Canterlot High’s Hapless Detective

If nothing else, this will be the best Equestria Girls fanfic so far. While restoring the original work, it can also highlight the protagonist without squeezing out other characters. In this regard, it is better than most fan fiction. There is also the protagonist. In fact, for me, a fanfic needs two things to be excellent: 1. Restore the original characters. This is actually the easiest thing to do in an animation like My Little Pony Girls where every character has a distinct personality. 2. Write your own original parts well. This is the part that best shows the author's writing skills, so it is the most difficult. Currently, there are only five fan fictions I have read that can do it, and this is one of them. Finally, cheers to the author👍 I hope you can write more Haokande 👍

It's a good watch. I finished reading it in one sitting yesterday afternoon. The emotional line is not frigid, but the plot development is the same. It feels a bit like Asasi + the persecuted classic light novel male protagonist, and the detective part is also very interesting. It's a sickly but not overly pretentious plot, so that's okay. I hope it's just ambiguous, the real harem is so weird, I won't read the stock trading article, or I can just write a side story at the end. Update soon🥺🥲😭😡

It is currently a mid-opening story. The writing is a bit complicated at the beginning, but it is not very good later on. The portrayal of the protagonist is simply too perfect, and the plot is also quite good, but the background story is a bit messy. Generally speaking, it is at the top of the masterpiece, and it is half a masterpiece. I hope it will be longer and the ending will be better. Xiao Ma can be regarded as having a magical book.

The writing is smooth, the punctuation marks are used correctly, and the paragraphs are quite comfortable. It has surpassed 90% of Tomato books. As for the plot, the main character is very clear, and there is a lot of original content. There is no OOC, and it is considered the best among pony fans.

Excellent and full character creation and interaction, maybe a little raw in some places, but the emotions are really realistic. I am optimistic about you, the author. If you open a new book or change the platform, you must say something in the group 666, don't accept any of the main lines, only write the if line. If you are a tall person, why are you so pretentious? If you can't be a husband, why can't you grow old by your side?

I've read more than half of it, but I probably won't read any further. Overall, I feel aggrieved, compromised, vain and resigned. But other comments said it was a redemption. Maybe I am really not suitable for reading this type of article. But I can't put down my bowl and scold my mother, so I give it five stars. I hope the author can have more appreciative readers

Super nice little post. 1: The character descriptions of each character are consistent with the original work, and the writing style is also good. From the text, you can clearly imagine the scene and feel like you are watching an animation. The descriptions of M6 and other characters (the three siren sisters and the princess sisters) are also very vivid. 2: The setting of the protagonist is also very novel and unique, and the occasional jokes and jokes are just right. From the author's arrangement and emotional lines of the characters, it can be seen that it is not a brainless harem flow (the female protagonist is inexplicably moved by herself and gives herself away, and the male protagonist naturally accepts it). The protagonist has a rational attitude towards the favor and affection from other characters, which reflects the delicate and not casual feelings of the male protagonist. 3: Although I have never watched My Little Pony Equestria Girls, it does not affect my reading of the article. The plot is stable and has no poisonous points. Even book lovers who have not watched the original animation can safely consume it. 4: According to the foreshadowing laid by the author in the article, it can be seen that there may be several different routes in the ending. For example: the male protagonist recovers his memory and returns to reality, recovers his memory and chooses to stay, a decisive battle with world rules or a similar behind-the-scenes boss, and a world reset line. (Personal guess) But I still hope that the author can give a good ending. All in all, this is a very good and beautiful Pony novel. The author is also very productive. I hope he can follow the outline steadily to the end and not end hastily (please, it's so hard to find such a book that suits my appetite). I also hope that the content of the article will be basically daily-based, with appropriate battles (there shouldn't be battles, right?). I also hope that the author will have time and energy to write about the world of Equestria and give Twilight Sparkle and Big Sister more opportunities to appear. Come on, author, I will always support you! 😘[Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates] It looks good, I love reading it, I like reading it. The author please update it quickly 😫 😫

It's three hours of hard control, but it's too short and not enough to watch. I feel that the characters are brought to life, especially the three siren sisters, who only have one theatrical version in the original work. They can be written in such an impressive way. The portrayal of the protagonist is also something. The author has worked hard to write something really great. I look forward to the following plots.

I have read the food-grade pony novels, and currently have completed the pony line and the siren line. Friends who like ponies can take a look, Chinese people don't lie to Chinese people!!! The author's writing style is very good, the emotional description is very good, the characterization is very detailed and consistent with the personality, and the plot of the story is arranged in an orderly manner. The appearance of the IF line is the finishing touch, allowing each character to have a sweet love with the protagonist. The only small flaw is the update problem, but fortunately, I am a high school student and I usually don't have time to read it. Sometimes I can read a few chapters at a time. Finally, author, when will you arrange for my senior sister? I am almost going crazy. Of course, if the author has his own rules, he should write according to his own ideas. I wish the author good health, a happy family, a happy life, wealth and beauty, and more updates. Every chapter of your novel is the reason why I love life

It's great. It's the best book I've seen in My Little Pony. It has its own story and the plot is well integrated. I think fans don't like most of the author's original plots, which are either sensational or very inconsistent. This book is very well integrated. It's extremely comfortable to read. It's not inconsistent. The character is well developed. He's an awkward detective. I I read it in one sitting without any feeling of boredom. It has a little bit of Sherlock Holmes elements added into it. The only thing is that I don't like the sad part. I don't like the life experience very much, but it also explains why the protagonist has such a character. Of course, it is a matter of personal preference. I am not impressed by the look and feel of the whole book. I highly recommend it!!!