Ni Qing, the last girl in the world to awaken the blood of the ancient Eastern gods, suddenly suffered a disaster and was transformed by a Western vampire. Just because she wanted to know what would happen if the blood of the Western vampires and the blood of the ancient Eastern gods were combined. Ni Qing was unwilling to surrender and killed the second-generation vampire who had transformed her.
Reader comments
Thanks to the push from the homepage, I read a female-oriented novel for the first time. I don't know if I'm a boy and I'm qualified to comment (laughs)
The center of the novel is the relationship and daily life between the female protagonist and several male protagonists. The content is quite satisfactory and the writing is okay, but it has a few flaws.
The protagonist's image is not three-dimensional enough, and the background at the beginning has almost no effect on shaping the heroine's character. I still don't understand the heroine after reading 100 chapters. I just think she is a simple good person (crossed out, good vampire). She has no characteristics of her own. Blandness is also a characteristic, but the heroine's blandness is a bit too much.
The main plot is not clear enough, which is probably due to the beginning. It is obviously a sweet love story, but there is a big line in the background at the beginning. So by chapter 100, there is not much progress, except for the introduction of another person. If it is just a love story, the background should not be so big. If the author has his own rhythm, when I didn't say
The characters in this novel are not vivid enough and made me feel like strangers. To put it in layman's terms, even if one of them dies, I won't be able to empathize or feel sad. The characters in good works must have clear personalities. The characters of God-Slayer in the male video, Dream of Red Mansions, and the Dragon Tribe of Jiangnan Old Thieves are all perfectly created, and even just one character can attract readers to continue reading.
After all, the author has just started writing novels, so it is normal for them not to be attractive enough. If you read the beginning and don't get your interest, I also hope you can continue reading and provide more comments. People are not born with knowledge, how can they be free from confusion. If there are any shortcomings, just point them out and make corrections. Anyway, I didn't write them (justifiably).
My Chinese reading comprehension and composition have never been very good. If you have a better understanding or opinion, please correct me.
Thanks to the push from the homepage, I read a female-oriented novel for the first time. I don't know if I'm a boy and I'm qualified to comment (laughs) The center of the novel is the relationship and daily life between the female protagonist and several male protagonists. The content is quite satisfactory and the writing is okay, but it has a few flaws. The protagonist's image is not three-dimensional enough, and the background at the beginning has almost no effect on shaping the heroine's character. I still don't understand the heroine after reading 100 chapters. I just think she is a simple good person (crossed out, good vampire). She has no characteristics of her own. Blandness is also a characteristic, but the heroine's blandness is a bit too much. The main plot is not clear enough, which is probably due to the beginning. It is obviously a sweet love story, but there is a big line in the background at the beginning. So by chapter 100, there is not much progress, except for the introduction of another person. If it is just a love story, the background should not be so big. If the author has his own rhythm, when I didn't say The characters in this novel are not vivid enough and made me feel like strangers. To put it in layman's terms, even if one of them dies, I won't be able to empathize or feel sad. The characters in good works must have clear personalities. The characters of God-Slayer in the male video, Dream of Red Mansions, and the Dragon Tribe of Jiangnan Old Thieves are all perfectly created, and even just one character can attract readers to continue reading. After all, the author has just started writing novels, so it is normal for them not to be attractive enough. If you read the beginning and don't get your interest, I also hope you can continue reading and provide more comments. People are not born with knowledge, how can they be free from confusion. If there are any shortcomings, just point them out and make corrections. Anyway, I didn't write them (justifiably). My Chinese reading comprehension and composition have never been very good. If you have a better understanding or opinion, please correct me.