Dormitory Girls’ Survival: Starting on an Endless Train

The first part is actually average, with some logical flaws, and the writing skills are relatively shallow, but the writing becomes obviously better as you get to the later part. I can distinguish the four protagonists and each has their own highlight. The writing style is becoming more and more mature, and I can fill in the pitfalls. Hope it gets better and better

The first time we met was finally not "the infinite flow is silent, it is just a distortion of human nature" or "the lovers are silent, it is a blind betrayal of each other". Even in the infinite world, humanity will not be annihilated, and humanity will always shine!

The book is very good, suitable for novices who just want to have fun. It is very suitable for me. I need to read something like this to have the strength to live! Let me tell you from the aspect of loving girls. I am sure that there is no cp. The friendship between the four girls is also very good. I have not seen any negative female images for the time being. There are many different female images. They are definitely not stereotyped, but I have not completely let go of some thoughts that are not very fond of girls. For example, several heroines still have long hair and one mentioned using shark clips. I know it must have been written casually by the author, but there are indeed readers who responded in the comments, but the author was very patient in replying! This is a good point for the author, and there is also a trace of the class beauty (it is just a memory of the previous college life. I know this is just to show the charm of one of the heroines, such as her bravery, strong inner self-consistency, etc.), But I still feel that it is wrong for both boys and girls in the article to think that she is the class beauty, because this word is equivalent to denying the heroine's personal charm and only recognizes her in a sexual relationship. But if the author wants to not stigmatize the term "class beauty", I also understand it, but now many people still think it is a "good word" Maybe, but it's not appropriate to praise our heroine in a post-apocalyptic novel. This is my first long review, because it's really hard to come across such a post-apocalyptic novel without cp group portraits that doesn't insult women (I'll praise him again. He scolded his father in the article and didn't insult women).

This book really appeals to my taste. It has a pure team feel. Every girl is considered a main force of the team, and the image is very clear [Sending Hearts] I hope it won't stop updating, write well, it will definitely become popular! I really love it. The subject matter is novel and the characters are vivid. It doesn't feel like in the usual team novels where one person is the main writer and others surround the protagonist. [Send my heart] This is a real team novel! I also like the supporting characters in it, especially the burning couple, it's such a warm and pure love [sending my heart] Finally, the author, you should try your best to make the large dungeon more interesting and novel. I personally feel that the dungeon on the train is not that good, but Zombie City is more interesting. Keep up the good work [I learned it] [I learned it]

Yes, you can specifically mark group portraits of women in the introduction. Some works of female channels say they are group portraits, but they are actually group portraits of men. The number of women included is not as high as that of the male channel next door. It is difficult to find an outstanding female character. Duan's review has a very poor impression, and there are too many obscene ideas about sex. There are two different things between picking up candies and having sex out of nothing. Some of the comments are purely offensive, and the classic one is to circle the world and be cute when you get involved in sex.

Let's talk about the pros and cons. It's already tied. It doesn't make sense to me. Advantages: The plot is quite attractive, the characters are portrayed in a more detailed and realistic way, and there are very thoughtful biographies. The group portraits of the authors are pretty good, and I can see the author's progress. Disadvantages: There is one thing that I really can't stand. If the author doesn't know about the second dimension or a certain series, he doesn't have to write about it. When writing about Japan's second dimension, he mentioned Sakura many times, but every time it was Magical Girl Sakura, not Card Captor Sakura. It was obviously confused with Madoka. People who really understand are very concerned about this. The title of the series, whether in Japanese or English, means the card, and the series does not say that she is magic. The most awkward thing is when Sakura is summoned later, I can say that it is completely OOC. I have definitely watched the first season of Sakura more than ten times today. I just watched it again today. It has no character at all. It made me scratch my toes while watching it. There are too many bad jokes and very deliberate ancient poems. The overall atmosphere I feel is relatively relaxed. This is an advantage and a disadvantage. There is no sense of survival tension. Go low and go high.

When I saw copy 2, I couldn't help but review the book! This is the best doomsday team novel I have ever read! ! ! Everyone is really super united. When they encounter bad guys, they all respond to each other in a unanimous manner, and the way they deal with them is also very refreshing. Moreover, the author's writing style is particularly good, and the description of the environment and details are handled very appropriately. The second dungeon was really exciting towards the end, and the little diary in their dormitory was also very touching. Time flows like water, and as everyone gets along and adapts, the years pass quietly. "Everyone's names may be repeated, but the meaning they represent is that they are all unique." "Because when the sun comes out, the stars disappear!" "I am also very happy." "Not just now. Just like unknown surprises come quietly, people are often happiest when they are close to happiness." It is really a very good doomsday group portrait article! ! ! Highly recommended, everyone should come and see it! ! ! Moreover, the characters of the four people are also very distinct. Help when you should be helpful, and be indifferent when you should be indifferent. Thank you very much, author! It also made me eat fine chaff [crying] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [almost crying] [almost crying]

I saw more than 100 pictures, so I couldn't help but come here and write a good review. It is really the best group portrait article I have ever seen on unlimited streaming of female videos without CP. The author's world view setting is very complete, focusing on people, from small to large, as if all the water will eventually flow into the sea. What this writing method brings is that every character has his shining point, no matter whether this person is the protagonist, but everyone is his own protagonist. At the same time, I think this is the tradition of our flower growers. God does not bless it, but I bless it. And this makes me think it is a very good group portrait. The protagonist is the protagonist because he has his shining points, and the supporting character is not just a background board. She has her own anger, sorrow, and growth experience. A person can be a flower, grass, or tree. We are rooted in the same land. I will not think you are weak because you are grass, nor will you be unable to climb because you are a tree. We are family, a community bathing in the sun together in the same forest. Therefore, I give this novel a five-star rating and recommend it with a long review. This makes me feel that the writing is online, the content and worldview are well constructed, and the underlying logic is strong. It is a very complete and beautiful novel.

I haven't watched too much. I watched it in the comic series at first and it was pretty good. After I started reading the novel, I felt that the writing style was a bit average, but I could read it without too many flaws. However, the viewpoints in it felt like they were from several years ago and were not in line with today's female values. There will also be some childish decisions and deliberate jokes, which eliminate a lot of the sense of immersion and make it very dramatic. I read the comments that the later stage is better, so keep reading. No way, when I read Chapter 60 or 70, the writing was too suspended. There are still people dying after experiencing the apocalypse. Everyone is just like everyone who has nothing to do. There is no transition in the transition. They play hip-hop and there is no feeling of being in the apocalypse. The levels inside are also quite boring. The questions are based on public exams, brain teasers, common sense, etc. They are very confusing and have no meaning. The protagonists showed off all the way, not by themselves, but by the author. Everyone should know what benefits they got, and then described others' "surprise" and "admiration". When others were not full to eat and their lives were in danger, they laughed and made noise around others. The same is true for NPCs. They have to be very partial to the protagonist group, and they have to "ignore" other people in front of hundreds of people, making it convenient for the protagonist group. Others think it is "unfair". At this time, they can brag about how powerful the protagonist group is. . . Anyway, let's just watch it. It doesn't make any noise at all, and the jokes are cliche, boring, and rigid. Many people's "funnyness" in a survival article is very bizarre and suspended.

I like the highlighted female characters. I also like that everyone works together to help each other. But the emotional rendering is not handled well. A moment ago, I was very sad and depressed, but I could be persuaded by someone to cheer me up and immediately become happy and find hope. There are not a few such fragments. They are basically found in every few chapters. I hope the author can pay attention to them.