Siheyuan: This Zhu Is a Bit of a Casanova

It's very interesting. It would be perfect if Silly Zhu directly gave his father an idea and the White Widow, who had been a prostitute for a while, came back to find a wife.

Can you give me some encouragement for a newbie author?

The writing is good, although it is a bit short, but it is still a bit enjoyable to watch. There is no disgusting shit, and you can use the rules to punish the beasts. Although there is a golden finger, it is not relied on much... The relationship between the characters is reasonably described, and the language, especially the scolding, is very good...

Although it is not perfect, it is already very good as a short story. The three uncles and aunts in the original plot are all bottomless existences in the eyes of modern people. To the Siheyuan, the Jia family is more like an enlarged version of Banggan and Jia Zhang. They are both conniving with a backer and no bottom line, resulting in the Jia family's bottomless demands, and everything is unfair. The root cause should actually be the eldest mother. Because of the aunt's meticulous care, the deaf old lady can devote herself to guiding the first master to control the courtyard. Silly Zhu is the thug, the Jia family is the stain and heir, Xu Damao is the representative of the resistance of the courtyard, the second and third uncles are the lackeys, and the other minor ones are the targets of suppression. Later, after the Jia family man died, Shazhu gained another money bag identity, but the heir was determined from the beginning. Therefore, the old lady, the first man's family, the Jia family, and Shazhu are all indispensable. In the later period, after the old lady died, only three families were left, forming an unbreakable triangle. The first man inherited the old lady's methods, Shazhu inherited the inheritance, and Qin Huairu firmly tied Shazhu. These two parties officially formed an equilateral triangle with the Jia family, and there is no flaw! Even if Lou Xiao'e comes back to visit with her son, it won't be enough. At most, it will just be a large money bag. In fact, ever since Lou Xiao'e left without Silly Pillar, the courtyard has been flawless. Lou Xiao'e later came back just to improve the quality of life of everyone in the courtyard, without any impact!

Why is it only 7.3 Points? It's pretty cool. Those readers who gave me low marks think that it was wrong to have a harem in that era, right? What else is the problem? But what we are reading is a refreshing article. In the book, there are various criticisms against Lao Yi and others. Don't you find it very refreshing? Anyway, I rarely see a book that makes me reluctant to let it go. I didn't feel sleepy even when I saw it at 5 a. M. 😪I was exhausted.

It's okay, there's nothing that I like this or that, there aren't many enemy agents, there aren't many black market antiques, it's a cool article, some ideas are okay

After reading it, it was quite interesting. It was quite violent, but it did take revenge on Silly Zhu. I actually don't understand that in the finale of Siheyuan, Silly Zhu, as the person with the best conditions in Siheyuan, ended up like this. Qin Huairu himself is not a clean person, so there are many fanfics about Silly Zhu [laughing]

The space is made into a ring of heaven and earth, which contains the world of spiritual springs. Drink it for longevity, cure diseases and nourish the skin. Plant some fruits, grains and medicinal materials. The Qiankun Ring brings a cultivation technique. Qiankun Creation Technique, Qiankun Step, Creation Fist, Sun and Moon Divine Eyes, Wuji Sword Technique, God-killing Halberd Technique The realms are divided into Ming Jin, Dark Jin, Hua Jin, Dan Jin, Gang Jin, acquired, innate, and master. Grandmaster level cooking, Chinese medicine, Xingyiquan practice The system traveled through the past and there was nothing. It was selling sheep over dogs. Physical strength, mental strength, and skills. Cooking, Traditional Chinese Medicine, Xingyi Quan, Treasure Appraisal. Can you show me? Let's have a chaos power that controls all elements. It's the most versatile power that can devour and plunder. Come to a space and make a Qiankun ring or Qiankun bead. It contains the world of spiritual springs. Drink it for longevity, cure diseases and nourish the skin. Plant some fruits, grains and medicinal materials. The Qiankun Ring brings a cultivation technique. Qiankun Creation Technique, Qiankun Step, Creation Fist, Sun and Moon Divine Eyes, Wuji Sword Technique, God-killing Halberd Technique The realms are divided into Ming Jin, Dark Jin, Hua Jin, Dan Jin, Gang Jin, acquired, innate, and master. Grandmaster level cooking, Chinese medicine, Xingyiquan, treasure appraisal You can authorize your women and children to enter your own spiritual world. Remember that when the world merges, take your own woman with you

This book is really good. It's not like some Siheyuan novels that say they want to draw a clear line between themselves and other animals or that they want to deal with Yi Zhonghai. I started to cringe after writing two chapters.

It's very beautiful, much more beautiful than those that pull and jump over and over again. It would be great if I could have twelve sons. After all, nine is the ultimate number and twelve is perfection.