Newbie writing, please give me some light comments
Strive for daily updates and seek love and care
Frankly speaking, I'm not very good at writing cp
So they should be business partners
Enter with caution
The novel is also known as: Even if you are nine thousand years old, you can still be a good person.
In the square Forbidden City, people come and go.
Power is a splendid treasure that everyone flocks to;
Some people rely on strategy, careful planning, and success every step of the way;
Some people rely on their power to exert strong pressure and become unstoppable;
Some people rely on their eloquence to lobby and gain fame;
By various means, the Eight Immortals crossed the sea, each showing their magical powers
Only Ruyi, relying on Yi syndrome,
In this Forbidden City
Shake the mushrooms immediately on the wall
I can't argue with you, squatting in the rear position
Seemingly peaceful
In fact, greed for too much and greed for enough
He just wants to find a future
She just wants to survive to please
But because of that disease, he lost everything in one careless move.
Now I have this chance to change my life.
Why can't we have a fight?
When I enter Zhongzhong, I want to climb up step by step.
It's not like this nine thousand years old can't be taken seriously.
The source of inspiration is Wei Zhongxian, and Zhao Gao from the TV series Myth
Reader comments
The highlight is: the setting is novel! The world of Yi Zheng, monsters, strange beasts... Does not have the taste of a spoiled wife, a delicate taste, or a female rivalry. Even if Wan Zhong is no longer a romantic partner, it would still be nice to start a career together. Looking forward to seeing Wanwan and Jinzhong fighting together. I feel that the author is very clear about human nature and interpersonal relationships, and it gave me some inspiration: a veteran in the workplace pretends to have a relationship with the boss in front of newcomers, and pretends that she has a backing to let others please her, so that she can get benefits and stay in the workplace for a longer period of time - just like tricking Su Luyun, each trick is accurate. Don't get close to people with evil intentions and try not to interact with them - every time Su Luyun chats with Jinyuyan, he will be led astray by Jinyuyan... It's really interesting. Big cheers for the author!
The highlight is: the setting is novel! The world of Yi Zheng, monsters, strange beasts... Does not have the taste of a spoiled wife, a delicate taste, or a female rivalry. Even if Wan Zhong is no longer a romantic partner, it would still be nice to start a career together. Looking forward to seeing Wanwan and Jinzhong fighting together. I feel that the author is very clear about human nature and interpersonal relationships, and it gave me some inspiration: a veteran in the workplace pretends to have a relationship with the boss in front of newcomers, and pretends that she has a backing to let others please her, so that she can get benefits and stay in the workplace for a longer period of time - just like tricking Su Luyun, each trick is accurate. Don't get close to people with evil intentions and try not to interact with them - every time Su Luyun chats with Jinyuyan, he will be led astray by Jinyuyan... It's really interesting. Big cheers for the author!
Da Ru is definitely a big demon