daily stories about the protagonist himself. Finally, if it is a multi-female main line, I hope the author can write it well and not let down the feelings of the girls. I will say another thing about the single female protagonist. The author's writing style is quite good. Overall, this novel has no poisonous points so far. I hope the author can keep writing without being a eunuch. Come on!

There is no doubt that it is good-looking, and Lauca is getting better and better. I hope the author can add more daily and emotional scenes. Dwdd is a bit slow in updating and it is not enough to watch. Oh, and there is also a linkage, the strongest pony vs. The strongest human being🤓

Very beautiful, highly recommended The character design of the protagonist and the setting of the opportunity to travel through time are very novel. It is not the kind of casual "I time-traveled to the XXX world" which is good. The story has twists and turns, and I feel like it could actually be twisted a little more. In the universe princess of Equestria (it's too long, I can't remember her name), I know that because of Starlight Glimmer (forgot the name of the academy), she lost her memory and completely merged into this world, unable to go back. The protagonist's insistence on traveling through time for so long became a joke. I thought, if there was no amnesia, the protagonist would be able to go home if he persisted for a while. I was ready to take the knife. But the protagonist was so calm. I thought it was brewing for a while before bursting out, but in the end he just accepted the world. The writing is very good, and I am very satisfied with the daily writing. The characters are very suitable for the personality. The protagonist is vaguely different from the others. The contrast is particularly well written. Even at the beginning of the plot, it vaguely feels like a big sword is going to be fired, which makes the reader's heart hang up. However, in the end, there is not much of the sword, which feels a bit strange. It's still being serialized and I'm looking forward to the next stories.

It's so beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, it's written on Tomato that this is the only one about My Little Pony Racer that is about Equestria, and it's very well written (✪▽✪)! ! !

A great work that adds a lot of unique color to the protagonist. The emotional expression is also very good. The story doesn't drag on, and the pace is tight. I didn't expect that even though it was already over 100 chapters, the protagonist would reconcile with the past in a way that I didn't expect. I thought the protagonist would split into two, after a series of adventures. I thought that the current protagonist would stay in this world. What I think is the case is that the main character is split into two. After the adventure, the former protagonist returned to the original world line, and the current protagonist remains in this world. I'm still a little bit confused about this. But this just proves that the author's writing is really good and the story is wonderful.

This is a rare Equestria girl theme, I must support it

It's good-looking, but the hard part is that it's a pony girl instead of a pony. The story is very realistic after the protagonist regains his memory. It's impossible for people to forget about their previous identities after time travel (except for orphans) Those who can be in the top three of the recommendation list are definitely not just ordinary people [Thinking]

It's great [crying], it's so well written. This is the most beautiful and touching My Little Pony book I've ever read. The setting of the protagonist is really great. Come on, author, don't let it end. Although it's a bit bad to say this, I still hope that the author will have a harem. I prefer harem stories. Of course, it doesn't matter if I don't have a harem, but this book is true and it looks into my heart. If a harem is added, it will be even more perfect.

It's very good. I hope there will be a female protagonist [laughing and crying]

The Equestria Girls fanfic is the best one I have read so far. I basically read the latest chapter in one go. I have never read Equestria Girls before. After reading the author's book, I really liked the three siren girls. I deleted some of the plot. The siren's song in the animation is also very good. The author will work hard to update it! ! !

Now that I have read it, if there are book friends who don't know what this book is like, let me tell you first. The writing is very good, and the author's emotions are on point. His handling of the case has the shadow of Ya Shenyue, unlike other Marvin protagonists who are very silly, and there is systematic help. Our encouragement is the motivation for the author to persevere. I hope the author can persevere.

After the chase is over, the one in the main plot who has a clear affection for the protagonist is Ma Mu. In addition, after watching the if love line (I hate the lifespan theory [crying]), I hope that the main storyline of Ma Mu can have more plot, and I hope that Ma Mu's relationship with the protagonist can have a better ending. (The main plot of the harem is actually quite good, as long as it's not about stock trading and the ending is ambiguous and you can just choose one.)

It looks good, the main character is just like the one in the animation, very real

The plot is high-quality, the writing is fresh, and the subject matter of Equestria Girls is rare. The protagonist has a distinct original character, the original characters are not broken, and the daily descriptions are quite good. A rare masterpiece!

The characters are really well drawn and vivid, and the protagonist's personality is also very distinct and perfect. I hope there are more girls. The author had better not have a knife (otherwise I can only send the author some souvenirs)

Very good, the plot is novel and interesting, and it does not deliberately add fantasy or forcefully promote Chinese things, keep it up

Original plot, excellent writing skills, and the emotional line of the Equestria girls that I really want to see. I can only say that you, the author, are really great! ! !

This book can really be regarded as the best among pony fanfics. It combines the main line with daily life, and the main line does not leave behind the daily life. It is also very beautiful and interesting to write. And although the author's writing style cannot be said to be particularly good, he can write each character very well. The author must continue to update [top post]. When you are not inspired, you can be late for a day or two, but don't stop updating [code]